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Havas-Pinjre me bulbul - 19th July 2010, 10:54 AM
PINJRE ME BULBUL

Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala,
jism ko odhna bichouna bana dala.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.

istihaar-e-sharaab pe numaish nage badan ki
Masoomiat ko calender ka kona bana dala.

Pinjre me bulbul chahakne se mahroom,
Kismat ka kaisa ye rona bana dala.
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19th July 2010, 12:17 PM
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ahsaas acche aur sacche lage.....keep writing.

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19th July 2010, 12:41 PM
ek samajik vikriti ko ukerti ......
aapki rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe......

likhte rahen...Praveen Ji !



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PINJRE ME BULBUL

Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala,
jism ko odhna bichouna bana dala.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.

istihaar-e-sharaab pe numaish nage badan ki
Masoomiat ko calender ka kona bana dala.

Pinjre me bulbul chahakne se mahroom,
Kismat ka kaisa ye rona bana dala.
komal bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob dil se daad likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath

Aapka Apna
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'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
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Ishk bhai , shukria apka , is hi tarah aap se parerna milti rahegi ye vishwaas hai mujhe.
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Kya kahu Komal saheb.......aapne lajawab kar diya.........jis andaaz me aapne is kadwi haqeeqat ko bayaan kiya hai woh apne aap me ek kamaal hai.........aapki is peshkash ko mera Koti Koti pranaam, yeh sher ne dil dehla diya kasam se.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.
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21st July 2010, 09:40 AM
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namaste!

aapki ees soch ko mai.n salaam kartaa huuN... liKhate rahe.n aage bhee!

KhuSh rahe.n.. duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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PINJRE ME BULBUL

Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala,
jism ko odhna bichouna bana dala.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.

istihaar-e-sharaab pe numaish nage badan ki
Masoomiat ko calender ka kona bana dala.

Pinjre me bulbul chahakne se mahroom,
Kismat ka kaisa ye rona bana dala.
Komal
Bhaut achcha laga
kaash insaan main insaniat hoti to her aurat maan,behen aur baeti hi hoti
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PINJRE ME BULBUL

Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala,
jism ko odhna bichouna bana dala.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.

istihaar-e-sharaab pe numaish nage badan ki
Masoomiat ko calender ka kona bana dala.

Pinjre me bulbul chahakne se mahroom,
Kismat ka kaisa ye rona bana dala.


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ek aurat ke dard ko aapne bakhubi likha hai par ab samay aa gaya hai komal sahab ki aurat ke shashakt hone par kuchh likha jaaye jisse uski hausla afzaii ho aur vo aur tezi se aage badhe

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PINJRE ME BULBUL

Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala,
jism ko odhna bichouna bana dala.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.

istihaar-e-sharaab pe numaish nage badan ki
Masoomiat ko calender ka kona bana dala.

Pinjre me bulbul chahakne se mahroom,
Kismat ka kaisa ye rona bana dala.


aap ne bhut achi gazal likhi hai, jisme aap ne ek aurat ke dard ke ehsas ko in gazalo ke shabdo me dala hai, awasum
Shukria aap ka , Is disha me bahut sara kaam karne ki bhi jaroorat hai.
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ek aurat ke dard ko aapne bakhubi likha hai par ab samay aa gaya hai komal sahab ki aurat ke shashakt hone par kuchh likha jaaye jisse uski hausla afzaii ho aur vo aur tezi se aage badhe

Thanks sandeep ji aapka, aapki baat shi hai, lekin system ki khamio,n ke chalte aaj bhi Aurat ko sharmindgi ke ahsaas se do-chaar hona padta hai.
Aurat sahi artho,n me tabhi powerful hogi jab mumbai-Calcutta aur delhi me chal rahe kotho,n par Aurat ko beparda hone se bachaya jaega. Desh ka nizam chalane wale andhe nahi lekin bahre hain jinhe apni awaj sunaane ke lie aurat ko hi powerful karke aage lana hoga. is mission ke lie sabhi ko mil jul kar Kaam karna chahie.
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PINJRE ME BULBUL


Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala,
jism ko odhna bichouna bana dala.

Vo maa thi bahan thi patni aur beti thi,
Hawaniat ne rishto'n ko bouna bana dala.

istihaar-e-sharaab pe numaish nage badan ki
Masoomiat ko calender ka kona bana dala.

Pinjre me bulbul chahakne se mahroom,
Kismat ka kaisa ye rona bana dala.



Komal Sahab Aadab o Tasleemat,,


Achi Taqleeq pe Dad o Mubarak Baad mustahiq hain app .. Talq Haqeeqath ho Alfazon Ka jama Pahenana Mushkil kaam hai .. Magar apna baqobi Nibhaya hai .. Uske liye eak nahi Hazarah Dad apki nazar qubool karen ..Bouna Ka istemaal Waqai Bahoth qoob kiya hai apne ..wah Uske liye alag se dad ...


Havas ne aurat ka khilouna bana dala Yahan Imle me Ka se Murad Shayad ko hai .. Dekh len ..


Allah apko aur bhi taraqiyun se nawaze .. Khush rahen hamesha ..


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qadeer bhai daad kre lie shukria. Aap jaise dost aur bhi taqat dete hain mujhe. pahle ka ki jagah ko hi likha tha lekin iska kuchh aur sa matalab niklta laga , aurat khud khilouna nahi bani balki uska.
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