 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
"Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa, lutf bhi likho na" |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
  
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
"Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa, lutf bhi likho na" -
16th July 2010, 04:47 PM
Mahfil ko Diya ka aadaab,
ye tahreer mere dil ki bahut kareeb hai ... kucch waqt pahle isse likhi thi .......... aaj is mahfil meiN , sabke saath isse share karna chahati hun.......... umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi ...... Kaisi hogii milan kii, vo ghari likho na mujhse hui thi kaise, dil-lagi likho na hijr ke dard se liptee hue meri yaadeiN Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa, lutf bhi likho na shab-o-sehar rahtaa hai mera hi khiyaal ruut khizaan ki lagti hai bahaar si likho na phool khilata hai aur mehakta hai gulshan bin tere zindagii meri suni suni likho na aankhon ko samundar, surat ko chaand jamaal ki tareef meN, tahreer koi likho na gar yun duur na hoti "Diya" ki basti tujhse deedaar kaise karte tum vo kabhi likho na  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
|
RooH Se RooH Tak
Offline
Posts: 1,247
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 53
|
16th July 2010, 05:00 PM
Quote:
bin tere zindagii meri suni suni likho na aankhon ko samundar, surat ko chaand jamaal ki tareef meN, tahreer koi likho na gar yun duur na hoti "Diya" ki basti tujhse deedaar kaise karte tum vo kabhi likho na ji nice creation.......................  Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 40
Join Date: May 2010
Rep Power: 0
|
16th July 2010, 06:01 PM
relay it's true.I like it.................
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
Anshumali
Offline
Posts: 7,420
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: DELHI (INDIA)
Rep Power: 87
|
16th July 2010, 06:51 PM
aankhon ko samundar, surat ko chaand
jamaal ki tareef meN, tahreer koi likho na Its too good......very Impressive ! Diya Ji ! Arse baad aayii ho......wahi tazgi nazar aai aapke sabhi ashaar me....adaayegi aur rawaangi bhi umdaa lagi mujhe....ek purkashish ghazal .... ! matlaa aur maqtaa bhi khaas jagha bana gaye dil me.... tahe dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen.... Yunhi behtar koshish ke saath aati rahen...aur humesha likhti rahen.... Reps++++++++ khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
beautiful moment.........
Offline
Posts: 6,429
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: u.s.a
Rep Power: 42
|
16th July 2010, 08:16 PM
Diya,
kaisi ho sweetie ??.... kaha ho yaar?? bahut achche kalaam pe dil se daad haazir hai.... keep it up dear.... khush raho... rep++++++++++++++++++++++++ added  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
|
RADHE RADHE
Offline
Posts: 4,115
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: DELHI
Rep Power: 58
|
16th July 2010, 09:08 PM
Quote:
radhe radhe matla aur makta dono hi khoob rahe dil se daad aati rahiye likhti rahiye duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
18th July 2010, 10:06 AM
Quote:
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
18th July 2010, 10:10 AM
Quote:
mahfil mein aate rahiye Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
23rd July 2010, 05:49 PM
Quote:
sukriya Naresh ji , aapko meri tahreer pasand aayi mujhe behat khusi hui yun saath banaye rakhiyega thanx 4 the rep++++++ DuaoN ke saath Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
23rd July 2010, 05:51 PM
Quote:
lamhaa Sweety, main thik hun....aaj kal thora mashroof hun isiliye mahfil ko waqt nahi de pati hun .......... tumhe meri kalam pasand aayi mujhe behat khusi hui daad dilse Qubul hai humesha khus rahna DuaoN ke saath Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#11)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
23rd July 2010, 06:06 PM
Quote:
pyari Diya, Ummeed karta hoon khush hogi, aaj mahfil me aya to yoonhi nazar ja padi aapki kalaam pe.. dekha to dekhta hi rah gaya... bas padhte hue main kahin kho gaya...muddat ke baad kisi romantic aur dard se shumaar is ghazal ko padhkar dil aur rooh dono mutmaeen ho gaye... likhti rahen.. allah aapko barkat aur khushiyaan de... khayal rakhie.. shaad... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#12)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,849
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 32
|
24th July 2010, 01:08 PM
Yeh naya andaaz khoob raha Diya jee.........kafi mushkil raha hoga yeh kalam likhna aur use aapne badi aasani se anjaam diya hai. Yeh khayaal pasandida raha......
hijr ke dard se liptee hue meri yaadeiN Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa, lutf bhi likho na Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#13)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 651
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Chandigarh
Rep Power: 20
|
24th July 2010, 02:36 PM
Quote:
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#14)
|
|
An Incomplite Dream
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
|
25th July 2010, 01:06 AM
Diyaa jee AadaaB!
Wel come back to SDC ............ Aur is khubsurat Gazal per Abhi hi daad kabool kar ljiye ....... KyuN ke aage daad hazam nahi hogi........  Bhai kya zabardasti hai ....... "Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa, lutf bhi likho na" Aray mohtarma agar agla koi shayar ya poet yaa writter hua to thik hai...  Agar koi bussiness men hua to janti hai aap kya likhega......  Chaliye aapko example de deta huN........ LikheNga ke....... Aaj tujhko aadha ghanta yaad kiya.... 100 Rs min ke hisab se 3000Rs ka lose kiya.. Phir teri yaad meiN maiN 3 din bimaar pad gaya 8 ghante per day aur dawa goli ka nuksan alag kiya..... Kuch aise khayaal likh dege janab....... ( Wel yeh sab mazak tha ) sach bhi kaha to kya kar legi aap.... Likhati rahiye...... Khush rahiye...... Khuda Hafez...... 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#15)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 521
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: New Delhi
Rep Power: 18
|
26th July 2010, 09:43 AM
Beautifully written Diya ji! That's all I can say.
Mann |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#16)
|
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
26th July 2010, 07:44 PM
Quote:
aapko meri kalam pasand aayi ,mujhe khusi hui daad dilse kabul hai ab ijazat Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#17)
|
|
devil ! forgive me
Offline
Posts: 930
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: MUMBAI PATIALA
Rep Power: 23
|
26th July 2010, 08:41 PM
umda khyal hai ji bahut hi umda
ati uttam rachna hai diya ji apki is shayra ne sabhi ka man apni lekhni se moh lia is lie sdc pe har or se awaz aa rahi hai vah diya vaah diya vaaah diya 07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
  |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#18)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 608
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Surat (Gujarat)
Rep Power: 35
|
28th July 2010, 03:52 PM
Kaisi hogii milan kii, vo ghari likho na
mujhse hui thi kaise, dil-lagi likho na hijr ke dard se liptee hue meri yaadeiN Aalam-e-tanhaayi kaa, lutf bhi likho na wah wah kyaa khoob likha hai diyaa sahi main reply karne pe majboor kar diyaa in shabdo ne... thank for writing it 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#19)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
|
25th September 2010, 02:39 PM
Quote:
Meri Roshni............lafz nahi kuch kahne ko.....miss u alot. apne kuch ahsaas teri gazal ke saath likhe haiN.....tu samaj hi jayegi ki kya kahna chah rahi hoon. diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
