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udasiyon ki mehfil - 24th September 2005, 06:10 PM

few thoughts............

udaasiyon ki mehfil mein hum doob chale hai
baharon ke chaman ko hum to peeche chor chale hai!

waqt guzarta gaya hai mazil ki talash karte
sab kuch kho ke hum manzil na paa sake hai hum!

kadam duniya ke nit aage hi badte rahe hai
par sab dekh rahe hai hum ussi jagah par hi khade hai!

paani tak nahi mila humein pyaas bujhane ko
aag dil ki sehte rahe hum yu hi jhuke hai!

karte rahein hai intezaar hum dost ke aane ka
saare nikal gaye aage aur kuch peeche rahe hai!

waqt pakad na paaye ab kya jhume hum
dil ki aag mein hum ab to jal chale hai!

humto chahte they zindagi ko peeche chorna par
ye kya hua"jas" khud hi peechad chale hai!



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Deepest From The Heart...Lots Of Flowers :)** - 24th September 2005, 06:20 PM

My Dear, I Can Understand**Ek Gane Ki Bol Hain Aur Wo Aapki Dil Ki Baaton Se Match To Nahin Karegi Lekin Phir Bhi Ye Meri Baat Samajh Lijiyega...Kabhi Sochta Houn Ki Main Kuchh Kahoun~Kabhi Sochta Houn Ki Main Chup Rahoun~Aadmi Jo Kehta Hain Aadmi Jo Sounta Hain_Zindegi Bhar Wo Sadaye Peechha Karti Hain_Aadmi Jo Deta Hain Aadmi Jo Leta Hain_Zindegi Bhar Wo Duwaaen Peechha Karti Hain~Kishore Jee**Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Dher Dher Sare Phoul_Shukriya Quboul Kijiyega **Khuda Aapko Chain De Yehi Duwaaen Rahegi...**Aur Khuda Harr Wo Masoum Dil Ko Salamat Rakhhe~Ameen Summa Ameen **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care**...*God bless You.

*Keep smilling.......**


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**

*Pure Love**
   
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24th September 2005, 06:39 PM

hey jas...vat can i say now..
ven i wrote n showed u today...u said y did u rite like this...
now u hav written soem thin sad...
well....its grt to read..and as i toldu
awsome
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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24th September 2005, 09:34 PM

kiya tha tay unke saath safar-e-zindagi humne,
aaghaaz hone se pehle hi saathi bichhad chale hain....


jas di......
kya kahoon.....kuch nahi keh paaungi yaar......
waise is kalaam se lagta hai ki zindagi kitni unexpected cheezen dikhati hai hume.....esp these lines....

humto chahte they zindagi ko peeche chorna par
ye kya hua"jas" khud hi peechad chale hai!


kabhi kabhi sochte hain ki kuch karna chahte hain aur kuch ho jaata hai......sirf words ki hi taareef karungi......bahut hi badiya ehsaas hai...

try 2 keep on smiling.....

luv u,
KaSaK.......


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Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN ..
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24th September 2005, 10:09 PM

Hi Didi,


Gazal bahoot achhi hai... ise padhate hue ek baat yaad aayi,

kabhi kisi film me ye line aayi hai,, kiske kaha yaad nahi..

"jo waqt ke aage chalate hai aur jo waqt ke pichhe chalate hai dono waqt se haar jaate hai"


isliye mai bas itana jaanti hoon.. jab waqt aansoon deta hai to unhe jabran rokane ki koshish nahi ki jaani chahiye, kyunki usake baad wo khushi ka waqt bhi aata hai aur us waqt me khood ko pichhe ki kisi dard bhari yaad me nahi rona chahiye..

well ye koi comment nahi bas maine apani baat saamane rakhi so don't mind it.

luv u a lot
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27th September 2005, 01:53 AM

tum mujhe apne se lagte ho..
yuN apna dard bayaN karte ho..

hum tum ek rah ke rahi sahi..
par manjil kisi ne ab tak payi nahi..
main duniya ko chor chuka hun
tum kyuN ab aise darte ho...

aa jao meri rah main phir sath
kitum mujhe apne se lagte ho
yun jab apna dard bayan karte ho





Jas bas yahi soch paya tumhare kalaam ke samne kuch khak se alfaaz shayad tumhara dil chu payen .. sath kabhi na cute dua rahegi....

tumhara apna

kunal


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hi - 27th September 2005, 03:46 AM

dear jas at times we feel like this so i can understand ur feelings completely, i wont say dont write sad, cuz write whatever u feel and take it out of ur system so that ur relxed and happy....these tense feeling only create more problems.....but dont forget, after a sad times hapy one always follow sooner or later, it will come for u too


PRiya luv ya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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27th September 2005, 12:17 PM

Dear Jas...Aap ke ye khayalaat bhi hamein bahout
achi lagi...!

Yaha sher kuch khaas laga...sidhe dil main outar gaya...

paani tak nahi mila humein pyaas bujhane ko
aag dil ki sehte rahe hum yu hi jhuke hai!


Younhi likhte rehna...!



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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27th September 2005, 09:21 PM

Ruhani ji,

Bahut achha likha hai, don't know what else to say, bas yun hi likhte rehna aur sadaa khush rehna... take care and keep in touch!

   
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