chalti hai RAIL bhi aye dost...patrian badalte hue....(please read everyone) -
30th June 2005, 05:12 PM
STOLEN POETRY...!!
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maikash
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
---not mine
Last edited by maikasH; 16th April 2006 at 03:21 PM..
Re: chalti hai RAIL bhi aye dost...patrian badalte hue....(please read everyone) -
1st July 2005, 11:53 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by devdasmukherjee Teri talaash main nikle the hum haath malte hue
Rula diya aaj hume suraj ne dhalte hue
Utar Zehan Ke Gaaron Main Roshni-e-Mabood
Zamana Guzar gaya Seenon main dard Paalte Hue
Kisi ghata se kaho, Hum ko ab utha le jaaye
Ke Umar Beet gayi hum ko jalte hue
Yahan to kuch bhi nahi hai siway kaanton ke
Kahan tak aagaye hum is raste par chalte hue
Sikha rahi hai zamane ko zindagi ka chalan
Guzarti hai rail bhi Dewaane, Patrian badalte hue.
it ws awesome jubin... wht to say....bahut bahut bahuuuut.. achha laga mujhe ye likha hua...... just no words...... aur iska title hi bahut khoob hai..wahhhh.. keep it up dear
take care
Pallavi...
******
Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you...
Originally posted by nice_off_me wah jubin buhut buhut khoob daad kabool karna sach mein buhut caha likha hai tumne likhte rahiyega..........
thanks simi
thanks for reading
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
Re: Re: chalti hai RAIL bhi aye dost...patrian badalte hue....(please read everyone) -
1st July 2005, 05:56 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by pallavi_here it ws awesome jubin... wht to say....bahut bahut bahuuuut.. achha laga mujhe ye likha hua...... just no words...... aur iska title hi bahut khoob hai..wahhhh.. keep it up dear
take care
thanks pallo ji
keeeeep reading
pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
simply d best
tumhare shabdon mein dard saaf saaf jhalak raha hai
likhte rehnaa
sonal
~~ u never know where ur destiny takes u ~~
There would come a time when
we have to stop loving a person
not because that person started hating us .....
but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go.....
Originally posted by Parul Wah Devdaas ji Wah... What a great creation. keep writing... and take care of yourself!
thanks parul ji for reading
u too takecare of u r sekf
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
Originally posted by soni_sonal simply d best
tumhare shabdon mein dard saaf saaf jhalak raha hai
likhte rehnaa
sonal
thanks sonal
keeeeeep reading
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
Originally posted by ghayal_shayar nice 1 jubin dear loved reading it.bahut dino baad padha aapka likha hua.ahch laga.aur bhi ahcha lagega agar aap aur bhi frequently likhte rahen.
aapka LUCKY
thanks lucky
sahab
keeeep reading
main koshish karunga
ki frequently likh saku
aapka-jubin
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati
to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi......
ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai
tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka
magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai
ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi
guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise
ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi
na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag
bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri
inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar
main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz
magar yuhi
kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai
Originally posted by surinder_rawat Bewafaa se dil lagaa bethe..
Hosh apne ham gavaa bethe..
PalkoN par aisa bithaaya tha,
KhwaaboN kii nagrii mai aa bethe..
DusroN ke gham ko jo dekha to,
Apne gham ko hii bhulaa bethe..
Aisi mohabbat ki raaheN hai,
Khud ko hii un se chhupaa bethe..
jaane kya kya ki khata hamne,
Wo chhuriiyaaN hii chalaa bethe..
muflisii me aaye jo ghar pe,
ZakhmoN ko hi ham Sazaa bethe..
Hello Surinder saahab!
Sukriya huzooR!
Ghazal ko padhne ke liye..Par Mujeh yah samjh mai nahi aaya ki aap ko yah ghazal yahaaN post karne ki kya zaroorat hai.. Kher agar post kiya to mera naam bhi de dete... to mera bhi kuchh izzat badh jaata...
Anyway.. thanx a lot. isi bahaane yahaan bhi sab padh leNge.. aur mere dost chaaheN to yahaaN bhi padh sakte haiN..
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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{nt mine}