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my 1st here - 23rd October 2005, 08:14 PM

bas aane ki khabar kar raha hoon,

sacche pyar ko main khwab kehta hoon,
lahoo ko to main sharab kehta hoon,
aaj aaya hoon aap sabhi ke samne,
isliye sabko main aadaab kehta hoon.


MAUT


ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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Re: my 1st here - 23rd October 2005, 08:30 PM

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bas aane ki khabar kar raha hoon,

sacche pyar ko main khwab kehta hoon,
lahoo ko to main sharab kehta hoon,
aaj aaya hoon aap sabhi ke samne,
isliye sabko main aadaab kehta hoon.


MAUT
hi,
first of all welcome this family of ours. well i loved ur way of expressing n hope to read much more frm ur side. do keep penning down ur thoughts n keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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23rd October 2005, 08:43 PM

thanks a lot jasleen ji it was my pleasure that u liked the way of my xspression.and no problem u will read more from me.and i have already posted something with the hope that u will like it.just keep reading.urs

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ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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24th October 2005, 11:47 AM

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thanks a lot jasleen ji it was my pleasure that u liked the way of my xspression.and no problem u will read more from me.and i have already posted something with the hope that u will like it.just keep reading.urs

MAUT
well i m surprised to know tht u know my real name too. cud u plz be specific hw u know abt me?ur way of writing xpression leads me to think tht may be i know u but still cant recall u. neways plz if possible let me know hw u know abt me.take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Re: my 1st here - 24th October 2005, 12:07 PM

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Originally posted by ~*main maut*~
bas aane ki khabar kar raha hoon,

sacche pyar ko main khwab kehta hoon,
lahoo ko to main sharab kehta hoon,
aaj aaya hoon aap sabhi ke samne,
isliye sabko main aadaab kehta hoon.


MAUT

Hello maut ji aap to aapna user name bada hi alag rakha hai. lagta hai aap hai bhi kuch alag, any way WELLCOME to our group.




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24th October 2005, 02:51 PM

jas di......
mujhse poocho ye shakhs kaun hai....main ise pehli baar me hi pehchaan gayi thi.....
mr death.....aap mujhse bachke rahiyega....
thanx,
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24th October 2005, 05:48 PM

dekhiye jasleen ji baat darasal ye hai maine site join abhi ki hai par is site ko observe mahino se kar raha tha.isiliye mujhe yahan ho rahi har ghatna ka gyan hai.aur aapko bas ye galatfehmi hai ki aap mujhe jaanti hain.main to bas ant hoon kyunki main maut hoon.

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ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
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is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
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aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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24th October 2005, 05:50 PM

shukriya ravi ji.umeed hai aapko humare kalaam pasand aayenge.

MAUT


ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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24th October 2005, 05:54 PM

kasak ji aapko ahchi tarah se pata hai ki maut ko kisi ka darr nahi hota maut par kisi cheez ka asar nahi hota.phir dekhta aaki aage kya hai hota.

MAUT


ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

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24th October 2005, 07:22 PM

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dekhiye jasleen ji baat darasal ye hai maine site join abhi ki hai par is site ko observe mahino se kar raha tha.isiliye mujhe yahan ho rahi har ghatna ka gyan hai.aur aapko bas ye galatfehmi hai ki aap mujhe jaanti hain.main to bas ant hoon kyunki main maut hoon.

MAUT
hi,
well i hv no miss understandings at all.its k. i just needed to confirm as its very rare tht anyone except my old friends know me by original name jasleen. neways its gud to know tht u had been observing us before joining this site. atleast u know us all n we dont need much to intro ourselves then. no more misunderstandings n welcome to this family. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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