dhamakon ke tamachein... (Manoj Kureel) Baarood!! (Talib)

manoj kureel · 10:15 AM

dhamakon ke tamachon se aankhein to khuli hongi
gar ab bhi na utha haath to yeh buzdili hogi

choohe-billi ka yeh khel aakhir kab tak chalega?
aaj dehli hai Mumbai kal khaakh mein Delhi hogi

hai gaflat ki unghti sarkarein jagengi dhamakon ke shor se
siyasatdaanon ki kuch deir ko mehaj kursi hili hogi

jung jaroorat hai aman ki hifazat ke liye warna
khiza ke saaye tale sehmi chaman ki har kali hogi

"so sunaar ki to ek lohaar ki" yaad rahe "kureel"
jab ham lenge hisaab to har chot ki wasooli hogi.

-MANOJ KUREEL

farhana · 13th July 2006, 10:26 AM

manoj ji aapne bahaut accha likkha hai...
tamaam duniya hi is aatankwaad se joojh rahi hai..mumbai pichle kuch saalon me najane kitne aatankwaadi hamle jhel chuki hai lekin sach kahoon toh aaj pehli baar meine mumbaikars me itni ekta dekhi...apni jaan bachane ke badle we ghayalon k baare me, mrit k baare me soch rahe the..mei khud mumbaikar hoon isiliye aaj bahaut gaurav mehsoos karti hoon khud ko mumbai wasi kehte hue.bahaut hi himmat se logon ne is aatank ka saamna kiya hai...
waise aatank k khilaaf ladna gar sabhi desh videsh ke waasiyon ki soch ho toh ise mitaana aasaan hota hai lekin gar yeh soch kuch pockets me batein ho toh ise implement karna mushkil hai...har mazhab ke logon me aapko kuch aise log milenge jinke andar aatank bhara hai..kahin pe woh apne haq ke liye ladrahe hain,(jab ki unhe yeh ehsaas nahi hai ke inki is haq ki ladai me kitne hi masoom jaan gava dete hain)...aur kahin pe bas yeh apni taakat ka pradarshan karte hain.dono hi surat me nuksaan aam aadmi ka hota hai..
jabtak logon ke zehen me insaaniyat kam aur mazhab ki deewarein zyadah hai(aur yeh mei kisi ek qaum ke liye nahi kahungi kyunki jaisa ki meine pehle kaha tha ke har mazhab me aise log hain jo aatankwaadi hain) tabtak is aatank ka hal karna na mumkin hai.
khair khuda har us shakhs ki rooh ko sukoon de jinhone in sabhi hamlon me apni jaan gavai hai.
khyaal rakhiyega.

sanjatkm · **wah wah kafi nahin hai -** 13th July 2006, 10:32 AM

Manoj

kya baat hai...
ye wah wah bhi aap ke panktion ke samne bahat kam hai...

candyboy · 13th July 2006, 12:39 PM

Pyaare Manoj Bhai,

Kaafi dard hota hai jab yeh sunnte hai ke hum jaise hi insaan aisay darindagy waale kaam bhi kar sakte hai. Apne mufaat ki khaatir itne begunaaho ki itni khaufnaak tariko se jaan le lete hai. Ek bhayanak asliyat jo aapne bohot sanjeedgi aur khoobsurti se bayan ki hai. Likhte rahe

rajveeer · **bhut khub -** 13th July 2006, 12:41 PM

manoj ji appki is gazal par wah wah karna shayad un laashon kay saath mazaak hoga jo humnay dekhi hai......lakin is hadsay nay har kisi kay dil pay choot ki hai har jahain ko jhanjhor kay rakh diya hai.....appkay jajbaat achay lagay....appki soach ki taieed kartay huie maine bhee kush lines kahi hai jo appki nazar karta hoon......

dehal utthi insaniyat jab koi insaa chala gaya,
aman gaya azadi gai or kisi ka kaya gaya......

moot bantnay walo tum bhee ro dogay,
jis din tumhay ghar say jab koi apna gaya.......

siyasat kay khel main mohry hain hum tum,
yeh khel har baar hamari zindagi say khela gaya.......

aag say aag bhujhany walo kush to hosh karo,
nafrat kam hogi kaise gar is main nafrat ko dala gaya......

hamari khamoshi ko kamzori samjhnay walo,
tumko rah na milaygi jis din humko gussa aa gaya.....

aao tum bhee laut aao wapis aman ki dunia main,
wo bhula bhula nahi rehta jo wapis ghar aa gaya......

'veer' jio oro ko jeenay do har mazhab sikhata hai,
karkay pyar sab say yeh raaz samajh main aa gaya....

appka dost raj........

Parastaar · 13th July 2006, 12:45 PM

Manoj

tumhari kalam kee shamsheer se aisee hee ummiid thee…tumhara kalaam purjosh, pur-asar hai…aur last sher tau ‘karo yaa maro’ jaise bhaav le aaya hai dil mein…Mumbaikars ne dikhaa diya hai ki aatankwaad se wo ghabraane waale nahin…aur yeh bhi ki wo Bharatiye pehle hain phir kisi jaat paat ke…so good to see that every train is running close to normal so soon after the chaos…the perpetrators caused….jis jazzbe ke saath anjaan logon ne zakhmiyon ki madad kee aur har aspataal mein jaakar khuun diya…us se aatankwaadiyon ko bhi shock tau zaroor pahuncha hoga…kyunki unki yeh chaal ki ek gut ko duusre se ladaa dein safal nahin huyi… …yoonhi inqalaabi kalaam likhte raho…

ab dekhna yeh hai ki jinko jantaa ne kursiyon pe bithayaa hai wo kya kadam uthaate hain...luhaar ki chot, kaante ko kaanta, aman ke liye jang...yeh fikre tumhari tabiyat achhe se bayaan karte hain...tumhein padh kar rom rom fakhr mehsoos kar raha hai...

acharya_mj · **hi -** 13th July 2006, 12:47 PM

bahut khoob maoj ji

bhagwaan marnewaalo ki aatma ko shanti de aur unke pariwaar waalo ko in mushibato se jhujne ki shakti

aap ne bahut hi achha likha hai,aise hi likhte rahiyega.
regards
manu

talib · **Baarood !!! -** 13th July 2006, 02:12 PM

BAAROOD nigaahoN mein, BAAROOD fizaaoN mein,
BAAROOD hua shaamil insaan ki aahoN mein,
BAAROOD mauhaiyya hai harr moD pe raahoN mein,
BAAROOD ki dilchaspi bass Qatl mein jaanoN mein.
...

Abb tau yeh aalam ho chalaa hai ke, Binaa dhamaake ke humm neend se jaagte hi nahi. Aur jab dhamaaka hota hai tau kohraam machaate hain. Pichle damaake se kuch seekh liya hota, Tau shaayad aankhein gaThri mein bandhi laash dekh kar nahi pathraati.

Suna hai mumbai inn dhamaakoN ko "raat gayee so baat gayee" jaankar, aaj phir rozz maraa ki zindagi mein juuT gayee hai.
Isse kya hoga..? Kya yeh saabit karna hai ke "yeh dhamaake kuch nahi koi aur baRaa hathiyaar istemaal karo". Aur iss kism ke ravvaiyye se tau sarkaar aur police,dono hi chain ki saans lete nazar aayenge...

kuch logo ko khoon ki zaroorat thi, tau saikRoN mumbai vaasi khoon dene umaD paRe...beshaq yeh ek accha aur insaaniyat ka jazbaa hai..Lekin saahebaan khuun dene ki zaroorat hi kyoN paRTi hai..Baar baar...

Delhi mein Dhamaaka, Banaaras mein Dhamaaka, Mumbai mein dhamaaka, lekin dhamaaka karnewalaa laapataa. Dhamaaka
karne waale ke paas "Timer Explosive Device" hai jiss ke chalte woh itmenaan se apni jaan bachaa paata hai. Aur hamaare officers ke paas itna dimaag bhi nahi ke dhamaaka hua hai tau kaunsi Emergency services ke liye intezaam hona chaahiye. jitni jaan dhamaake se nahi gayee usse zyaada jaan tau sahuliyatoN ki kami ya uss mein derr hone ki wajaah se gayee hai.

Main tau kehtaa hoon Manoj bhaai iss upar likhe bhaashan se bhi kuch nahi hone walaa, kuch aisaa hona chaahiye iss baar ke
hum unke gharoN mein ghuss karr bakaaydaa unhe iktelaa deke dhamaake karr aayeN...binaa bataaye kaayaroN ki tarah nahi..
yehi farq hogaa unn mein aur humm mein.

Jab yeh dhamaake karnewaaloN ke yahaaN... ghar ka kamaau betaa paani pine ke liye duusre ka mohtaaj ho jaayega, jab sarr
pe sirf chat rahegi lekin maa baap ka sayaa nahi, jabb saari rangeen saaRiYoN ko sirf almaari mein deemag ki khuraak ke
liye choR denaa hoga aur jabb "Maa kabb aayegi..?" iss sawaal pe baap ka kalejaa muuh ko aayega..tab kahiiN jaa ke hawaa
thoRi saaf hogi, tabb kahiin jake sirf ghar ke chuloN se dhuaaN uthegaa na ke Train ke dibbo se...tabb kahiin jaake
"Dhamaake" shabdh ka rishta humaara zehan sirf "Diwaali" se joREga.. na ke Delhi, Banaras, London ya Mumbai se............

................

ibaadat karate hai.n jo log jannat kii tamannaa me.n
ibaadat to nahii.n hai ik tarah kii vo tijaarat hai

[ibaadat=prayer; jannat=heaven; tijaarat=trade]

jo Dar ke naar-e-dozaKh se Khudaa kaa naam lete hai.n
ibaadat kyaa vo Khaalii buzadilaanaa ek Khidamat hai

[naar-e-dozaKh=fires of hell; buzadilaanaa=cowardly; Khidamat=service]

magar jab shukr-e-ne'mat me.n jabii.n jhukatii hai bande kii
vo sachchii bandagii hai ik shariifaanaa ita'at hai

[shukr-e-ne'mat=thanks for blessings; jabii.n=forehead; ita'at=submission]

Josh Malihaabaadi.

Dhamaake se ubharte hain daraar-o-dard seene mein,
Woh ab Dushman ko bhi mehsoos ho isski zaroorat hai.

manoj kureel · **Re: Baarood !!! -** 13th July 2006, 03:09 PM

BAAROOD nigaahoN mein, BAAROOD fizaaoN mein,
BAAROOD hua shaamil insaan ki aahoN mein,
BAAROOD mauhaiyya hai harr moD pe raahoN mein,
BAAROOD ki dilchaspi bass Qatl mein jaanoN mein.

Dhamaake se ubharte hain daraar-o-dard seene mein,
Woh ab Dushman ko bhi mehsoos ho isski zaroorat hai.

taalib bhai
jis nafasat aur seedhe lehje se aapne apne jazbaat likhe hai us par mein aapko mubaaraqbaad dena chaunga...yehi mein bhi sochta hoon,,,aapko padh kar yehi laga jaise aapne mere dil ki baat ko jubaan de di hai..
kabhi kabhi mujhe is desh ki sarkaar ki haalat jism bechne wali tawaif si lagti hai,,,laachar,kamjor,majboor aur besharm-o-begairat...khuddari naam ki koi cheez nahin hai,, koi bhi dehshatgard aata hai,,apni bhadaas nikaal kar chalta banta hai....sarkaar ke siyaasatdaanon ko to bas matlab hai paise bana_ne se...
aap se mein poori tarah sehmat hoon,,aur aapke jazbaaton aur aapki seedhi saaf soch par aapko mubaaraqbaad deta hoon ,,
-MANOJ

manoj kureel · 13th July 2006, 03:55 PM

FARHANA JI
AADAB
bahoot khushi hoti hai aapko bazm mein waapas aaya dekh kar.,.umeed karta hoon aap ache se hongi,,,aapne bahoot sahi likha hai,,,ki dehshatgardi aaj har majhab mein ghoos chuki hai,,,mein to yeh kahunga ki dehshatgardon ka darsal koi majhab hi nahin hota...maasoom insaani khoon peenewale yeh darindein kisi majhab ke ho bhi nahin sakte,,kyunki har majhab ek hi taalim deta hai,,aman,,bhaichara...!!
aap ko mein salaam karta hoon aapki soch ke liye...bahoot khushi hui ki aapne apne jazbaaton ki roshi se is gazal ko roshan kiya.
take care
-MANOJ

manoj kureel · **Re: Re: Baarood !!! -** 13th July 2006, 05:33 PM

IS MAQSAD SE IS POST PAR DUBARA AAYA HOON KI ise shayri ki kataar mein sabse upar hona chaiye.,....kahin yeh post haashiye par ja kar gum na ho jaye.....sabko ise padhna chaiye aur apne jazbaaton ka izhaar karna chaiye...

talib · 13th July 2006, 05:49 PM

"so sunaar ki to ek lohaar ki" yaad rahe "kureel"
jab ham lenge hisaab to har chot ki wasooli hogi.

Yakeen jaaniye Manoj bhai dil kartaa hai ke Allah/Bhagwaan/Yesu harr uss naam se, jo diloN mein yakeen ki shaQl mein bastaa hai...uss se jo bhi acche karam kiye ho unn sab ke badle mein maang luu ek shakti...ek taaqat, iss kism ke GaddaaroN aur Insaan ke bhess mein ghumnewaale HaiwaanoN ko parakhne ki...

Phir shochtaa huun ke kaafi bachkaanaa khayaal hai yeh... aisaa bhi kabhi mumkin hai..?

Lekin Asamarth sarkaar, lachaar Police inqalaab laane waale logoN ki matr bindu baraabar matraa ko dekh karr... aur karr bhi kyaa sakte hain...?

Diggaj_Dave · **Re: dhamakon ke tamachein... (on Mumbai blasts) -** 13th July 2006, 06:25 PM

dhamakon ke tamachon se aankhein to khuli hongi
gar ab bhi na utha haath to yeh buzdili hogi

choohe-billi ka yeh khel aakhir kab tak chalega?
aaj dehli hai Mumbai kal khaakh mein Delhi hogi

hai gaflat ki unghti sarkarein jagengi dhamakon ke shor se
siyasatdaanon ki kuch deir ko mehaj kursi hili hogi

jung jaroorat hai aman ki hifazat ke liye warna
khiza ke saaye tale sehmi chaman ki har kali hogi

"so sunaar ki to ek lohaar ki" yaad rahe "kureel"
jab ham lenge hisaab to har chot ki wasooli hogi.

Manoj bhai

sabse pehle ek kaam karunga jab delhi aaunga aapke haath chumne haiN jisne ek bohat hi sachhi ghazal likhi haiN

jo aapne kaha haiN kaash wo kursi par bethe log ek baar padh le..aapke har sabad meiN ek dard ek junoon apne desh k liye saaf-2 jhalak raha haiN...

bohat bohat shukriyah...

Apka

Diggaj

Parastaar · 14th July 2006, 09:56 AM

kabhi kabhi mujhe is desh ki sarkaar ki haalat jism bechne wali tawaif si lagti hai,,,laachar,kamjor,majboor aur besharm-o-begairat...khuddari naam ki koi cheez nahin hai,, koi bhi dehshatgard aata hai,,apni bhadaas nikaal kar chalta banta hai

Bilkul sahi Manoj...magar sarkaar ko hi dosh kyun...jab jinpe vaar ho raha ho...wo ise ek aur aam haadsa maan kar, phir se jut jaate hain kolhuu ke bail kee tarah...bina protest kiye...

Aur kharish zada se kuchh kutte
Lete rehte hain be niyazana
Dum marode ke koi sar kuchle
Katna kya woh bhaunkte bhi nahin
--kaifi azmi

Parastaar · 11:22 AM

Dhamaake se ubharte hain daraar-o-dard seene mein,
Woh ab Dushman ko bhi mehsoos ho isski zaroorat hai.

Talib Sir...

Main bata nahin sakti ki mujhe kitna fakhr hai iss baat pe, ki main uss bazm ki member hoon jismein aap, Manoj, Vipin jee aur Brijinder jee jaise wo Bharatiye hain jo don't like to mince words and say the things as they are...Hats off to you all!

Jab yeh dhamaake karnewaaloN ke yahaaN... ghar ka kamaau betaa paani pine ke liye duusre ka mohtaaj ho jaayega, jab sarr
pe sirf chat rahegi lekin maa baap ka sayaa nahi, jabb saari rangeen saaRiYoN ko sirf almaari mein deemag ki khuraak ke
liye choR denaa hoga aur jabb "Maa kabb aayegi..?" iss sawaal pe baap ka kalejaa muuh ko aayega..tab kahiiN jaa ke hawaa
thoRi saaf hogi, tabb kahiin jake sirf ghar ke chuloN se dhuaaN uthegaa na ke Train ke dibbo se...tabb kahiin jaake
"Dhamaake" shabdh ka rishta humaara zehan sirf "Diwaali" se joREga..

Yeh guftagu guftagu nahin hai, bigadne banne ka marhala hai
Dhadak raha hai faza ka dil ke zindagi ka ma’amla hai
Yeh tirgi ka hujoom kab tak yeh yas ka izdaham kab tak
Nifaq-o-ghaflat ki aad le ke jiye ga mardum nizam kab tak
Rahen ge Hindi aseer kab tak rahe ga Bharat ghulam kab tak
Gale ka tauq aa rahe qadam par kuchh is tarah tilmila ke uthna
(‘Naye Khake’)

[This dialogue is not a dialogue: it is the stage of making or spoiling
The heart of the environment is beating fast for it is the question of life
How long shall remain this enveloping darkness, how long this mammoth sadness
How long shall this wretched system survive taking cover under discord and unconcern
How long shall Indians remain prisoners, how long shall Bharat remain subjugated
Rise with such a force that the chain around your neck falls on your feet]
[‘New Designs’]

---by kaifi azmi jee again

Aapko jab jab padha hai...tab tab 'talib' ki ek aur dimension saamne aayi hai...may you always remain true to yourself and support the truth like you do here...

abke tilmila kar yoon uthna hoga ki dehshatgaron ko dehshat ho jaaye....yeh haath pe haath dhar ke baithne...aur chup rehne ki aadat ki bediyaan utaar phenkni hongi...

sakhi1909 · 14th July 2006, 12:07 PM

hi manoj ji
bahut khub apne byaan kiyaa hai apne andar ki aag ko.
dukh to hota hai yaisi ghatnaye jab kahin hoti hai par ye ghatnaaye aam baat hai.

kya kiyaa jaye inka kuch samjh nahi aata.
sakhi

Mayank · 14th July 2006, 12:36 PM

Manoj jee,

Aap ki nazm bohat hi khoobsuurat aur haqiqat ko darshaati hai
koii bhee insaan jis ke apne bachche biwi maaN baap bhai behen hoN voh iss parkar se duusroN ko kaise maar sakta hai

PAK QURAAN mai likha hai Aik be gunha ka qatal puri insaniyat ka qatalhai ,aur aik beghunah insaan ka qatil puri insaniya ka qatil haiyeh looge jo ees parkar ke bomb spot , karte haiN woh insaan to nahi na hi kisi dharam se onka koi lena dena hai

aise loogoN ko sare aam phansi di jaye..

Maine apne ek dost "Rahul Uppadhaay" jee ka haal hee maiN likha huaa yeh nazm aap se share karna chaahta huuN.... Aap bhee zaroor PaRhiYegaa....

pahale bhii barasaa thaa qahar
ast vyast thaa saaraa shahar
aaj phir barasaa hai qahar
ast vyast hai saaraa shahar

badalaa kisi se lene se
sazaa kisi ko dene se
matlab nahii.n nikalegaa
patthar nahii.n pighalegaa
jab tak hai idhar aur udhar
meraa zahar teraa zahar

pahale bhii .....

buraa hai kaun,
bhalaa hai kaun
sach kii raah par chalaa hai kaun
muqammal nahii.n hai koi bhii
mahfooz nahii.n hai koi bhii
chaahe lagaa ho nagar nagar
paharaa kaD_aa aaTho pahar

pahale bhii .....

na koi samajhaa hai na samajhegaa
vyarth tark vitark me.n ulajhegaa
jhagaD_aa nahii.n kisii dal kaa hai
masalaa nahii.n aajakal kaa hai
sadiyaa gayii hai.n guzar
huii nahii.n abhii tak sahar

pahale bhii .......

nazar jaatii hai jidhar
aa.nkh jaatii hai sihar
jo bhii jitanaa shoor hai
vo bhii utanaa kroor hai
taaj hai jinake sar par
Dhaate hai vo bhii qahar

pahale bhii ........

aashaa kii kiraN tab phoot.ngii
sadiyo.n kii nii.nd tab toote.ngii
taajaa havaa phir aaye.ngii
diiwaare jab gir jaaye.ngii
hogaa ghar jab ek ghar
na teraa ghar na meraa ghar

pahale bhii ........

Vipinbox · 14th July 2006, 02:49 PM

Namaskaar Taalib Ji
Aapko parha, jaana, samhjha aur mehsoos kiya. Aapke is jazzbe ke aage main natmastak hoon.
Meri dua hai ki yahan har sadasya aapki is post ko parhey aur mehsoos karey. Is Desh ke andhrooni dard ko pehchaaney.

aapka
v i p i n

Vipinbox · **Re: dhamakon ke tamachein... (on Mumbai blasts) -** 14th July 2006, 02:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by manoj kureel
dhamakon ke tamachon se aankhein to khuli hongi
gar ab bhi na utha haath to yeh buzdili hogi

choohe-billi ka yeh khel aakhir kab tak chalega?
aaj dehli hai Mumbai kal khaakh mein Delhi hogi

hai gaflat ki unghti sarkarein jagengi dhamakon ke shor se
siyasatdaanon ki kuch deir ko mehaj kursi hili hogi

jung jaroorat hai aman ki hifazat ke liye warna
khiza ke saaye tale sehmi chaman ki har kali hogi

"so sunaar ki to ek lohaar ki" yaad rahe "kureel"
jab ham lenge hisaab to har chot ki wasooli hogi.

-MANOJ KUREEL

Manoj Bhai,
Is vishay per main daad tow nahin de paaunga magar aapke jazbaat parhkar mujhe bahaut accha laga.
aapki is peshkash ko mera pranaam.

aapka
v i p i n

Vipinbox · 14th July 2006, 03:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Parastaar
kabhi kabhi mujhe is desh ki sarkaar ki haalat jism bechne wali tawaif si lagti hai,,,laachar,kamjor,majboor aur besharm-o-begairat...khuddari naam ki koi cheez nahin hai,, koi bhi dehshatgard aata hai,,apni bhadaas nikaal kar chalta banta hai

Bilkul sahi Manoj...magar sarkaar ko hi dosh kyun...jab jinpe vaar ho raha ho...wo ise ek aur aam haadsa maan kar, phir se jut jaate hain kolhuu ke bail kee tarah...bina protest kiye...

Aur kharish zada se kuchh kutte
Lete rehte hain be niyazana
Dum marode ke koi sar kuchle
Katna kya woh bhaunkte bhi nahin
--kaifi azmi

Namaskaar Paaras Ji,
Aapko parhkar accha laga aur main aapse poori tarah sehmat hoon.
Sh. Harivansh ray ji panktiyaan yaad aarahi hain.............kaash jo unhoney likha hai woh sach hojaata tow kitna accha hota:

धर्मग्रन्थ सब जला चुकी है, जिसके अंतर की ज्वाला,
मंदिर, मसजिद, गिरिजे, सब को तोड़ चुका जो मतवाला,
पंडित, मोमिन, पादिरयों के फंदों को जो काट चुका,
कर सकती है आज उसी का स्वागत मेरी मधुशाला।।

akant · **hi -** 14th July 2006, 03:03 PM

Talib ji,

aapki baate padhi. nagriko jagruk kerne ke liye aapne jo likha hai use mahsoos kiya aur kaafi had tak aap sahi hain.. aapki baato ka samarthan kerta hoon.. hume khud hi jagruk hona padega. hume apne aap-pass ki cheejo se anjaan nahi hona hai...hume need se jagana hi hoga...

Akant...

red_ruchika · 14th July 2006, 05:08 PM

usdin jo hua woh pehli baar to nahin,par aakhiri baar ho,iski sirf aaj main dua kar sakti hoon.lekin aisa kyun hota hai yeh nahi samjah aata.insaan ko yahan se vaapis jane ke liye sirf 6 ft. zameen ki zaroorat hoti hai.kitni zameen hasil karle woh,kitna aasman,aur kitne khoon ke chiinte aur na jaane kitne aansoo.

insab ke baad,kabhi soch main aata hai,jab yeh sab hota hai to bhagwan kahan hota hai ya woh sirf hamari banayi hui aik kalpana hi hai...kya maloom.

"so sunaar ki to ek lohaar ki" yaad rahe "kureel"
jab ham lenge hisaab to har chot ki wasooli hogi.

sahi kaha hai bilkul aapne.

red_ruchika · 14th July 2006, 05:26 PM

talib ji ...aik panna to kya aik kitaab likh kar bhi agar sarkaar ke muh par fekonge ,tab bhi yeh nahi dekhegi is taraf.kyunki aaj hindustan main har koi apni chaar diwaari ko hi apna ghar samjahne laga hai.poore india main jo ho,woh hota rahe,in politicians ke ghar safe hain ,bas kaafi hai aaj ki khabar ke liye.

meri bahot khwaish hai ki main politics main jaon,par mere sir ne bataya ki wahan par jane ke liye tumhe khoon bahana aana chahaiye.aaj itni corruption hai har jagah.

itni old age ke logon ko politics main bitha ke rakha hai experience ke naam par!aur jahan dekho aaj ka youth bas ishq main pagalpan ki baat karta rehta hai.sabse badi problem hamare desh main yehi reh gayi hai.paisa hai,lekin jaibon main.

mujhe to yeh nahin aata samjah main ki kabhi kisi poltician ke saath to yeh sab nahi hota.terrorism ke baare main woh hamesha baatein karte hi nazar aate hain.

khair,kehna aasan hai aur karna mushkil.hum sab koshis karenge is khoon ko garam karke in hewano ko mita dene ki.
bas yehi dar hai,ki yeh aag bhi aik chingari ki tarah bujh na jaaye.

dilip200 · 15th July 2006, 01:46 PM

talib ji
sachh jin saff saff shabdon me aapne apne dil ka gubar nikal ke rakh diya hai. sach maniye asa laha ki wo har us bhartiy ki aawaz hai jo apne watan se mohhabat karta hai. ye dhamake karne bale ye kyoun nahi sochte ki kitni masoom jane in dhamakon me jayengi. maine suna us maaN ke bare main jiska beta use dawa lene gaya tha or fir lout ke nahi aaya. us maaN ki aankhe pathara gayee hain. apne bete ke intzar me. wo jo chand paiso ke khatir ye sab karne ko taiyar ho jate hai. or wo jo ye sab karwate hai . khuda kare unke ghar me unhe koi rone wala na rahe. unka koi in dhamakon me mara jaye to unhe pata lage ki apno ke khone ka gam kya hota hai

dilip

Tulsika!~ · 15th July 2006, 10:05 PM

Quote:

"so sunaar ki to ek lohaar ki" yaad rahe "kureel"
jab ham lenge hisaab to har chot ki wasooli hogi.

i agree with you on this..!!

Aapki koshish kambiyab rahi hai...yeh jo bhi huwa usko lafzon mein pesh karne ki...

Pulkit_gupta · 03:20 PM

Talib bhai,

Sach kaha aapne... aajkal dhmaake jaise ek aam si baat ho gayi hai...aaj dhmaka huwa...kal sab normal.... Delhi ke blasts ke baad bhi yehi huwa thha.... Jis din blast huwa uske next din wahan pata bhi nahi chalta ke kucch huwa hai.... Same is the case in Mumbai...

Humari sarkaar ki to jitni tareef ki jaaye utni kam hai... Emergency services to kya muhaiya karayenge...Local ppl had to take care of that too....

A terrorist who has taken 1000s of lives will be prosecuted for years if at all he is arrested... I have not heard a single instance of any such criminal being punished severely...

Sabse mazedaar baat to yeh hai ke sab jaante huwe ke kiske support se yeh sab ho raha hai humari sarkaar aajtak yehi samjhti hai ke saamne wala shaanti chata hai...

Its high time...osme action is taken... varna har doosre mahine aise hi log marte rahenge....aur jinhone apna khoya hai uske siva sab bhool jaayenge....

gam-e-lashkar · 18th July 2006, 04:02 PM

Sorry Manoj Ji....Ham yaha aane me bahut late ho gaye...umeed hai aap hame maaf karenge....

sahi baat bataaye...hamne jab se bombay blast ki baat dekhi aur suni hai..reh reh kar hamari soch me gussa umad aata hai..is govt. per ....aantakvaad par...aur charmaraate aaj k dhaanche per..

hame mayank ka likha b bahut pasand aaya...

manu ji...ham sab maante aur jaante hai...govt. naakaara...nakhattu hai...kuchh b nahi karegi...jab tak inke khud k koi apne is aag me na jhusenge...tab tak inhe koi farak nahi padega....saare netaao ko to line me khada kar k goli se uda dena chaahiye....anyways...

dusri soch ye hai ki hame khud ko in sab se jaagruk hona padega...jab tak aavaam khud nahi jaagti...is desh ka yahi haal hoga...ham sab ko apne aas-paas sab per nazer rakhni chahiye...sab ki kaarguzariyo.n per dhyaan dena chahiye...aur ham is baat ko maante hai...ki agar sab alert ho kar rahe to hamare aas-pas jo achanak se ghat jaata hai..kam se kam kuch to andesha ho jayega...aur fir uske baad ham sab me himmat honi chahiye...k us ghatna anjaam dene se pehle ham kuchh kare.n jisse ye sab na no...so...ham sabi apne dosto ko..padhne waalo se yeh prarthna aur umeed karte hai ki vo apne-aaspaas ho rahi baato /ghatnao ko dhyaan de...aur further action le...jis se ye haadse na ho...as for example...koi code language me std ya public booth se baat kar raha hai..cell per baat kar raha hai to thora dhyaan de..ki kuch hamare aas-pas galat to nahi ho raha....thori thori saavdhaani hi bare bare khatro ko taal jaati hai...kuchh ham sher b likhna chahte hai..lekin samay anumati nahi de raha hai..so...itne likhe ko bahut samajna...

ok bye...t/c and be alert for future....

Pulkit_gupta · 18th July 2006, 07:22 PM

Manoj Bhai,

Sach mann to yehi kehta hai ke ab bass bahut ho gaya chupchaap sehnaa... humen bhi jawaab dena chaahiye...

Maanta hoon ke har ladhai me maasoom log zyada marte hain magar fir bhi ab chup rehne se kucch nahi hoga.... pata nahi yeh sab kab tak chalega.....

chaahat · 18th July 2006, 08:00 PM

Manoj bhai...

Sach hai bahut dardnaak hota hai woh shann... aur kai aane vaale pal..... jab aisa kuch hota hai....

Bahut hi umda shabdon me dard bayaan kiya hai aapne...

~Priya

shrdh · 20th July 2006, 06:35 AM

kya kahun bus aankh nam hai pata nahi ye kyu hota hai aur kyu karte hai log kya milta hai umhe begunah logon ki mout ka tamasha dekhkar

bus kuch thoda sa sakoon de kuhuda aur sabhi ko pyaar se rahna sikhaye yahi dua karti hoon

amithandausa · 4th March 2007, 01:14 AM

kya baat hai

hum kahan aap logon se mukabla karenge
u all 2 simply awesome

aarya · 4th March 2007, 01:56 AM

hi manoj ji
aapki rachna dil mai dard paida karti hai, aur yaad taza karti hai jo hua us baat ki.Isse kise kya mila hum nahin jante magar bahut kuch logon ne khoya hai iska ilm hai. Parwaar digaar se prarthna rahegi ke sabko sadbudhi dain.

regards
aarya

manoj kureel · 13th September 2008, 07:05 PM

Mumbai dhamakon par likhi gayi yeh gazal aaj Delhi dhamakon ke maddenazar ek baar phir nazron se guzarne ki karan banti hai

Mohammad Kashif · 11:11 AM

Aadaab Kureel ji
aapki is kavita mein bahut haqeeqt baate hain na jane kab yeh qatlo garat ka silsila rukega kab tak unhi dhamake hote rahenge aur unki jaanch ke naam par naye naye Adhikariyon ki khanapuri hogi, har dhamako ke baad wohi ghise pite bayaan aa jatey hain aur chand roz men sab bhool jatey hain do chaar din Red Alart phir wohi dhaak ke teen paat par jinhone apno ko khoya hai kal unhe dekhne wala koi nahi hota aaj Media hai Neta hai....kal sirf wo pariwar hone aur unhe apno ko khone ka dard is masle par gherai se sochne ki zarorat hai..........Main un sab ke liye Dhukhi hoon jo kal is dunia men the aaj nahi hain in dhamako ki wajha se

sakhi1909 · 16th September 2008, 10:49 PM

kash ye bikhara hua khoon aur rote huye log unka dard woh samjh sake jo is sabka karan bante hai.

par ye kash kash hi rah jata hai kyun ki agar yaisa hota to ye sab na hota.

sunita thakur · 17th September 2008, 08:36 AM

Manoj jee......pata nahi kab yeh damako.n ka silsilla rukega aur kab aam insaan chain ki saans lega.....aankhe ro padti hai woh manjar dekh kar, aur dil saham jata hai.....2 saal phele likhi poetry aaj ki wahi hai....kahiN kuch nahi badla.....na poetry ke ahsaas aur na Desh ki kismat

aate raha kijiye, aap sabka saath accha lagta hai

astrokinghyd · **hisaab kitney janmon ka ? -** 20th September 2008, 05:24 PM

Dear Readers,

Attack from terrorists has become order of the day, in which thousands of innocents get killed. May the Almighty bestow peace on the departed souls! As my heart bleeds for them, like many others, here is AN ADDRESS TO A TERRORIST about my feelings:

Agar dekha hai masoom chehra tuney is laash ka
Na kabhi dushmani kee isney, na khayaal kabhi fareb ka
Kali abhi khilee nahin, na dekhaa jamaal saawan ka
Bataa, insey chuktaa kiyaa hisaab kitney janmon ka?

Khoon se lath-path jism hai ye, nayee-naveli dulhan ka
Maqsad jiska tha qurbaani se ghar abaad karney ka
Le dekh, manzar - tooti chudiyaa, aur mitey sindooron ka
Bataa, insey chuktaa kiyaa hisaab kitney janmon ka?

Ye woh maraa jo tha zariyaa, das-dason ke paravarish ka
Junoon tha ismey auron ki zindagi ko sawaarney ka
Ek bewaa-lachaar maa, nazaara laawaaris bachchon ka
Bataa, insey chuktaa kiyaa hisaab kitney janmon ka?

Haqdaar hai tu in bekhataa, beqasooron ki badduaon ka
Zimmedaar hai tu tadaptee, jeetee-zindaa laashon ka
fateh tumhaari naa-mumkin hai, “satish” iraada hai sabka
“EK-EK GOLI, DO-DO SEENEY” imtihaan tera lene ka

talib · 22nd September 2008, 04:24 PM

...The Wednesday...

Teen din pehle iss film ko dekhne ke baad aisaa mehsoos hua jaise meri soch ko kisi ne awaam tak phochaa diya ho. I found the movie very very impressive. I share the same thoughts as that "Stupid Common Man" in that movie...aur iss ke baad kuch saal pehle mumbai blasts hone parr yeh kuch likha tha woh yaad aa gaya..Aap log kya sochte hain zaroor bataaye. Adaab.

baagi · 22nd September 2008, 07:43 PM

talluk hi nahi hota hai jinka uljhi duniya se
majhabi dango me aksar mare jate hain.

kshitiz · 12:56 AM

manoj bhai !

delhi ke dhamaake aapki ghazal ko taza kar gaye !

bas itnaa hi kahnaa chaahunga ki ham aur aap hi mil kar iss ko rok sakte haiN

shaitaan jahaN kahiN bhi hai , vo hai hamaare aas paas hi !

zaroorat bas usse pehchaan ne ki aur thodi si dileri dikhaane ki hai !

bhagwaan upar baitha hai aur gaddaroN kaa anjaam bahut bura hoga !

baki ham sab hindustaani ek haiN aur desh ke dushman mutthi bhar bhi nahi haiN ... bahut jaldi unka antim sanskaar ho jaayega !

aameen !