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Mere Dil Ki raakh Kured Mat, Isay muskurake hawa na de -
25th July 2009, 02:31 PM
mere dil kii raakh kured mat, ise muskurraa ke hawaa na de
ye charaag phir bhii charaag hai, kahii teraa haath jalaa na de! naye daur ke naye khwaab hai, naye mausamoN ke gulaab haiN ye muhab'batoN ke charaag hai, inheN nafratoN ki hawaa na de! zaraa dekh chaand kii pat'tiyoN ne bikhar bikhar ke tamaam shab tera naam likkhaa hai rait par,koi lah'r aake mitaa na de! maiN udaasiyaaN na sajaa sakooN, kabhii jism o jaaN kii mazaar pe, naye diye jale merii aankh me.n, mujhe itnii sakht sazaa na de! mere saath chalne ki shauk me.n, bharii dhoop sar pe uThaayegaa teraa naak naksh hai mom kaa, kahiiN gam kii dhoop ghulaa na de! maiN gazal kii shabnamii aankh se,ye dukhoN ke phool chunaa karooN merii saltanat meraa fan rahe, mujhe takht o taaj khudaa na de! Adapted http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HbqnpcSIHgc Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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25th July 2009, 05:31 PM
Nalin Jii...........
Wah Wah Wah............ Bhaut hi Khubsurat Gazal khai hai janab........ Paheli Gazal aur itni khubsuraat aur itni umda janab... aap ne kamal ker diya.. Bahut hi khoob rahe sabhi sher.... sabhi sher achche lage koi bhi sher aisa nahi laga ke kisi sher mein koi kami rahi ho jaise... Bahut khoob bahut hi khoob yaar aapne itni achchi gazal kahi hai ke...... Tarif ke liye words hi nahi mil rahe........ Khush rahiye aur aise hi behtreen gazalon se hume bhi khush karte rahiye..  May God Bless You.. 
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25th July 2009, 05:32 PM
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Nalin bhayeee Hatss off uuu sajda hai kalaam par kyu jaye tumhare nam par |
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25th July 2009, 05:45 PM
Nalin ji..........bahut khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne.......acha laga padhkar.....har sher umda laga mujhe........waakai hi taarif ke kaabil hai aapki yeh ghazal.........dil se daad detaa hu.......aise hi likhte rahiye.....khush rahiye.........  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st July 2009, 09:13 PM
Good one...
mere dil kii raakh kured mat, ise muskurraa ke hawaa na de ye charaag phir bhii charaag hai, kahii teraa haath jalaa na de! maiN udaasiyaaN na sajaa sakooN, kabhii jism o jaaN kii mazaar pe, naye diye jale merii aankh me.n, mujhe itnii sakht sazaa na de! I liked these two parah... Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se, Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein... The Demon Prince...  |
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1st August 2009, 11:30 AM
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1st August 2009, 04:45 PM
thank you all for praising the gahal
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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1st August 2009, 06:47 PM
Maana ye waqt hume yaad karne ka nahin
par waqt be waqt kabhi yaad kar liya karo . maana puri dunia aap kay pass hai, Kabhi humari kami kaa ahsas kar liya karo. Tanhai Mein Faryad To Kar Sakte Hai, Virane Ko Abaad To Kar Sakte Hai, Kya Hua Aapse Mil Nahi Sakte, Par Aapko Yaad To Kar Sakte Hai. Kabhi roke muskuraye, kabhi muskurake roye, Teri yaad jab bhi aayee, tujhe bhula bulake roye…. Ek tera hi naam tha jise hazaar baar tha likha Jise khush hue the likhkar use mita mitake roye……. apne apne andaz hote hain, Jagti aankhon main bhi khwaab hote hain.. Zaroori nahin ki gam main nikle aansu, Muskurati aankhon main bhi sailab hote hain… Mehfil me to kabhi yaad karoge, Tanhai me to kabhi Faryad karoge, Hum sa na mila tha aur na milega, Kabhi to apni KISMAT pe naaz karoge.....patel |
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