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Kash tumse pyaar na hota - 22nd May 2010, 11:47 PM

Kash tumse pyaar na hota
yu dard ka mazhaar na hota

Kash tumse mulakaat na hoti
aur dil gum ka karzdaar na hota

tut kar bikhar gaye hai hum
tum per kabhie itibaar na hota

kash tumse dil-e-ikraar na hota
woh har lafz be-zaar na hota

"mann" ko mila hai dard es kadar
aapno mein dil bekhabar na hota



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Pinky ...

Bas Itna hi kehna chahuNga .. ki is baar kuch bhi theek nahi laga ... shayad zara si bhi mehnat ki hi nahi tumne ...

baaki aage tumse acche ki umeed rahegi ...

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Kash tumse pyaar na hota
yu dard ka mazhaar na hota

Kash tumse mulakaat na hoti
aur dil gum ka karzdaar na hota

tut kar bikhar gaye hai hum
tum per kabhie itibaar na hota

kash tumse dil-e-ikraar na hota
woh har lafz be-zaar na hota

"mann" ko mila hai dard es kadar
aapno mein dil bekhabar na hota

Mandy Dear....how r u?

mujhe toh bahot khub lagi aapki ye peshkash
keep sharing doll

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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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23rd May 2010, 09:35 AM

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Kash tumse pyaar na hota
yu dard ka mazhaar na hota

Kash tumse mulakaat na hoti
aur dil gum ka karzdaar na hota

tut kar bikhar gaye hai hum
tum per kabhie itibaar na hota

kash tumse dil-e-ikraar na hota
woh har lafz be-zaar na hota

"mann" ko mila hai dard es kadar
aapno mein dil bekhabar na hota
Behna Ji...... Namaste ! Bahut arse baad ... aapki nayi peshkash padhne ko mili.....accha laga ....bahut seedhe saadhe lafzon me aapne andar ke dard mehsus karane ki koshish ki hai......dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen....

aainda aur bhi behtar kalaam ke saath ...yuhi aate rahen....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




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23rd May 2010, 10:16 AM

Mandeep jee:

namaste!

baRe dinoN baad aapki koShiSh ko paRhaa.. dard bhare ehsaasoN ko achChhi tarah se bayaaN kiyaa hay.. aaKhiri Sher meiN aapne Qaafiyaa be-Khabar liyaa hay jo baaqee Qaafiyaa se alag hay!

aise hi liKhate raheN... bazm ki Shaan ko baRhaate raheN.. dil se daad!

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Kash tumse pyaar na hota
yu dard ka mazhaar na hota

Kash tumse mulakaat na hoti
aur dil gum ka karzdaar na hota

tut kar bikhar gaye hai hum
tum per kabhie itibaar na hota

kash tumse dil-e-ikraar na hota
woh har lafz be-zaar na hota

"mann" ko mila hai dard es kadar
aapno mein dil bekhabar na hota
mandeep ji, achhi laga aapka yeh qalaam.....
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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Kash tumse pyaar na hota
yu dard ka mazhaar na hota

Kash tumse mulakaat na hoti
aur dil gum ka karzdaar na hota

tut kar bikhar gaye hai hum
tum per kabhie itibaar na hota

kash tumse dil-e-ikraar na hota
woh har lafz be-zaar na hota

"mann" ko mila hai dard es kadar
aapno mein dil bekhabar na hota

mandeep jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob.....prem me dard jab badh jaata hai to aisa hi hota hai....lekin ye bhi sahi hai ki jitna dard badhta hai prem utna gahra hota jaata hai
koshish bahut pasnad aayee dil se daad
duaon ke saath



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25th May 2010, 08:36 AM

Kunaal jee,

Namastey!!

aapne mujhe hi comment kiya hai naa....woh pinky kaha es liye poocha

Jee shayad aap sehi hi hain ... mein us dinn bahut sad thii bas jo mann mein aaya likh diya ... ek toh itni upset thii..khairr... aapne toh sehi ki kaha hain shayad mehnaat se nahi likha hai

Lekin aap aaye .... mujhe sujaav diyee bahut aacha laga
bas aap saath dete raye .... behtaar likhne ki koshish jaari hain

Take care of urself

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Mann jee,

Aadaab,

bahut bahut shukriya

yu hi saath dete rahyega...

khush rahe,

duaon ke saath

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Sajid jee,

kaise hain aap? es nacheez ko samye diya ... aacha laga

take care of urself,

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Dear Angel,

How r u doing? Im doing fine.... gald to see u back!!!
Thanx alot dear

aap bhi saath dete rahey,

take care of urself,

aapki dost

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