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Love Wo kahete hain pyaar mein sab chalta hai... - 6th September 2011, 05:03 PM

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
dhoka nahi chalta!
Ashqon aur bebasi ka
tofa nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
gaddari nahi chalti!
Apno se ki gayi koi
baimaani nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli haa pyaar mein
aisa daur bhi hai chalta!
Jab nadaan dil par
koi zor nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein toh ab
pyaar bhi nahi chalta!
vishwaas bharosa imaandari
ah...aetbaar nahi chalta!


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6th September 2011, 05:18 PM

Praneeta ji Namashkar,
aap mane ya na mane aaj kuch esa hi padhne ko dil keh raha tha, aur aapne hamari muraad puri kar di, bahut accha likha hai aapne aaj kal k pyaar k sandharb mein...sab chalta hai...mujhe lagta k is tarah k pyaar ko kuch aur naam diya jana chahiye jahan sab chalta hai...kair chalta hai....

Ishwar aap par apni kripa banaye rakhein aur aap issi tarah aur umda likhti rahein..!!!

aapka.


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6th September 2011, 06:41 PM

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!


Good One .... Praneeta Ji !!!

Nice Poetry .... !




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
dhoka nahi chalta!
Ashqon aur bebasi ka
tofa nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
gaddari nahi chalti!
Apno se ki gayi koi
baimaani nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli haa pyaar mein
aisa daur bhi hai chalta!
Jab nadaan dil par
koi zor nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein toh ab
pyaar bhi nahi chalta!
vishwaas bharosa imaandari
ah...aetbaar nahi chalta!
Waah G wah! baut chngi nazm likkhi PRANEETA G aapne! V nice.....I liked the what you call non-banawati lehja used a mean saadgi lehje ki aur andaz-e-bayan baut achchay lagay!
U know what mai sochreya tha k teacher g intrview mein inni bz hogaii theen k shayri he bool gaiin but u answered just in time!
Take care and keep writing G!


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Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
dhoka nahi chalta!
Ashqon aur bebasi ka
tofa nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
gaddari nahi chalti!
Apno se ki gayi koi
baimaani nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli haa pyaar mein
aisa daur bhi hai chalta!
Jab nadaan dil par
koi zor nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein toh ab
pyaar bhi nahi chalta!
vishwaas bharosa imaandari
ah...aetbaar nahi chalta!
praneeta ji
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bahut khoobsurat aehsaas likhe hain .... dil se daad ....



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7th September 2011, 08:38 AM

Acchhee koshish rahi pari aapki is baar bhi har baar ki tarah.. Magar itnaa dard dil me kab tak sanjoye rakhna? Behtar hai ise nikaal fekiye.. Allah aapko sukoon de. Likhti raheN..

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Thumbs up bahut khoob likha hai - 7th September 2011, 03:02 PM

Pyari pari....tumhare yeh ahsaas padkar aisa lag rha hai ki jaise aisa hi kuch padne ka dil tha...aur padkar dil ko sakoon mila...sakoon kyu milaa nahi pta, jabki es meiN to bahut daba hua dard hai, jo pta nahi kab se dil meiN chupaye rakha tha tumne...dear dil dard baantne se dard kam ho jata hai aur khushi baantne se dugni ho jati hai...so ham dard aur khushi dono meiN saath hai...!

bahut acche ahsaas hai...dil se daad hazir hai.

pyar aur duaoN ke saath
diii


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Praneeta ji Namashkar,
aap mane ya na mane aaj kuch esa hi padhne ko dil keh raha tha, aur aapne hamari muraad puri kar di, bahut accha likha hai aapne aaj kal k pyaar k sandharb mein...sab chalta hai...mujhe lagta k is tarah k pyaar ko kuch aur naam diya jana chahiye jahan sab chalta hai...kair chalta hai....

Ishwar aap par apni kripa banaye rakhein aur aap issi tarah aur umda likhti rahein..!!!

aapka.

Namashkar

ji maan li aap ki baat ki aap ka dil aisa hi kuch padhne ko kahe raha tha. achcha laga sun ki aap ko mera likha achcha laga...ji haa maine jo likha hai ye aaj kal ki soch pyaar ko le kar jo hai us par likha hai...mujhe sach mein aisa lagta hai pyaar jaisa kuch hai hi nahi...shukriya aap ke duaon ke liye.

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Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!


Good One .... Praneeta Ji !!!

Nice Poetry .... !
shukriya Naresh ji
thanks a lot for liking

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Waah G wah! baut chngi nazm likkhi PRANEETA G aapne! V nice.....I liked the what you call non-banawati lehja used a mean saadgi lehje ki aur andaz-e-bayan baut achchay lagay!
U know what mai sochreya tha k teacher g intrview mein inni bz hogaii theen k shayri he bool gaiin but u answered just in time!
Take care and keep writing G!
shukriya ji shukriya tareef ke liye AJNABI ji...ji haan non-banawati hi raheti hai hamesha meri poetries...aur simple bhi...ji main likhna toh nahi bhuli par post karne ko mann kabhi kabhi nahi karta...shayad is liye ki kuch zyada hi dard de chuki hun main readers ko through my poetries...dard ka dose ab kam karna chahti hun

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praneeta ji
radhe radhe

bahut khoobsurat aehsaas likhe hain .... dil se daad ....

Ishk sahab
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shukriya ji pasand karne ke liye....dil se daad qabul hai
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Acchhee koshish rahi pari aapki is baar bhi har baar ki tarah.. Magar itnaa dard dil me kab tak sanjoye rakhna? Behtar hai ise nikaal fekiye.. Allah aapko sukoon de. Likhti raheN..

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Shaad ji....shukriya pasand karne ke liye...hmmm koshish toh yahi hai ki apna dard dil se nikaal sakun through my poetries...par lagta toh nahi hai ki aisa ho paa raha hai...kuch naya likhne ke baad bas thode hi dinon tak sukun raheta hai dil ko aur fir wahi silsila wapas shuru...dard dard sirf dard

aap ke duaon ke liye shukriya
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Pyari pari....tumhare yeh ahsaas padkar aisa lag rha hai ki jaise aisa hi kuch padne ka dil tha...aur padkar dil ko sakoon mila...sakoon kyu milaa nahi pta, jabki es meiN to bahut daba hua dard hai, jo pta nahi kab se dil meiN chupaye rakha tha tumne...dear dil dard baantne se dard kam ho jata hai aur khushi baantne se dugni ho jati hai...so ham dard aur khushi dono meiN saath hai...!

bahut acche ahsaas hai...dil se daad hazir hai.

pyar aur duaoN ke saath
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mere dil ko ye jaan kar sukun pahucha ki aap ko ye poetry achchi lagi...mujhe bhi nahi pata hota hai aksar ki main dard se bhara poetry likh kar relieved kyun ho jati hun...bhale sirf kuch dinon ke liye hi
aap toh jaanti hi hai ki mere har poetry mein dard beshumar bhara sahi...dard baantne se shayad mera dard aur bhi badh raha hai...
par mujhe khushi hai ki jo bhi ho sukh, dukh, sukun, dard, aap mere saath hai...tabhi toh aap DII hain
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Wo kahete hain
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Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
gaddari nahi chalti!
Apno se ki gayi koi
baimaani nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli haa pyaar mein
aisa daur bhi hai chalta!
Jab nadaan dil par
koi zor nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein toh ab
pyaar bhi nahi chalta!
vishwaas bharosa imaandari
ah...aetbaar nahi chalta!
ji sundar aur khoobsurat rachna ..........



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shukriya dost...thanks for this lovely comment
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Main boli pyaar mein
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Ashqon aur bebasi ka
tofa nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
gaddari nahi chalti!
Apno se ki gayi koi
baimaani nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli haa pyaar mein
aisa daur bhi hai chalta!
Jab nadaan dil par
koi zor nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein toh ab
pyaar bhi nahi chalta!
vishwaas bharosa imaandari
ah...aetbaar nahi chalta!
pyaar men to ab pyaar bhee nahee chaltaa

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Ashqon aur bebasi ka
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Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
gaddari nahi chalti!
Apno se ki gayi koi
baimaani nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein
judaayi nahi chalti!
Berukhi sahi par sanam ki
bewafai nahi chalti!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli haa pyaar mein
aisa daur bhi hai chalta!
Jab nadaan dil par
koi zor nahi chalta!

Wo kahete hain
pyaar mein sab chalta hai...
Main boli pyaar mein toh ab
pyaar bhi nahi chalta!
vishwaas bharosa imaandari
ah...aetbaar nahi chalta!
Tasleemaat Praneeta Behen,
Aap jo bhi boleen sachcha boleen! Seedha tahay qalb say boleen! Aur hamayn bayhad pasand aayee ye nazm! Buhat khoob! Daad qabool karayn!

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