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Dost! - 29th January 2005, 12:26 AM
Hope you all like it...

Lehron me doob te rahe dariya nahi mila,
Us se bichar ke phir koi waisa nahi mila,
Kuch log thodi der to acche lage ,
Magar hum jiske ho sake koi aisa nahi mila...

Har kadam pe imtihaan leti hai zindagi,
Har waqt naya sadma deti hai zindagi,
Hum zindagi se shikwa kaise karen,
Tujh jaisa dost bhi to deti hai zindagi....
   
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22nd March 2005, 05:27 PM
Hey Parul what you have written is really very nice.

Zindagi se shikwa kaise karen hum
Tuj jesa dost bhi to deti hai zindagi...

Great going mate! Keep smiling. Keep Shining TC

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parulji

Lehron me doob te rahe dariya nahi mila,
Us se bichar ke phir koi waisa nahi mila,
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Magar hum jiske ho sake koi aisa nahi mila...

bahut khoob likha hai aapne

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Thanks for appreciation jhalak & Sonal...
   
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Re: Dost! - 19th July 2005, 07:33 PM
Lehron me doob te rahe dariya nahi mila,
Us se bichar ke phir koi waisa nahi mila,
Kuch log thodi der to acche lage ,
Magar hum jiske ho sake koi aisa nahi mila...

Har kadam pe imtihaan leti hai zindagi,
Har waqt naya sadma deti hai zindagi,
Hum zindagi se shikwa kaise karen,
Tujh jaisa dost bhi to deti hai zindagi.... [/B][/QUOTE]


Hi Parul Ji
Wah wahhhhhhhh..... Very well written indeed.....
Don know what else to say..u said it all ...i really enjoyed reading it . I hv been reading yr posts..... aap aise hi likhte rahiyega

Bepanaah pyar hai aajaaa... tera intezaar hai ajaa...Suna suna...lamha lamha ..mere rahein tanha tanha..mudh ke zara ab dekh lo....
   
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Thanks for appreciation..... will try to write more! take care*
   
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20th July 2005, 11:07 AM
Too Good Keep writing


Take Care


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Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


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hye parul


very nice, ur writing style is too good.........
keep it up.............

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Parul - 20th July 2005, 11:17 PM
Parul,

Saru lakhe chhe.....


-Ashish

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fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh...
   
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Nidhi ji, kajal ji and Aashish ji... I appreciate your replies... Thanks!
   
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22nd July 2005, 12:26 PM
Ye mujh waakai pasand aaya...

great work parul...

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INTRODUCTION:APRECIATION:PARUL - 22nd July 2005, 11:05 PM
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Thanks for replying to even the smallest good creation of any good shayar....

I have noticed that.........

Friends we all should (must) apreciate her efforts of apreciating and inspiring everybody to write.........clapss...clapss...for parul...

by heart...

-Dr.Ashish

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Parul Ji,


Bahoot achha likha hai aapne..

bahoot achha laga padhkar

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likhti rehna

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Re: INTRODUCTION:APRECIATION:PARUL - 23rd July 2005, 04:04 PM
Indeed ........... Parul ji`s efforts shd really b appreciated ......thats very sweet of her ..... Aise hi rahiyega Parul ji..khoob khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye...hum aap ki saari posts padhte rehte hain...

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HEY PARUL VERY NICE..AND VERY TOUCHY




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Re: Dost! - 29th July 2005, 05:04 PM
Hope you all like it...

Lehron me doob te rahe dariya nahi mila,
Us se bichar ke phir koi waisa nahi mila,
Kuch log thodi der to acche lage ,
Magar hum jiske ho sake koi aisa nahi mila...

Har kadam pe imtihaan leti hai zindagi,
Har waqt naya sadma deti hai zindagi,
Hum zindagi se shikwa kaise karen,
Tujh jaisa dost bhi to deti hai zindagi....

wah waah...

bahut achchha likha hai...
pasand aaya...
   
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