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GHAZAL : Lafz Kaa Wazan ... -
17th October 2015, 07:39 PM
Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho
Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ... Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ... Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ... Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ... Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ... Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ... Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ... YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh" Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ... ...................... Naresh Mehra ...................  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th October 2015, 10:11 AM
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Kya khoob alfaaz piroye hain aapne har sher behad khoobsoorat aur utna hee gahra...bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye ghazal.... Dil se dher sari daad qubool kijiyega... Yun hee likhte rahiye aate rahiye..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th October 2015, 10:44 AM
bahut khoob mehra saahab....................
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21st October 2015, 09:35 AM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd October 2015, 05:05 AM
originally posted by Naresh Mehra
GHAZAL : Lafz Kaa Wazan ... - 17th October 2015, 07:39 PM Lafz Kaa ........ Wazan ToDh Kar Dekho Ghazal MeN ....... Asal JoDh Kar Dekho ... Jab .... Aaye'N.. Mushkile Saamne Toh Haath Se PatThar ..... ToDh Kar Dekho ... Dard Saaraa ....... Baahar Aa Jayegaa Aankh Ka Paani ... NichoDh Kar Dekho ... Kitni.... Dushmani Hai Tumhare Andar Apne ...... Dil Ko JhanjhoDh Kar Dekho ... Kuch Bhi NahiN BigDhaa Hai ....... Abhi Pair , Chaadar MeN SukoDh Kar Dekho ... Kitne Maze Se ToDh Li .. PeDh Ki Tahni Zara .. Apni Kalaaii MaroDh Kar Dekho ... Intnaa Kamaao'N Ke Phir Tum YahaaN Um'r Ki Ginti .. Sau KaroDh Kar Dekho ... YuuN .NahiN Rukenge Qadam "Naresh" Apni ... Aarzuuye'N ChhoDh Kar Dekho ... bahut khoob Mehra ji daad hazir hai rajinderseep |
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27th October 2015, 11:41 PM
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Nawaazish Aap Kii ........... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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28th October 2015, 11:57 PM
Bohut khoob Naresh ji.....
Ped ki tehni wala sher dil ko lag gaya....uske liye lag se mubarakbaad. Second last sher samajh nahi aaya. Kabhi waqt mile to SamjhaiyegA. Daad kabool kijiye.... Sarika |
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29th October 2015, 09:44 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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14th November 2015, 11:11 AM
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Inaayat Aap Ki ......... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th November 2015, 09:50 AM
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Namaste Bhaiyaa  aaj subha subha aaopke likhe ehsaas padne ko miley, aapka naam saamne dekh kar bahut sakoon milla aate rha kijiye, accha lga aapko padkar.regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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16th November 2015, 11:49 AM
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dheroN daad aur mubaarakbaad hamari jaanib se ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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16th November 2015, 05:12 PM
wah bahut khoob naresh bhai..................................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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