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chalo aaj hum dono - 22nd July 2006, 12:54 PM

Chalo aaj hum dono muskuraayen
tum humen bhool jaao,hum tumhe bhool jaayen

na tum ashq bahaao na hum ashq bahaayen
ye zahar hum piyen na ke pilaayen

shor-o-gul ki iss duniya mein e 'neer'
khaamosh reh kar bhi khayaal na aayen

intihaa muflisi ki mujh mein dekho tum
tishna labon ki pyaas mere ashq hi bujhaayen

udaas rehne ki aadat na ghazalon mein kaho 'neer'
maasoom dilon se kyon hansee churaayen

kyonkar wo khush hai bhool kar humen
chalo yaad aayen,chalo yaad aayen

aaiina hoon apne hi maazi ka main
gunaah-o-sazaayen sab meri aankhen bataayen

royenge dil-e-muntezir,tootenge dil-e-be-aas
unn pe kya asar ,wo aayen na aayen

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24th July 2006, 08:16 PM

acha likha aapne pankaj ji,yeh sher ache lage,

Chalo aaj hum dono muskuraayen
tum humen bhool jaao,hum tumhe bhool jaayen

na tum ashq bahaao na hum ashq bahaayen
ye zahar hum piyen na ke pilaayen

kaash ke bhooljana kisi ko itna asaan hota.
likhte rahiye.


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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25th July 2006, 11:41 AM

Akelijaan...................Bohat shukriya aapka.
aapko mera likha kuchh pasand aayaa,main mamnoon hoon.

yaad karake aur bhii takaliif hotii thii "Adeem"
bhuul jaane ke sivaa ab ko_ii bhii chaaraa na thaa

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Re: chalo aaj hum dono - 25th July 2006, 11:56 AM

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Chalo aaj hum dono muskuraayen
tum humen bhool jaao,hum tumhe bhool jaayen

na tum ashq bahaao na hum ashq bahaayen
ye zahar hum piyen na ke pilaayen

shor-o-gul ki iss duniya mein e 'neer'
khaamosh reh kar bhi khayaal na aayen

intihaa muflisi ki mujh mein dekho tum
tishna labon ki pyaas mere ashq hi bujhaayen

udaas rehne ki aadat na ghazalon mein kaho 'neer'
maasoom dilon se kyon hansee churaayen

kyonkar wo khush hai bhool kar humen
chalo yaad aayen,chalo yaad aayen

aaiina hoon apne hi maazi ka main
gunaah-o-sazaayen sab meri aankhen bataayen

royenge dil-e-muntezir,tootenge dil-e-be-aas
unn pe kya asar ,wo aayen na aayen

muntezir
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Pankaj ji bahut achha likha hai appney, mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.


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25th July 2006, 01:43 PM

Sunita ji.....................namaskaar.

Ghazal pasand karne aur mubaraqbaad bhejne ke liye bohat bohat shukriya.


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28th July 2006, 03:07 PM

intihaa muflisi ki mujh mein dekho tum
tishna labon ki pyaas mere ashq hi bujhaayen


waah! kya khoob baat kahii hai aap ne.. Mere jaaniib se daad haazir hai..

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shukriya ...................Mayank ji.

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4th August 2006, 09:44 PM

Pankaj ji,

Bahut badhiya likha hain aapne, aap ko pehli baar parha hain, parh ke achha laga, kalam pe daad kubul karna meri, aur aaise hi likhte rahiye.
   
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5th August 2006, 12:11 PM

Bohat bohat shukriya Parul ji himmat afzaaii ke liye.
Aap log saath dete rahe to aise hi mehfil jawaan rahegi.

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