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Kissi bahaar to yuu.n bhi ho - 9th September 2006, 02:34 PM

kissi bahaar to yuu.n bhi ho,teri qurbat mujhe naseeb ho
bahaar mei.n phir bahaar ho,tum agar qareeb ho

bas dard dikhna chahiye,mai.n maanind-e-dawa ghul jaaunga
mai.n sochta nahee.n hoo.n phir rafeeq ho ya raqeeb ho

yahaa.n daulat-e-khuluus se mehroom hai.n sabhi
yahaa.n sab ke sab ghareeb hai.n ,koi ameer ho ya ghareeb ho

dardmand to sab hai.n magar humdard yahaa.n koi nahee.n
dard baantne ki kaash yahaa.n koi to tehzeeb ho

fikr-o-malaal ke khaar hai.n,zehan mai.n koi gul nahee.n
ummeedo.n ke chiraag ho.n,khushiyo.n ki koi tarqeeb ho

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9th September 2006, 10:24 PM

yahaa.n daulat-e-khuluus se mehroom hai.n sabhi
yahaa.n sab ke sab ghareeb hai.n ,koi ameer ho ya ghareeb ho

dardmand to sab hai.n magar humdard yahaa.n koi nahee.n
dard baantne ki kaash yahaa.n koi to tehzeeb ho

pankaj ji,
waah waah bas waah.kya kehne aapke.acha hue jo bhule se hi sahio aaj mai yeh forum surf karne bethi,warna itna khoobsurat kalaam kabhi na padh paati.bahut acha likha aapne.haqeekat se bharpoor.yeh do Ashaar bahut pasand aaye.likhte rahiye.


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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11th September 2006, 11:21 AM

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yahaa.n daulat-e-khuluus se mehroom hai.n sabhi
yahaa.n sab ke sab ghareeb hai.n ,koi ameer ho ya ghareeb ho

dardmand to sab hai.n magar humdard yahaa.n koi nahee.n
dard baantne ki kaash yahaa.n koi to tehzeeb ho

pankaj ji,
waah waah bas waah.kya kehne aapke.acha hue jo bhule se hi sahio aaj mai yeh forum surf karne bethi,warna itna khoobsurat kalaam kabhi na padh paati.bahut acha likha aapne.haqeekat se bharpoor.yeh do Ashaar bahut pasand aaye.likhte rahiye.
Kalaam pasand karne ka bohat shukriya..........Akelijaan ji.
Aap jaise dost hausla baRhte rahenge to likhne ki wajahen aur pukhta hongi.

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11th September 2006, 12:43 PM

hi panakaj


bahot achhi peshkas hai aaapki

bas yuhi aaplikhte rahiyega ,mujhe ye pasasnd aayi

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11th September 2006, 12:49 PM

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hi panakaj


bahot achhi peshkas hai aaapki

bas yuhi aaplikhte rahiyega ,mujhe ye pasasnd aayi

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wah kia kahoon bilkul sach bayaan ker dia aap ne buhut aala likha hai aesay hi likhtay raho
   
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wah kia kahoon bilkul sach bayaan ker dia aap ne buhut aala likha hai aesay hi likhtay raho
Moon sahab..................Adaab.
Bohat bohat shukriya ghazal pasand karne ke liye.

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15th September 2006, 07:26 PM

main sahab nahi sahiba hoon plz moon se ghalat samjhay hain app
   
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Muaaf kijiyega.............................moon saahiba.
   
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