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Hairaton ke silsile soz'e nehaa tak aagaye..
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Hairaton ke silsile soz'e nehaa tak aagaye.. - 10th May 2008, 02:40 AM

Hairaton Ke Silsile soze nihaaa tak aa gaye
hum to dil tak chahte the tum to jaa tak aaagaye

zulf mein khushboo na thi ya rang aariz mein na tha
aap kis ki justju mein gulsitaa tak agaye

KHUD TUMHEN CHAAKE GAREBAAa KA SHA-OOR AAJAYEGA
TUM WAHAA TAK AAA TO JAO HUM JAHAN TAK AAGAYE


un ki palkon pe sitaare, apne honto pe hansi
qissa-e gham kehte kehte hum YAHAA tak aagaye


na jiski shakl hai koi, na jiska naam hai koi - ek aisi shae ka kyun hamein azal se intezaar hai...
   
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10th May 2008, 02:44 AM

very nice ...............
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Hairaton Ke Silsile soze nihaaa tak aa gaye
hum to dil tak chahte the tum to jaa tak aaagaye

zulf mein khushboo na thi ya rang aariz mein na tha
aap kis ki justju mein gulsitaa tak agaye

KHUD TUMHEN CHAAKE GAREBAAa KA SHA-OOR AAJAYEGA
TUM WAHAA TAK AAA TO JAO HUM JAHAN TAK AAGAYE


un ki palkon pe sitaare, apne honto pe hansi
qissa-e gham kehte kehte hum YAHAA tak aagaye
   
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10th May 2008, 02:48 AM

wo Meer ki Ghazal ho ke Ghalib ki Shayri
naghme tamaam saaz'e rag'e jaa se aaye hain

HI yash..
Thnx 4 d comment


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12th May 2008, 11:02 AM

wafa ke naam se wo anjaan the
lagta hai kisi ki bewafi se pareshaan the
hum ne deni chahi wafa unko pr
dunia me hum pehle hi BEWAFA K NAAM SE THE
   
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12th May 2008, 12:08 PM

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Hairaton Ke Silsile soze nihaaa tak aa gaye
hum to dil tak chahte the tum to jaa tak aaagaye

zulf mein khushboo na thi ya rang aariz mein na tha
aap kis ki justju mein gulsitaa tak agaye

KHUD TUMHEN CHAAKE GAREBAAa KA SHA-OOR AAJAYEGA
TUM WAHAA TAK AAA TO JAO HUM JAHAN TAK AAGAYE


un ki palkon pe sitaare, apne honto pe hansi
qissa-e gham kehte kehte hum YAHAA tak aagaye
good creation.........


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12th May 2008, 12:34 PM

Aashna ji.............aapne yeh galat jagah post kiya haiN......aapko isko mashahoor shayri section mein post karna tha.....kyunki yeh qabil ajmeri jee ka kalam hain...apko unka naam bhi mention karna tha...ummed hain aap age se dhyan rakhenge....... hum puri ghazal complete kar dete hain

hairato.n ke sil_sile soz-e-nihaa.N tak aa gaye
ham nazar tak chaahate the tum to jaa.N tak aa gaye

naamuraadii apanii qismat gum_raahii apanaa nasiib
kaaravaa.N kii Khair ho ham kaaravaa.N tak aa gaye

un kii palako.n par sitaare apane ho.nTho.n pe ha.Nsii
qissaa-e-Gam kahate kahate ham kahaa.N tak aa gaye

apanii apanii justajuu hai apanaa apanaa shauq hai
tum ha.Nsii tak bhii na pahu.Nche ham fuGaa.N tak aa gaye

zulf me.n Khushbuu na thii yaa rang aariz me.n na thaa
aap kis kii aarazuu me.n gulistaa.N tak aa gaye

raftaa raftaa rang laayaa jazbaa-e-Khaamoshii-e-ishq
vo taGaaful karate karate imtihaa.N tak aa gaye

Khud tumhe.n chaak-e-girebaa.N kaa sha_uur aa jaayegaa
tum vahaa.N tak aa to jaao ham jahaa.N tak aa gaye

aaj 'Qabil' maikade me.n inqalaab aane ko hai
ahal-e-dil andeshaa-e-suud-o-ziyaa.N tak aa gaye



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Jaane kya samjhi main useN

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14th May 2008, 01:53 AM

Thnk U very much Mausam (Ji

"Hairaton ke silsile.." ye ghazal Asha Bhosle ki awaz mein mere pass hai.
Maine ise post is liye kiya ke log is ghazal se mehzooz ho saken.
MAGAR POORI GHAZAL POST KARNE KE LIYE SHUKRIYA...mujhe bhi kuch mil gaya.
Thanx again.


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