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Love main jal raha hoon - 29th August 2003, 05:59 PM

meri chahat ka tu zara andaaz to kar...
tu khadi hai dhoop mein main jal raha hoon..



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awarapan banjarapan ek khla hai seene mein...
hurpal hurdam bechaini hai kaun bala hai seene mein....
   
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29th August 2003, 07:23 PM

waaah
itni mohabbat
bohot khoooob


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30th August 2003, 05:07 AM

Kabir Jee, keya baat kaha aapne.
Iske bare meh keya kehsakte hein hum.
Aap khudh hi samajhdar hein, khudh samajhle. Thanks.
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2nd September 2003, 05:08 PM

Kabir ji..

Humne aapke kaii sher paRe hain, aur bhale hi humne un sab par reply nahi kiya, lekin har ek hume behad pasand aaya. Apke khayaalaat ki daad deni chahiye.. apka andaaz e bayaan bhi kabil e tareef hai!.. Jaise is sher me apni chahaat ki intehaa bakhoobi pesh ki hai aapne.. Us par aapke ashaar me saadgi aur khubsoorti dono beshumaar milte hain.. umeed karte hain ki aap yunhi likhte rahenge..


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