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"uski aas mei.n jo dil ke aas-pass hai" -ek ghazal
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"uski aas mei.n jo dil ke aas-pass hai" -ek ghazal - 25th December 2003, 03:26 PM

Pahlee baar aap ke beech apnee shayari rakh raha hoo.n
apke bebaaq mashvaro.n kaa intezaar rahega


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uski aas mei.n jo dil ke aas-pass hai
bevajah hee aankh mei.n paani udaas hai

usne jaane kaun se lahze mei.n baat kee
uske har ik lafz kaa kaisaa libaas hai

vo shajar sab mausmo.n mei.n thaa hara-bharaa
kuch to hai jo us shjar mei.n khaas - khaas hai

Mai.n tamaam umr bas khud kaa bana raha
kaash mai.n bhee sochtaa jo aas-pass hai

raaste mei.n bohat see dushvaariyaa.n huyee.n
manzilo.n se par mujhe rastaa hee raas hai

tashnagi see tashnagi hai har ghazal ke paas
aur har ik lafz mei.n sadiyo.n kee pyaas hai
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Shukriya

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hi - 9th January 2004, 03:19 PM

hi rahul sahab
how ru ?
aap ki shayri parh kar ehsas hwa k aik acha shayar hmare bech main agya..
ham aap ko wellcoem kahene k sath sath aik darkwast karain gain k aap yahan ate rahiye ga...ham parhte rahain gain aap ko..good man good....
ham yahan se kuch ashar le kar bazme lazte kaif ...khishi ka kona...
main post kar rahe hain...hmain ache lage hain
take care..
aik banjara''''
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10th January 2004, 08:11 AM

Banjra Sahab !

Taareef ke liye Shukriya. Aap ko sher pasa.Nd aaye , mujhe khushee huyee. Jahaa.n tak achche Shayr hone kee baat hai mai.N bas ye kahna cjahoo.Ngaa ki mai.N abhee naya hoo.N aur seekhne kee koshish mei.N hoo.N.

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13th January 2004, 01:56 AM

that is so wonderful...very nice..keep writing..


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