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Post words cant explain...... - 30th March 2005, 06:37 AM

Words can't explain



Was it a dream or a real day?
When I was speechless & nothing to say
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain that day.

I thought one day you will be mine
Does I have a right to see a dream so fine?
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my dream.

I proposed & said "I love you"
She said, " I am so proud to have a friend like you"
Standing still, just looking at you
Words can't explain my love.

I said, "May you be happy forever"
Your mother's choice was it
With whom you will live forever
Words cant't explain my feelings.

God made you, so proud will he be,
I left the country, went away.
Did you ever think how I will be?
Words can't explain my sadness.

In my life I never married
Lived my life
With the dream of her that I carried
Words can't explain this poem.
   
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hi - 30th March 2005, 11:09 AM

Thats tooooo goooood yaar....
Keep it up....

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hi ajmal - 31st March 2005, 06:25 AM

hi ajmal....
thnx for reply.....
that poem is actually written by me .....really me.....but ppl in shayri.com are not replying so i dont know whether ppl liked it or not.....did u like it?
   
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Hi Yashad - 31st March 2005, 10:19 AM

Hi Yashad,
Bahot achcha likha hai aapne.....
I m Impressed......
AIse hi likhte rahiyega.....

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1st April 2005, 05:44 PM

hi

bahut hi khoob
very nice
likhte rahiye

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2nd April 2005, 07:16 AM

hi sonal....i think ur punjabi....
yeh jo post thi woh "asi de putar ne likhi thi....just kidding..ti dontk now punjabi much but little bit....hnx for reply .....
   
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