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tum aur tumahree taseer - 24th January 2006, 02:50 PM
zindgee ke aaj kal aise hisab milte hain
tumhe jab neend miltee hai mujhe tab khab milte hain
tum phoolon main khiltee ho tab main mahakata hoon
aur khud ko apnee ghazalon kee kitab main rakhata hoon
us kitab ko tumhare hatho se dhakata hoon
tum jab ayeena dekho main khud ko anzar ata hoon
mera har safar tumahre kadam hain main khud kahan jata hoon
tum jab chaltee ho
mujho ko manzil miltee hai
tumhe jab afatab choota hai
mere dil kee barf pighalee hai
tum jab sans letee ho mujhe zindgee miltee hai
tumhare charagon se mujhe roshnee miltee hai
mujh main ab jo hota hai tum hee to kartee ho
main khalee tha khalee hoon
woh tum ho jo mujhe bhartee ho
mujh main har soo tumahree taseer hai
mera chehra mera nahee tumahree tasweer hai
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Re: tum aur tumahree taseer - 27th January 2006, 05:31 PM
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zindgee ke aaj kal aise hisab milte hain
tumhe jab neend miltee hai mujhe tab khab milte hain
tum phoolon main khiltee ho tab main mahakata hoon
aur khud ko apnee ghazalon kee kitab main rakhata hoon
us kitab ko tumhare hatho se dhakata hoon
tum jab ayeena dekho main khud ko anzar ata hoon
mera har safar tumahre kadam hain main khud kahan jata hoon
tum jab chaltee ho
mujho ko manzil miltee hai
tumhe jab afatab choota hai
mere dil kee barf pighalee hai
tum jab sans letee ho mujhe zindgee miltee hai
tumhare charagon se mujhe roshnee miltee hai
mujh main ab jo hota hai tum hee to kartee ho
main khalee tha khalee hoon
woh tum ho jo mujhe bhartee ho
mujh main har soo tumahree taseer hai
mera chehra mera nahee tumahree tasweer hai
pyar ka ye ehsaas achhe lage itni puja pyar ki itna samarpan subder bhaut sunder

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sunadar - 27th January 2006, 05:35 PM
shardhha tumahre shabd meree kavita ko aur sundar kar dete hain bahut dil se likhee thee tum ne parha to aage barhne kee rah mil agyee kavita ko
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Re: tum aur tumahree taseer - 27th January 2006, 05:52 PM
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zindgee ke aaj kal aise hisab milte hain
tumhe jab neend miltee hai mujhe tab khab milte hain
tum phoolon main khiltee ho tab main mahakata hoon
aur khud ko apnee ghazalon kee kitab main rakhata hoon
us kitab ko tumhare hatho se dhakata hoon
tum jab ayeena dekho main khud ko anzar ata hoon
mera har safar tumahre kadam hain main khud kahan jata hoon
tum jab chaltee ho
mujho ko manzil miltee hai
tumhe jab afatab choota hai
mere dil kee barf pighalee hai
tum jab sans letee ho mujhe zindgee miltee hai
tumhare charagon se mujhe roshnee miltee hai
mujh main ab jo hota hai tum hee to kartee ho
main khalee tha khalee hoon
woh tum ho jo mujhe bhartee ho
mujh main har soo tumahree taseer hai
mera chehra mera nahee tumahree tasweer hai
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thanks nidhi - 28th January 2006, 07:57 AM
nidhi bas aise hee mujeh parhte rahana kamee ho to bhee kahate rahana main achha aur achha likhne kee koshish karata rahoonag
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Re: tum aur tumahree taseer - 28th January 2006, 09:18 PM
Masoomshayer ji ..its so simple yet so deep ...not every1 can write this way.... keep it up...really enjoyed reading it

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Angeleyes - 11th February 2006, 11:28 AM
shukriya bahut bahut tum ne ise parha aur samjha bhee
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23rd March 2006, 04:13 PM
tum jab chaltee ho
mujho ko manzil miltee hai
tumhe jab afatab choota hai
mere dil kee barf pighalee hai
tum jab sans letee ho mujhe zindgee miltee hai
tumhare charagon se mujhe roshnee miltee hai
mujh main ab jo hota hai tum hee to kartee ho
main khalee tha khalee hoon
woh tum ho jo mujhe bhartee ho
mujh main har soo tumahree taseer hai
mera chehra mera nahee tumahree tasweer hai

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reply - 23rd March 2006, 07:49 PM
bhut acha likha apne
apki har shayri ak se badkar ak hoti hai jise pdhne ka man apne aap hi karta hai


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har baar kee tarah - 23rd March 2006, 07:50 PM
har baar kee tarah is baar bhee tumahre meree kavita par ana bahut achha laga mujeh bas yoon hee kabhee waqt detee rahana shukriya
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12th July 2006, 12:23 AM
Dard se kuchh lines yaad aai... friendnidhi...

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When "I" comes in Love...then only pain comes...

But...Love is forever...

Chhap tilak sab chhin li re moh se naina milay ke.....Le gai hai chain...sukoon...lakhte jigar...saans bhi behti hai to bolti hai...dard-ejigar...dard-e-jigar...dard-e-jigar...Ek ehsaas ho tum...rooh pe tum chhai ho...mein gar banda hoon to Jaan...tum khudaai ho...
   
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12th July 2006, 07:02 PM
anil ji,
muhabbat ke jazbe ko bahut hi behtareen andaaz mai shakal di hai.gehraayi se bhar poor.bahut acha laga padhkar.

tum jab sans letee ho mujhe zindgee miltee hai
tumhare charagon se mujhe roshnee miltee hai
mujh main ab jo hota hai tum hee to kartee ho
main khalee tha khalee hoon
woh tum ho jo mujhe bhartee ho
mujh main har soo tumahree taseer hai
mera chehra mera nahee tumahree tasweer hai

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Very good...masoom shayar...
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Very good...masoom shayar... - 16th July 2006, 12:03 AM
Masoom shayar...

Dost...its really touching...


main khalee tha khalee hoon
woh tum ho jo mujhe bhartee ho


I beleive... "True Love is the reflection of a clear soul"

Chhap tilak sab chhin li re moh se naina milay ke.....Le gai hai chain...sukoon...lakhte jigar...saans bhi behti hai to bolti hai...dard-ejigar...dard-e-jigar...dard-e-jigar...Ek ehsaas ho tum...rooh pe tum chhai ho...mein gar banda hoon to Jaan...tum khudaai ho...
   
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shukriya akelee jan - 17th July 2006, 10:44 PM
bahut bahut shukriya meree shayree ko itne pyar se parhne ke liye
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nirmohi - 17th July 2006, 10:45 PM
nirmohi aap ka bahut bahut shukriya aap ne jo likha woh bhee bahut sunder hai
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Only one among million...
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Only one among million... - 20th July 2006, 07:05 PM
To be loved by a million people isnt a miracle...the miracle is to be loved by a person who will stand by you in a million ways...

Chhap tilak sab chhin li re moh se naina milay ke.....Le gai hai chain...sukoon...lakhte jigar...saans bhi behti hai to bolti hai...dard-ejigar...dard-e-jigar...dard-e-jigar...Ek ehsaas ho tum...rooh pe tum chhai ho...mein gar banda hoon to Jaan...tum khudaai ho...
   
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Tarike... - 20th July 2006, 11:34 PM
Aankhon ko dhone ke,honge tarike aur bhi duniya me...
magar afsos...vo ham ko zara bhi raas nahi aaye...

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wah - 21st July 2006, 10:01 AM
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really good.........
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really good......... - 22nd July 2006, 03:57 PM
aisa lagta hai ki tune chhu liya man ko
shabd bankar dhadkan jila rahi tan ko
naman hai tumako anil aur tumahre arpan ko

keep it dear
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dhanyavad dheeraj - 22nd July 2006, 09:49 PM
bahut bahut shukriya dheeraj
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Shukriya...Thanks... - 22nd July 2006, 11:55 PM
Thanks masoom shayar...



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Rub Dilaa(n) Wich Wasda...


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its nice - 23rd July 2006, 06:38 AM
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masoomshayer ko akhir ye kaun sa mazhab soojha hai
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Samaj... - 5th August 2006, 12:07 PM
Bas itni si samaj muje parvardigaar de...
sukh jab jahaan mile...tu sabhi ke vichaar de...


Parvardigaar=god

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4th October 2007, 12:47 AM
Bahut khoob Anil ji....

Bahut hi umda likha hai aapne!

Aise hi mehfil me rang bharte rahiye

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