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Ek Adhoori Kavita... - 19th May 2006, 02:50 PM

Ek Adhoori Kavita…..


Kavita jo adhoori rah gayi…..

Ye nahi ki main puri nahi karna chahta tha,

Par baat agar kalam ke saath chodne ka hota,

Ya shabdo ke saath chodne ka hota,

Ya bhavnao ke shoonya hone ka hota,

Ya shabdo ke bhav-poorn sanyojan ka hota.

Par ye sab to hai mere saath,

Nahi hai to bas tumahari upastithi mere vajood ke saath

Jis se kavita poori honi thi.



Aisa bhi nahi ki tumahara vajood nahi hai,,, parantu….

Bhavnao ke samandar mein tum mere saath nahi,,,,

Shabdo ka sanyojan mushkil ho gaya tumhare bina.

Tum aksar is kavita ki baat karti thi, jo main tumhare liye sanyojit karna chaha tha.

Par tum kabhi samajh nahi payi, kabhi padh nahi payi in aankho mein us kavita ko…..

Kabhi meri bhavnao ko aatam-saat nahi kiya.



Ektarfa hi sahi, par gustakhi ki thi maine tumhe chahne ki, tumse apni kavita puri karne ki

bhool ki thi maine,,,tumhe man hi man apna sarvasva manne ki.

Bhool jana tum mujhe … thik usi tarah jaise parchai bhool jati hai vajood apna raat mein

Jhar dena tum mujhe … pustak pe padi dhool ki tarah,,,apni yaado ke gulshan se…

Bas Ek hi kamna hai….Khoos raho sada, jahan kahi bhi raho,

Hamesha kadam chume safalta tumhari.




Ye kavita to Adhoori rahni thi……Kyonki gushtakhi meri thi ,,,

Tumhe shabdo mein bandhkar ,

Kavita puri karne ki……..
   
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9th June 2006, 11:50 PM

Well Rahatji,

Aisa lagta hai ki aane ye kavita jiske liye likhi wo aapko mila nahi
Par koi baat "kabhi kisi ko mukammil jahan nahi milta........."

I hope aapke jo mila honga uske uppar aapne kuch to zaroor likha honga pls do share it with us

aur ha likhte rahiyenga aap bahut accha likhte hai.. keep it up


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