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Aisa Nahi - 22nd May 2006, 05:29 PM

Aisa Nahi…




Ham ek dusre se door rahenge

Parantu aisa nahi,

Ham utne paas bhi rahenge

Jitna ki Lahre va Kinara.

Ham ek dusre se door chale jayenge

Parantu aisa nahi,

Ham utne nazdik bhi rahenge

Jaise ki Aakash ke Taare va Raat, Seep va Moti.

Ham ek dusre se alag bhi honge

Parantu aisa nahi,

Ham saath-saath bhi honge

Jaise ki Prakruti ke phool va Khoosboo.

Tum chale jaoge par thode se yahan bhi rah jaoge,

Jaise rah jati hai Mitti ki sondhi khoosboo…pehli baris ke baad…….
   
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22nd May 2006, 06:14 PM

Rahat Ji,
Bahaut khubsoorti se aapne 2 alag alag shabdon ka ek saath parichay karaaya hai. lajawaab hai yeh......

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22nd May 2006, 08:19 PM

Thanks and i need more so that i write much better.You also read my Ek AdhooriKavita....
   
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24th May 2006, 12:16 AM

Rahatji,

Aapki kavitaen padh kar dil ko ajib si rahat si mili. Lekin is dard bhare nagmo ke alawa kuch khushi pe bhi likha kiyije

jaise ki mai kehta hu

Zindagi Bahut hasin hai yaara zara muskura aur dekh le......


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