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"Koi majboor na ho" - 24th October 2006, 11:51 AM

dosto aap sabko mera pyar bhara namaskar..........!

aaj phir kuch ahsaas lekar aapke samney hu, aapne jazbaato ko kalam se likhney ki koshish ki hai, shayad aapko pasand aa jaye.

“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

aapki dost


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wah ji wah - 24th October 2006, 12:02 PM

“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

sunita ji appko raj ka pyar bhara namaskaar....appki nazam maine parhi appki tanhai ko samjhne ki koshish ki...magar appki nazam main chhupe dard ko mehsoos karne ke baad khud tanha mehsoos karne lagga hoon....bhut acha likha hai appne...ap khud ko kabhi tanha mat samjhna poora shyar pariwaar appke saath hai or hamari duaayain appke saath hai....meri daad kabool karna....yu hee likhti rehna.....take care......raj.......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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24th October 2006, 12:11 PM

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho



Bohat badhiya.........

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho


behad khoobsurat.........


Sunita di

is nazm ka har sabad mein ek tanhai,bechaini aur dard mehsoos hua...sabhi panktiya dil ko chhu gayi..vaise main to pyaar mohabbat par likhne wala insaan hu magar aapko padhkar ab dil chahta hai ki dard par likhna fir se suru kar du...ehsaasat bohat pyaare lage..bohat waqt baad aapko padhkar acha laga...dili daad kabool kare


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24th October 2006, 12:31 PM

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dosto aap sabko mera pyar bhara namaskar..........!

aaj phir kuch ahsaas lekar aapke samney hu, aapne jazbaato ko kalam se likhney ki koshish ki hai, shayad aapko pasand aa jaye.

“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

aapki dost

hi di namaskar
kitni badi baat hai dard dene wale ki khushiyo.n ki dua karna.......
hamari barbadi ka jo karan hai uski aawadgi ki dua karna....
pal pal mujhe jo jindgi bahr satata raha
har pal uski khusiyo.n ke liye bhagwan se dua karna........


waki didi apne dardo.n ko bakhoobi aapne shawado.,n main dhaal kar pesh kiya hai......... aaj didi main ek baat batau.n yahan ke har shaksh ka dard lagbhag ek saman hi hai....... har pal ek choti si khushi ki talas main rahata hai yahan har koi ... or jab jab koi choti si khushi hamare kareeb aane ki koshish karti hai hum us khushi ko apni baho.n main sametne se bhi darr jate hai.n ........... kash ye dard dene wale samajh pate is peeda ko.........

aapke is khoob surat kalam per dil se meri daad hazir hai kabool farmaiye.......

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24th October 2006, 04:33 PM

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bahut pyara likha hai aapne.. aaj ek arse ke baad shayari.com par aai hu.. zyada kuch nahi kahungi bas itna ki in lino ne aankhon ko nam kar diya..

dilip ji..
"kitni badi baat hai dard dene wale ki khushiyo.n ki dua karna.......
hamari barbadi ka jo karan hai uski aawadgi ki dua karna....
pal pal mujhe jo jindgi bahr satata raha
har pal uski khusiyo.n ke liye bhagwan se dua karna........

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sister pranaam

aapki ye peshkas me aapke ehsaas saaf saaf chhalak rahe hai jo aapki becheni aur dard ka bar bar khulasa kar rahe hai

aapki ye rachna padhne me achhi lagi par main nahi chahta k aap ki becheni aur dard badhe aapki zindagi me main prarthna karta hu bhagvaan se k aapke wo har dard door kare aur aapko hamesa khus rakhe aapne apne ehsaas ko bahot achhi tarha se bayan kiya hai sister

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!


apna khayal rakhiye

khus rahiye sada

aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost
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24th October 2006, 08:25 PM

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dosto aap sabko mera pyar bhara namaskar..........!

aaj phir kuch ahsaas lekar aapke samney hu, aapne jazbaato ko kalam se likhney ki koshish ki hai, shayad aapko pasand aa jaye.

“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

aapki dost
waah sunita ji....pehle toh hamari namaskaar saweekar karein....aapka kalaam para bahoot achha laga...aapka naam aate hi mouse us taraf ghoom jata hai.....aapke ahsaas dil se nikalte hain so usmain dard jhalakta hai....
dard toh pehle hi tha...is sher main..aapki ghazal ka poorn saar goomta hai.....
bahot hi oomda pehskash mere dost..


Zindagi ne bahoot liye hamse intkaam,
Umeed kyuin wafa ki hum tumse kiya kiye.



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“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

sunita ji appko raj ka pyar bhara namaskaar....appki nazam maine parhi appki tanhai ko samjhne ki koshish ki...magar appki nazam main chhupe dard ko mehsoos karne ke baad khud tanha mehsoos karne lagga hoon....bhut acha likha hai appne...ap khud ko kabhi tanha mat samjhna poora shyar pariwaar appke saath hai or hamari duaayain appke saath hai....meri daad kabool karna....yu hee likhti rehna.....take care......raj.......
rajveer ji namaskar........!
aapne meri nazam ko padda, saraha aur eske dard ko mahsoos kiya. bahut accha lagta hai jab hum aapne dil ki baat kahtey hai.n aur saamney wala samaj jata hai. tanhai to zindgi mai.n hai shayad esi liye mujhe Jagjit ji ki gaye yeh gazal bahut aachi lagti hai, usey mai.n aapse share karna chah rahi hu:

Zindgi yu hue basar tanha
kafila saath magar safar tanha.....

apne saye se chonk jatey hai.n
umr gujri hai es kadar tanha.........

din gujrata nahi hai logo mai.n
raat hoti nahi basar tanha..........

raat bhar boltey hai.n sannatey,
raat katey koi kidhar tanha........

humney darwaze tak to dekha tha,
phir na jane gaye kidhar tanha........

aapki dost


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meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho



Bohat badhiya.........

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho


behad khoobsurat.........


Sunita di

is nazm ka har sabad mein ek tanhai,bechaini aur dard mehsoos hua...sabhi panktiya dil ko chhu gayi..vaise main to pyaar mohabbat par likhne wala insaan hu magar aapko padhkar ab dil chahta hai ki dard par likhna fir se suru kar du...ehsaasat bohat pyaare lage..bohat waqt baad aapko padhkar acha laga...dili daad kabool kare


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tumharey reply ki phele line ne to mere kaano mai.n shahad (honey) ghol diya, bahut accha lagga jab maine tumhara likha "sunita di" padda. aagey kaya likha hai, yeh padney ki esha nahi ho rahi thi baar baar en do words par hi nazar ja rahi thi. thanks es pyarey se rishtey ko naam dene ke liye.

aur ha thik hai aapko mera likha aacha lagga par mai.n nahi chahti ki aap pyar mohabat ke elawa kisi aur topic par likhtey. mujhe padney aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya.

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dosto aap sabko mera pyar bhara namaskar..........!

aaj phir kuch ahsaas lekar aapke samney hu, aapne jazbaato ko kalam se likhney ki koshish ki hai, shayad aapko pasand aa jaye.

“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

aapki dost

di acha likhti hao aap.
dard hai to dil se niklata hai .hai na??
sakhi ki daad kubul kare


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shukriya - 25th October 2006, 01:48 PM

dard ko dil se chuya hai aapne itna pyara kalam hai ke ashq ko chhoo ke dekh le itnee bheegee huye hai nazm aap ke dil ko abhut achha laga parhna aap ko
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hi di namaskar
kitni badi baat hai dard dene wale ki khushiyo.n ki dua karna.......
hamari barbadi ka jo karan hai uski aawadgi ki dua karna....
pal pal mujhe jo jindgi bahr satata raha
har pal uski khusiyo.n ke liye bhagwan se dua karna........


waki didi apne dardo.n ko bakhoobi aapne shawado.,n main dhaal kar pesh kiya hai......... aaj didi main ek baat batau.n yahan ke har shaksh ka dard lagbhag ek saman hi hai....... har pal ek choti si khushi ki talas main rahata hai yahan har koi ... or jab jab koi choti si khushi hamare kareeb aane ki koshish karti hai hum us khushi ko apni baho.n main sametne se bhi darr jate hai.n ........... kash ye dard dene wale samajh pate is peeda ko.........

aapke is khoob surat kalam per dil se meri daad hazir hai kabool farmaiye.......

aapka
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dear dilip aapne meri nazam ko padda aur mahsoos kiya, shukriya. aur dard to aisa mahmaan hai jo bin bulaye hi aa jata hai. yu hi saath detey rahna.

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sunita di..
bahut pyara likha hai aapne.. aaj ek arse ke baad shayari.com par aai hu.. zyada kuch nahi kahungi bas itna ki in lino ne aankhon ko nam kar diya..

dilip ji..
"kitni badi baat hai dard dene wale ki khushiyo.n ki dua karna.......
hamari barbadi ka jo karan hai uski aawadgi ki dua karna....
pal pal mujhe jo jindgi bahr satata raha
har pal uski khusiyo.n ke liye bhagwan se dua karna........

"ye mohabbat ka karishma hai hum dard dene wale ko bhi khuda kehte hain..
ye ishq ki intehaan hai hum fanaa karne wale pe fanaa ho jaate hain..
ye badi baat nahi,usne rulaya aur hum uski khushiya mangte hain..
intehaan to ye hai ki unhone hi mara hum unhi ka kandha mangte hain.."
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dear nisha

bahut dino baad tumhey jaha dekh kar kushi hue, kaise ho tum, sach mai.n tumharey bina kuch kami si lagti thi jaha, umeed hai ab routine mai aaya karogi. kush raha karo, aur aapni study bhi pura dil lagga klar kiya karo aur ha humey bhi mat bhulaa karo.

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sister pranaam

aapki ye peshkas me aapke ehsaas saaf saaf chhalak rahe hai jo aapki becheni aur dard ka bar bar khulasa kar rahe hai

aapki ye rachna padhne me achhi lagi par main nahi chahta k aap ki becheni aur dard badhe aapki zindagi me main prarthna karta hu bhagvaan se k aapke wo har dard door kare aur aapko hamesa khus rakhe aapne apne ehsaas ko bahot achhi tarha se bayan kiya hai sister

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!


apna khayal rakhiye

khus rahiye sada

aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost
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dear dhaval

accha lagga tumhara reply padkar, par kaya karu sochti hu ki dard na likhu par jab likhney bethti hu to dard ke sibha kuch likha hi nahi jata, aisa likh kar kuch sakoon sa milta hai, aur tum jo har pal etne pyari si duaey detey ho unke liye bahut bahut shukriya, yeh tumhara pyar hai jo tum mera dard nahi dekh sajtey. tum jaisa bhai kismat se milta hai, yu hi mere saath rahna hameasha.

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dosto aap sabko mera pyar bhara namaskar..........!

aaj phir kuch ahsaas lekar aapke samney hu, aapne jazbaato ko kalam se likhney ki koshish ki hai, shayad aapko pasand aa jaye.

“KOI MAJBOOR NA HO”

meri yaad tujhe kabhi aaye na,
kabhi koi gum tujhe sataye na...
meri zindgi be-rang hai to kaya,
dua hai teri har raat purnoor ho….!

Mujhe be-waffa kabhi kahna na,
Meri waffa par sadha yakeen ho,
Tujse door bhi rah luNgi mai.n,
hamarey dil kabhi na door ho….!

Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho….!

aapki dost


pranaam di,

bahot pyari nazam likhi hai apne.

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waah sunita ji....pehle toh hamari namaskaar saweekar karein....aapka kalaam para bahoot achha laga...aapka naam aate hi mouse us taraf ghoom jata hai.....aapke ahsaas dil se nikalte hain so usmain dard jhalakta hai....
dard toh pehle hi tha...is sher main..aapki ghazal ka poorn saar goomta hai.....
bahot hi oomda pehskash mere dost..


Zindagi ne bahoot liye hamse intkaam,
Umeed kyuin wafa ki hum tumse kiya kiye.



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di acha likhti hao aap.
dard hai to dil se niklata hai .hai na??
sakhi ki daad kubul kare
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meri post par aane ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya.

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kaise hai.n aap.

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khuda hafiz...........


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pranaam di,

bahot pyari nazam likhi hai apne.

grazie

aapki pooja

matko rani

kaise ho tum.............!
tum mujhe regular padti ho, aur bahut pyara sa reply bhi karti ho, to phir es baar likhney mai.n kanjoosi kyu kar di.....bolo bolo..!

kahi aisa to nahi ki mere bhai se naraz ho aur gussa muj par aa gaya ho

dont mind i m joking

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Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
Tere dard ne aur eejaafa kar diya....
Jis tarah majboor hai “Sunita”
Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho

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Dard to phele hi thaa zindgi mai.n,
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Dua hai aise koi na majboor ho

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aapne bahot hi khubsurat nazm likhi hai ye padh kar hamai to kya likhte waqt kalam bhi ro pada hoga.bahot hi achhi hai. ham ye dua karte hai ki aap ki kalamka jadu hamesha barkarar rahe.
fir ek baar sachhe dil se dad deta hu kubul kare.
Zahid bhai namaskar.........!

phele to mai aapka apni post par aur es shayri pariwar mai suwagat karti hu, bahut accha lagta hai jab koi anjaan shakas etne aapneypan se baat karta hai.

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