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Love ~*~i$hq~*~ - 17th December 2007, 02:41 PM

......i$hq.......

Ajab mere i$hq ka haaL hai
pr ajj diL main aik maLaaL hai

ye kese khushbo hai mere char soo
shayad bister pe teraa romaaL hai

apni qismat pe yaqin ha Lakin
teri aik "HaaN" ka bhi sawaL hai

tum tanha chor gae ho mujhko
aur diL main ab bhi tera khayaL hai

yaqin nahin tu thek hai.... Lakin!
manLo mera i$hq LazawaL hai


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17th December 2007, 08:52 PM

uski muskar hamari kamjori hai,
kah nahi pana hamari majboori hai,
wo kyo nahi samjhte hamari khamoshi ko,
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Thumbs up hi "Tapan" - 18th December 2007, 09:59 PM

hi tapan...

nice stanza.

take care


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hi tapan...

nice stanza.

take care

app neha khan vahi hona jo mho me bahut mail karte ho


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Thumbs up Nice - 19th December 2007, 10:52 AM

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......i$hq.......

Ajab mere i$hq ka haaL hai
pr ajj diL main aik maLaaL hai

ye kese khushbo hai mere char soo
shayad bister pe teraa romaaL hai

apni qismat pe yaqin ha Lakin
teri aik "HaaN" ka bhi sawaL hai

tum tanha chor gae ho mujhko
aur diL main ab bhi tera khayaL hai

yaqin nahin tu thek hai.... Lakin!
manLo mera i$hq LazawaL hai
Assalam-o-Alaykum Neha ji ek baar phir bahut umda kalaam ke saath aap ynha haazir huin aur bahut accha likha hai aapne meri daad kubool farmaiye


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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Question hi... - 19th December 2007, 11:43 AM

hi "dineshdharvi"


"app neha khan vahi hona jo mho me bahut mail karte ho"


ye line jo apne mere liyee likhi hai .... mere kuch samjh nahin ai
main kismain buhat mail karte hon?

what is "mho" ?

any ways....

apne mere poetry parhi so reply me that do u like it or not?
but dont ask ques like this.....

b/c is duniya main,is site par buhat sari NEHA KHAN hain apkis ki baat kar rahe hain?
i dont know!

plz reply me in pm or in this thread.
Waiting.....bye


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Red face ~*Asalam-u-alekum... - 19th December 2007, 11:49 AM

asalam kashif ji....


thanks that u came 2 my this another post 2 n comments here...


i m happy 2 see u here.
kiyonke apki tareef bhi sachi lagti hai aur yaqenan tanqeed bhi achi lage gi.
thank u very much.


i will try my best more...


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hi "dineshdharvi"


"app neha khan vahi hona jo mho me bahut mail karte ho"


ye line jo apne mere liyee likhi hai .... mere kuch samjh nahin ai
main kismain buhat mail karte hon?

what is "mho" ?

any ways....

apne mere poetry parhi so reply me that do u like it or not?
but dont ask ques like this.....

b/c is duniya main,is site par buhat sari NEHA KHAN hain apkis ki baat kar rahe hain?
i dont know!

plz reply me in pm or in this thread.
Waiting.....bye

I AM SORRY NEHA JI.

HAAN APNE SAHI KAHA NEHA KHAN KE NAAM KI LADKIYA BAHUT HAI DUNIYA ME PER ME JO KEH RAHA THA USKA NAAM BHI NEHA KHAN HAI AUR VO BHI APKI TARAF SHAYRI HI LIKH KAR BHEJTI HAI TO MUJE LAGA KE SAYAD APP HO ISI LIYE MENE PUCHA APKO.
AUR MHO EK GRUP HAI JISME HAI HUMARI TARAH SAYARI HI BHEJTE HAI .
ME APKE BAARE ME GALAT SAMJA AGAR MAAF KAR SAKO TO PLS MAAF KAR DENA.


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UTRA THA CHAND HUMARE ANGAN ME,
PAR SITARON KO GAWARA NA THA,
HUM TOH SITRON SE BHE BAGAWAT KAR LATE,
PAR KIYA KARE WO CHAND HE HUMARA NA THA.


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Exclamation 4 "dineshdharvi" - 21st December 2007, 12:30 AM

hi dineshdharvi...


1 tu apka naam buhat mushkil hai...
spelling yaad karni pari ha muje...


any ways....


"sorry" main apse karna chahti hon ke ap ne mere pata nahin konsi baat ko kia samjh kar itni sorry karleen





"I AM SORRY NEHA JI.

HAAN APNE SAHI KAHA NEHA KHAN KE NAAM KI LADKIYA BAHUT HAI DUNIYA ME PER ME JO KEH RAHA THA USKA NAAM BHI NEHA KHAN HAI AUR VO BHI APKI TARAF SHAYRI HI LIKH KAR BHEJTI HAI TO MUJE LAGA KE SAYAD APP HO ISI LIYE MENE PUCHA APKO.
AUR MHO EK GRUP HAI JISME HAI HUMARI TARAH SAYARI HI BHEJTE HAI .
ME APKE BAARE ME GALAT SAMJA AGAR MAAF KAR SAKO TO PLS MAAF KAR DENA"




itni mafi ki koi zarorat nahin bus main ne tu ye pocha tha ke konsi "neha khan" aur kon "mho"

apne ans de dia thanks...

sorry apko kuch bura laga tu



"any ways....

apne mere poetry parhi so reply me that do u like it or not?
but dont ask ques like this....."





yee baat main ne "JO UPAR LIKHI HAI" isly likhi thi ke app jub bhi muje post reply karte han tu ashaar hi ashaar likhte han isly main ne likha tha ke ap comments dia karen.


aur main sirf 1 isi site par hoti hon aur koi site muje pata nahin poetry ki ?



pata hoti tu uspar shayd hoti
again sorry if u hurted!!!


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21st December 2007, 12:43 AM

Neha jee :


aadaab-o-taSleemaat

Shaayad maiN aaj aapko pehli baar paRh rahaa huuN.. aapne be-had Khuubsoorat aNdaaz ke saath kavviSh ko peSh kiYaa hai.. aSh'aar to dil-fareb raheN.. merii taraf sey DheroN saarii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl farmaaYeN.. YuuNhi bazm kii raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiYe..!

apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Adab DhavaL ji...

app bhi khush raheen hamesha hamesha.

ji aj ap ne pehli bar apne nadir khayalat ka izhar meri post par kia hai aur muje behad khushi hoi hai ke main iski mustehaq theri hon.

koshish karongi ainda bhi apki tareef ke qabil huroof tarash sakoon.

buhat nawazish.
apna behad khayal rakhiyee ga.


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APKO KOI GALATI NAHI HAI NEHA JI MENE HI APKO AISA ULTA SAWAL KAR LIYA THA BALKE MUJE AISA SAWAL KARNE KA KOI HAK BHI NAHI HAI FIR MENE KAR DIYA ISI LIYE MUJE APKO SORRY KEHNA CHAHIYE.
AUR MERA NAAM SIRF DINESH HAI DHARVI MERI SURNAME HAI.
AUR MUJE APKI BAAT KOI BURA BHI NAHI LAGA HAI MUJE BAHUT ACHA LAGA KE APP MERI GALATI KO SAMNE LAAYE. AUR AAGE SE KABHI APKO AISA KOI SAWAL NAHI KARUGA

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hi dineshdharvi...


1 tu apka naam buhat mushkil hai...
spelling yaad karni pari ha muje...


any ways....


"sorry" main apse karna chahti hon ke ap ne mere pata nahin konsi baat ko kia samjh kar itni sorry karleen





"I AM SORRY NEHA JI.

HAAN APNE SAHI KAHA NEHA KHAN KE NAAM KI LADKIYA BAHUT HAI DUNIYA ME PER ME JO KEH RAHA THA USKA NAAM BHI NEHA KHAN HAI AUR VO BHI APKI TARAF SHAYRI HI LIKH KAR BHEJTI HAI TO MUJE LAGA KE SAYAD APP HO ISI LIYE MENE PUCHA APKO.
AUR MHO EK GRUP HAI JISME HAI HUMARI TARAH SAYARI HI BHEJTE HAI .
ME APKE BAARE ME GALAT SAMJA AGAR MAAF KAR SAKO TO PLS MAAF KAR DENA"




itni mafi ki koi zarorat nahin bus main ne tu ye pocha tha ke konsi "neha khan" aur kon "mho"

apne ans de dia thanks...

sorry apko kuch bura laga tu



"any ways....

apne mere poetry parhi so reply me that do u like it or not?
but dont ask ques like this....."





yee baat main ne "JO UPAR LIKHI HAI" isly likhi thi ke app jub bhi muje post reply karte han tu ashaar hi ashaar likhte han isly main ne likha tha ke ap comments dia karen.


aur main sirf 1 isi site par hoti hon aur koi site muje pata nahin poetry ki ?



pata hoti tu uspar shayd hoti
again sorry if u hurted!!!


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Cool WeLL...! - 2nd January 2008, 01:35 PM

hi
DINESH


hope u r fine
weLL u r so sensitive...i think so

any ways u take care
bye


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hope u r fine
weLL u r so sensitive...i think so

any ways u take care
bye
ya i am fine

how are you?

n happy new year


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hi thanks 4 reply

"Happy New Year" u to


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hi thanks 4 reply

"Happy New Year" u to

app bahut acha likhte ho ishq ke baare me app aur bhi acha likho


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2nd January 2008, 01:52 PM

Ishq ne insaan ko kya diya,
Kavi kise katil bana diya,
Do phool ka bojh na utha sakti thee Mumtaaz,
Aur Shahjahan ne usspe Tajmahel bana diya.


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Question hi Dinesh... - 2nd January 2008, 04:45 PM

hi dinesh....

buhat khubsorat stanza likha hai ap ne "i$hq" par.
heran mat hoon ap main neha hi hoon.

actually meri "neha faran" ki id kuch prob kar rahi thi thats y i changed it.....i mean i will not use that....this is my new id.

Love Neha

hope u dont mind
n u aLL of accept it too.


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hi dinesh....

buhat khubsorat stanza likha hai ap ne "i$hq" par.
heran mat hoon ap main neha hi hoon.

actually meri "neha faran" ki id kuch prob kar rahi thi thats y i changed it.....i mean i will not use that....this is my new id.

Love Neha

hope u dont mind
n u aLL of accept it too.
thanks neha ji acha kiya apne batakar vese bhi itni chhoti baat ka kisi ko bura nahi lagta hai.

Mushkil nahi hai ishq lagana,Usse bhi aasan hai uska pyaar pana,
Phir bhi darte hai hum pyaar se,Kyonki sab se mushkil hai usko bhual pana.


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wao kiya baat likhi hai apne ishq ke bare main.
good thinking.



"Mushkil nahi hai ishq lagana,Usse bhi aasan hai uska pyaar pana,
Phir bhi darte hai hum pyaar se,Kyonki sab se mushkil hai usko bhual pana."



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wao kiya baat likhi hai apne ishq ke bare main.
good thinking.



"Mushkil nahi hai ishq lagana,Usse bhi aasan hai uska pyaar pana,
Phir bhi darte hai hum pyaar se,Kyonki sab se mushkil hai usko bhual pana."


bye dinesh.
thanks neha ji
kese ho app sayad bahut kam aate yaha per

Dil ki galiyon mein kisi ko koi gam naho,
Hamari yeh dosti kabhi kam na ho,
Bas yahi hai dua humari ki app khush raho,
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ur welcome dinesh ji

main thek hoon ap kese hain?
sahi andaza lagaya ap ne main buhat kam nline hoti hon.lakin jub bhi ati hoon post reply zaror karti hon.

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ur welcome dinesh ji

main thek hoon ap kese hain?
sahi andaza lagaya ap ne main buhat kam nline hoti hon.lakin jub bhi ati hoon post reply zaror karti hon.

take care bye


me fine neha ji
haan dekhta hu apke sab reply
Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho
Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho
Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge
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Smile hi - 28th January 2008, 01:39 PM

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me fine neha ji
haan dekhta hu apke sab reply
Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho
Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho
Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge
Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho

dinesh ap jo bhi ashaar likhte hain i think "some thing wrong"
ap thek tu hain na?

khush raha kijiyee
aur subko apni taraf se koi takleef bhi mat hone dijiyee u will be happy.
take care of ur life
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dinesh ap jo bhi ashaar likhte hain i think "some thing wrong"
ap thek tu hain na?

khush raha kijiyee
aur subko apni taraf se koi takleef bhi mat hone dijiyee u will be happy.
take care of ur life
bye
haan neha ji me thik hu aur pls app hume batana ke kya me galat likh raha hu
dosti mein kuch to sunana padta hai,Gam chhupakar bhi muskurana padta hai,Kabhi hum bhi dost the unke,Aajkal to unko bhi yaad dilana padta hai.


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haan neha ji me thik hu aur pls app hume batana ke kya me galat likh raha hu
dosti mein kuch to sunana padta hai,Gam chhupakar bhi muskurana padta hai,Kabhi hum bhi dost the unke,Aajkal to unko bhi yaad dilana padta hai.

ji dinesh ji...
good u r ok
main ne "some thing wrong" isly likha tha ke apke ashaar parh kar lagta hai ke ye kisi "khas" person ke liyee hain ok matlab kahin koi dukh tu nahin apko?

app bilkul sahi likh rahe hain bhae....har dafa 1 dard main dobi tehreer milti hai muje.

GOD bless u
take care


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Woh Kuch Sunti To Mai Kuch Kehta
Mujy Kuch or Kehna Tha
Woh Pal Bhr Ko Ruk Jati Tu Mai Kuch or Kehna Tha
Ghalt Fehmi Ny Baton Ko Brha Dia Yunhi Warna
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Salam Neha Jee Can u Share poetry with me I am waiting ur reply soon
   
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Salam Neha Jee Can u Share poetry with me I am waiting ur reply soon


i dont understandkese share karoon matlab agar yee poetry apko chahiyee tu app ise yahan se copy karleen matlab kisi paper main utar leen lakin mere naam ke sath

dont use it by ur name...okz?
dont mind haan.....b/c jo cheez meri hai bus usko main sirf apna dekhna chahti hoon.hope u dont mind.

haan apko ye achi lagi hai tu u can give it to any 1 else but remember my name
wese app kehna kiya chahti theen zara muje phir se samjhaiyeega....ok na take care n thanks 4 liked itbye dear


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3rd February 2008, 07:41 PM

well nice written by u.
arz hai
Dil ko agar hota manan asaan,
na karta u kisi ko pareshan,
tanhai na rehta bhari mehfil main,
na hoti owh halat jo ho na bayan?

Yeh tab he hoti hai, Jab ishq had se bar jaye
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4th February 2008, 07:30 AM

hi....kaise hain aap?

aapko pehli bar pad raha hun apr pad-kar bahut khushi hui. acha likte hain aap, dil k ehsaason ko bahut hi umda andaaz mein pesh kiya hai aapne.

yuhin likte rahein

aapka dost

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well nice written by u.
arz hai
Dil ko agar hota manan asaan,
na karta u kisi ko pareshan,
tanhai na rehta bhari mehfil main,
na hoti owh halat jo ho na bayan?

Yeh tab he hoti hai, Jab ishq had se bar jaye
Am I Right Na!

kis se pocha hai apne?
plz mention kardia kareen
ab kiya karoon agar mujse nahin pocha tu reply kese karoon.


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hi....kaise hain aap?

aapko pehli bar pad raha hun apr pad-kar bahut khushi hui. acha likte hain aap, dil k ehsaason ko bahut hi umda andaaz mein pesh kiya hai aapne.

yuhin likte rahein

aapka dost

manish

hi manish
thanks 4 ur reply

i think apko ye batane ki zarorat tu nahin hai na ke "Neha faran" aur "Love neha" 2no mere hi ids hain "id neha faran" main kuch prob hogae thi tu isly use closed karna para.

ye detaiL isly di ke kiya pata ke ap mere reply par bura man jate aur kehte ke neha faran ki ghazal pasand ai thi...love neha se ans kiyon aya thanks ka....okz?


koshish karongi ke acha likhonapke replies ka intezar rahega.
take care.


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......i$hq.......

Ajab mere i$hq ka haaL hai
pr ajj diL main aik maLaaL hai

ye kese khushbo hai mere char soo
shayad bister pe teraa romaaL hai

apni qismat pe yaqin ha Lakin
teri aik "HaaN" ka bhi sawaL hai

tum tanha chor gae ho mujhko
aur diL main ab bhi tera khayaL hai

yaqin nahin tu thek hai.... Lakin!
manLo mera i$hq LazawaL hai


Assalam Alaikum

maine socha tha ke aap ki favourite line itni achi hai to zarur aap ki apni gazal bhi achi hogi lekin
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ye nahi socha tha ke lajab hogi bahut pasand aayi mujhe kaash ke mai bhi aap ki taraha sayeri karpata

aur ek bbat maine aapko message bheja tha jiska reply nahi aaya so pls chek it soon and reply.

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Assalam Alaikum

maine socha tha ke aap ki favourite line itni achi hai to zarur aap ki apni gazal bhi achi hogi lekin
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ye nahi socha tha ke lajab hogi bahut pasand aayi mujhe kaash ke mai bhi aap ki taraha sayeri karpata

aur ek bbat maine aapko message bheja tha jiska reply nahi aaya so pls chek it soon and reply.

Allha Hafiz


walekum aslam

itni ziada tarif ka shukria par plz koi ghalti ki ho tu wo bhi bataiyeega


ap poetry karne ki koshish zaror karen...i will help u.
lakin plz try.
apka pm muje mila hai samjh nahin aya kia reply karoon isly nahin kia.
take care.
ALLAH hafiz


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