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Post Zeest ki raanaiyan pighal rahi hai.... My latest ghazal - 8th September 2009, 12:42 PM

Zeest ki raanaaiyan pighal rahi hai
lamha lamha rooh bhi gal rahi hai

aik khwahish thi banaame wajood
so wo bhi ab to dhal rahi hai

raoshni se bhare taareek aalam mein
shamma teri dosti ki jal rahi hai

justju behka rahi hai khud magar
jane kya soch kar sambhal rahi hai

ek raah chahta hai musafir kab se
aur bheed kaise kaise nikal rahi hai

ab jahaan ja ke mila rang-e-wajood
to zindagi bhi rang badal rahi hai

wo itni ziddi, itni pagli ladki
keechad mein bhi saath chal rahi hai

no ho mayus Aabid' raat ki taareekiyon se
dekh subha kirne ugal rahi hai....


(Im not a shayar... it happened auto matically..(beleive me


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8th September 2009, 12:55 PM

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wo itni ziddi, itni pagli ladki
keechad mein bhi saath chal rahi hai

waise to ghazal ke ashaar ache haiN mager yeh kuch khaas lag raha hai , likhte rahieN , meHfil meN ki ronak baRhaate rahieN , daad qabool fermaaieN
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8th September 2009, 01:23 PM

Shukriya waseem sahab...
waise aap ka andaza sahi hai.. wo sher kuch khaas hi hai... keechad nahin balke daldal mein koi saath de raha hai... Allah use zindagi mein kabhi gham na de.... Ameen


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12th September 2009, 03:44 AM

Nice one dard

this one was beautiful
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12th September 2009, 07:28 PM

Bhai salam,

apke naam mera naam yaksaa hai hum hum naam hai kya aisa muze lag ra hai, apke gazal ka maqta muze acha laga.

no ho mayus Aabid' raat ki taareekiyon se
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10th October 2009, 01:21 PM

Salamm to all

meri ghazal ko sarahne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya.....


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10th October 2009, 05:29 PM

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Zeest ki raanaaiyan pighal rahi hai
lamha lamha rooh bhi gal rahi hai

aik khwahish thi banaame wajood
so wo bhi ab to dhal rahi hai

raoshni se bhare taareek aalam mein
shamma teri dosti ki jal rahi hai

justju behka rahi hai khud magar
jane kya soch kar sambhal rahi hai

ek raah chahta hai musafir kab se
aur bheed kaise kaise nikal rahi hai

ab jahaan ja ke mila rang-e-wajood
to zindagi bhi rang badal rahi hai

wo itni ziddi, itni pagli ladki
keechad mein bhi saath chal rahi hai

no ho mayus Aabid' raat ki taareekiyon se
dekh subha kirne ugal rahi hai....


(Im not a shayar... it happened auto matically..(beleive me
Aabid sahab aadaab........

Nice to know your thoughts ....... bahut khoob kaha hai aapne, sabhi sher achche hai......

likhate rahiye..
Khush rahiye..
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Dil ko chhu liya hai mere yaar....
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Love Dil ko chhu liya hai mere yaar.... - 11th October 2009, 01:03 AM

likhta to main bhi hoo.n aur shayar bhi nahi hoo.n, Kab se intzaar mei.n hoo.n ki Kuch aisa hi likh jaau.n.
Dost bahut khoob likha hai, dil ke andar tak uttar gaya. Mujhe kisi rachna ki khoobsoorati ka pata apne shareer ke roye.n khade hone se lagta hai aur yakee.n maano isse padne ke baad abhi tak mere roye.n khade hai.n.
Aur Kuch nahi iske siwa.... Bahut khoob!
Intzaar rahega aisa hi Kuch aur padhne ka.

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31st October 2009, 12:06 PM

Vikram JI

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31st October 2009, 02:26 PM

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aapka yeh ehsaas mujhe bahut acha laga....

wo itni ziddi, itni pagli ladki
keechad mein bhi saath chal rahi hai

tahe dil se daad....hazeer hai...

khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath




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5th November 2009, 01:05 PM

Shukriya Naresh ji..................


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24th December 2009, 11:57 AM

My Latest Couplet....

Main jaane kitni sadiyon ke paar gaya
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Zeest ki raanaaiyan pighal rahi hai
lamha lamha rooh bhi gal rahi hai

aik khwahish thi banaame wajood
so wo bhi ab to dhal rahi hai

raoshni se bhare taareek aalam mein
shamma teri dosti ki jal rahi hai

justju behka rahi hai khud magar
jane kya soch kar sambhal rahi hai

ek raah chahta hai musafir kab se
aur bheed kaise kaise nikal rahi hai

ab jahaan ja ke mila rang-e-wajood
to zindagi bhi rang badal rahi hai

wo itni ziddi, itni pagli ladki
keechad mein bhi saath chal rahi hai

no ho mayus Aabid' raat ki taareekiyon se
dekh subha kirne ugal rahi hai....


(Im not a shayar... it happened auto matically..(beleive me



wahhhhhhhhh....aapke lafzon me jaadu hai...dil ko chhu gaye aapke ye ehsaas.... hum to aapke fan ho gaye janab.... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye ....khush rahiye....


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1st April 2010, 04:18 PM

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