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Love Puchtey hai log mujhey kaise lihti hu ye shayri meri,Jaante nahi vo ye shayri nahi>>, - 15th December 2002, 11:01 PM

dosto i got a lot of mails asking that how can i write all this and where the concepts come from and.......a lot more........so thinkin to give them asnwer.......but i thought writing soem lines in form of shayri may give them a sense of it.....so pesh hai..umeed hai aap sab ko is dard e dil ka raaz pata aaj chal jaayega ..........pesh hai.......aapke nazraane ek baar phir se......


Puchtey hai log mujhey kaise lihti hu ye shayri meri,
Jaante nahi vo ye shayri hi nahi jasbaat e dil hai meri,

Beeta hai ye sab shayd is zindagi mein,
gehra hai bahut chota sa dil apni hi gehrayi mein,

Jab jab hua kuch aisa ki zindagi se sawaal me kar baithi,
Bas aur kuch nahi is kalam ko haath me le baithi,

Utar diye saare dil e jigar ke zakhm o nisaan aapke nazraane,
Aapne sehraya to ban gaye mol inka, varna they ye sher bemane,

Is dard e dil shayri ke aur kya bataun tumhe raaz dosto,
Kin shabdo'n me karu beyyan, kis makkam se guzre hai hum dosto

Luv Priya


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Thumbs up fir vo hi sawaal - 15th December 2002, 11:32 PM

LUV PRIYA JI ab kya kahen aapki likhaavat ke baare mein

bus alfaaz nahi milte har baar mujhe . Pata nahi kyun lekin aapki post ka mujhe hameshaa intezaar rehta hai. Aap ko kai mails milte hain aapne aisa likha hai ke har koi puchta hai ke aap kaise itna achha likh paati ho. Mein bhi yehi puchta hun ek bar fir ke kahan se laati ho itna dard. Yeh baat to zaroor hai ke aap bahut hi gehri chot khaaye hue ho .lekin fir bhi ek bahut hi famous geet ki lines likh raha hun

KAHAN CHALA TU AYE MERE JOGI
JEEVAN SE TU BHAAG KE
KISI EK DIL KE KAARAN
YUN SAARI DUNIYA TYAAG KE

CHHOD DE SAARI DUNIYA KISI KE LIYE
YEH MUNAASIB NAHI AADMI KE LIYE
PYAAR SE BHI ZAROORI KAI KAAM HAIN
PYAAR SAB KUCH NAHI ZINDAGI KE LIYE

KITNI HASRAT SE TAKTI HAIN KALIYAAN TUMHEIN
KYN BAHAARON KO FIR SE BULAATE NAHI
EK DUNIYA UJAD BHI GAYI HAI TO KYA
DUSRA TUM JAHAN KYUN BASAATE NAHI
CHAAND MILTA NAHI SABKO SANSAAR MEIN
HAI DIYA HI BAHUT ROSHNI KE LIYE
CHHOD DE SAARI DUNIYA KISI KE LIYE............

TAN SE TAN KA MILAN HO NA PAAYA TO KYA
MANN SE MANN KA MILAN KOI KUM TO NAHI
KHUSHBU AATI RAHE DUR HI SE SAHI
SAAMNE HO CHAMAN KOI KUM TO NAHI
DIL NA CHAHE BHI TO SAATH SANSAAR MEIN
CHALNA PADTA HAI SABKI KHUSHI KE LIYE
CHHOD DE SAARI DUNIYA KISIKE LIYE..................

AGAR KUCH JYAADA LIKH DIYA HO TO MAAF KAR DENA


BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE


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KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN
WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI
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16th December 2002, 12:50 AM

Wah!
Easy to relate, and overall good.
Topic is nice, and aapka jawaab dene ka tariiQa pasand aaya

Likhte rahiye,
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REPLY - 16th December 2002, 07:38 PM

dear priyaji,
mene aapka najm padhi. Samaj bhi aayee. Mera manna hai shayri.com par 80% shayar aap hi ki tarah ghayal hai. Lekin ghayal hone ki bhi to limit hoti hai. Aap din me kitni baar ghayal hoti ho.....jo itttttttttttna sabh kuchh likh pati ho. THERE SHOULD B LIMIT. A-re ham jaise nacheejo ko bhi thoda chance de dije kabhi kabhi. Front page par se aapka naam jata nahi aur hamara naam aata nahi. Bahut na insafi hai re!!! Hey.....just kidding. Likhte rahiye
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hey friends - 17th December 2002, 11:46 PM

hey yaaro,
Pyaassaji,
aapne to kuch jayada hi tarif kar di is nachez ki..areey yaar aisi to koyi baat nahi hai, aapke sawaal kaha se laati ho itna dard.. hehe me kya kahu, dard to dil me hota hai........lana nahi padta...bas khud ba khud hi aa jata hai .just like pyar. jo apne aap hi aa jata hai....lana nahi padta.....aur phir.........yaar....what to say i luved the lines u sent to me....

KAHAN CHALA TU AYE MERE JOGI
JEEVAN SE TU BHAAG KE
KISI EK DIL KE KAARAN
YUN SAARI DUNIYA TYAAG KE

CHHOD DE SAARI DUNIYA KISI KE LIYE
YEH MUNAASIB NAHI AADMI KE LIYE
PYAAR SE BHI ZAROORI KAI KAAM HAIN
PYAAR SAB KUCH NAHI ZINDAGI KE LIYE

KITNI HASRAT SE TAKTI HAIN KALIYAAN TUMHEIN
KYN BAHAARON KO FIR SE BULAATE NAHI
EK DUNIYA UJAD BHI GAYI HAI TO KYA
DUSRA TUM JAHAN KYUN BASAATE NAHI
CHAAND MILTA NAHI SABKO SANSAAR MEIN
HAI DIYA HI BAHUT ROSHNI KE LIYE
CHHOD DE SAARI DUNIYA KISI KE LIYE............

TAN SE TAN KA MILAN HO NA PAAYA TO KYA
MANN SE MANN KA MILAN KOI KUM TO NAHI
KHUSHBU AATI RAHE DUR HI SE SAHI
SAAMNE HO CHAMAN KOI KUM TO NAHI
DIL NA CHAHE BHI TO SAATH SANSAAR MEIN
CHALNA PADTA HAI SABKI KHUSHI KE LIYE
CHHOD DE SAARI DUNIYA KISIKE LIYE..................

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Tum pe martey hai hum mar jayainge
ye sab kehte hai hum kar jayainge...

its natural and hapening some things we cant help..but khushi huyi ki aapko mera likha itna pasanad atta hai....u r making me think.......is ir really soemthing?? cuz i feel its all bemane....bas u guys like it and shayd inki bhi kuch keemat ho jaaye

urs friend forever
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aman - 17th December 2002, 11:47 PM

hey aman ji ssa, how ru >
shurkiya ki aapko ye taroqa pasanad aya, aapke pasand karne ke kaaran hi shayad aaj tak zinda hai ye priya

take care

luv priya>>


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hehe - 17th December 2002, 11:50 PM

hey sanam yaar ab me kya kahu tumhare is likhne par.ummmmmmm,,,,,hehe bas hasi aa rahi hai..yaar humney front pe aake kya karna hai hamae to zindagi ne itni piche chod diya hai ki aage aa hi nahi sakte to yaha par aake kya karna hai...jaha tak chance ki baat hai....i give ya all the chances..yaar....aisi baat nahi hai...ab to koyi khwaish hi nahi rahi..aur haan aapne kaha ki...........THERE SHOULD B A LIMIT..hmm.u know soemthing jaise pyar karne ki kyi limit nahi hoti...vaise hi...dukh ki bhi intiha nahi hoti..kaash!! like u said the people who give hurt tumahre jaise sochte hote..aur sach me limit hoti........par...................

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Red face hey payal - 20th December 2002, 09:56 AM

hasi aa rahi hai??????? Waise mene to jo likha tha majak me hi likha tha to hasi to aani hi chahiye. Magar jaha tak aapne likha hai ki "jindagi ne hame itna pichhe chhod diya hai", muje ya baat achchhi nahi lagi. Me ye maanti hu ki jindagi har mod par,har kadam par, har ek naye lamhe me ek sikh deti hai. Aur is sikh ko dhyan me rakhkar hame apni jindagi ko aur aage badana hota hai. Par aap to mayus ho gayi. Payal ke liye ye to na socha tha hamne. Jo jindagi insaan ke liye itni ehmiyat rakhti hai wo use pichhe kaise chhod sakti hai. Aur aapne suna hi hoga ki "jindagi har kadam ek nayee jang hai" to us jang ko jeet kar aage badna hai, na ki pichhe rehna hai. Me ummeed karti hu ki ek dost ki ye baat maan kar aap kabhi bhi aisi baat nahi karengi. To... friends???


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sanamji - 20th December 2002, 10:03 AM

hi sanam ji pehley to yaar whos payal hehe i thikn aapne ya to galat mesg chod diya hai ya galat naam...this is priya not payal hehe...vaise sowwie ki aapko bura laga par sach to sach hi hai....the relity is bitter yet its truth..and no one can change it.....agar aapko bura laga to maff karna yaar...........baaki jo hai jaisa hai theek hai i have started ki jo mile apna lo.....or else it will only bother u a lot....aur...haan sikh to bahut di hai zindagi ne..ab to shikane ka waqt hai hehe joking.....for now chalti hu..u take care

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oops - 20th December 2002, 10:09 AM

sorry priyaji, mere sath meri dost baat kar rahi thi aur uska naam aapki jagah likh diya. Its all confusion of P. Aur jaha tak baat bura lagne ki hai to "muje nahi laga". Par ab soch rahi hu ki aapse kuchh sikhna suru kar du. Kaise rahega.
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sanamji - 20th December 2002, 10:15 AM

hehe sanamji areey shikhane me koyi problem nahi hai par my andaaz is very weird i think...cuz i know wat the realties of life are...and when iwill teach....u wll feel its weird but i know in future uwill say it was correct...i feel this way...baaki we all got to learn something frm each other....sab me kuch na kuch to raaz hai hi....aapki shayri itni achi hoti hai....and aapki baatain bhi kaafi khub hai.......may be i can learn a lot here too

thanks....

LUV PRIYAAAAA


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priya plz batana kaisi hai ye shayri apni.............
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priya plz batana kaisi hai ye shayri apni............. - 21st December 2002, 09:48 PM

hi priya
bahut acha likha hai tumne raaz e shayri..........lekin zara suno daastan hamari zubani apni............

plz jhooth nahi bolna ke kaisi hai
koi galti ho to nikal dena samjh ke galti apni............

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kya bataon mein raaz-e-shayri apni
hai yahi bas akhri nishani apni........

jiskey pyaar pe naaz tha mujhko
usi ne dikhai aakhir bewafai apni......

beetey samay ne dhaye kai sitam
jaate jaatey bata gayi woh haqeeqat apni....

waadey to usne bhi kiye they sohni ki tarha
lekin ek jhoothi kasam tak na nibha payee apni.....

mien kis kis se chpaon aansoo apne
zakham haste daal gayee jholi mein apni......

kadar " tarun" ki shayri tum logon se padi hai
varna hasti hi kya thi " yakhmi " ki apni.......


usne socha inkar se mein toot kar bikhar jaonga,
magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga
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Dear pryia JI - 26th December 2002, 05:11 AM

Very nice priya, i understand ur feelings but....
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Nafart see HO gie hia hummey Mohbaat ke nam see....
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thanks - 30th December 2002, 06:26 AM

hey tarun yaar......thanks tumne pasand kiya par jo tumne likha hai.....nothing more i can say after that.....tumne shayd meru hi feelings ko in shabdon me piro diya jus great! superb!

Luv Priya
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dear...Pyaraji
this is first time i have seen ur respnese..thanks a lot! that u liked this one....

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sahi kaha aapne bahut hi khoob!

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Does She See My Broken Heart? - 31st December 2002, 04:03 AM

Dear Priya Ji
actually im kinda new to dis website.. so dat's y u have never seen mah sn and a response from me...
neways i hope u gonna like dis..........(if u have aol messenger plz drop me a line @ arslan17)

Does she See My Broken Heart,
or the pain that I feel inside?
Does she know she destroyed my world,
when she walked out of my life?
Does she know I cry everyday,
each time I remember that painful day?
Does she See My Broken Heart,
shattered into pieces on the ground
Does she know how much I trusted her,
and now she's let me down?
Does she know I wish,
we were so much more than friends
Does she know she was my first love,
and I will never love that way again?
Does She See My Broken Heart,
or is she just blind?
Does she see my pain,
all she has to do is look into my eyes?
Does she see the shining star,
I wish on every single night?
Does she see the pain in my heart,
each day I remember she is the only love of my life.....
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Thumbs up aww - 31st December 2002, 04:12 AM

aww! pyara ji, aapka message thru thi spoem...i can understand..bahut hi khoobi si aapke saadgi se keh diya apna haal e dil.....i think that if she knew all u said then u guys would be together...i can feel the pain in yourz words....touched my heart!

People who can understand that we care,
in this world they are really rare!
Thats why i think we all say,
is life not fair to me. or to it, i am unfair?

Luv Priya


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thanku thanku priya ji - 1st January 2003, 02:07 AM

I thank you very much priya for the compliment... oh well i just started to write couple of months ago, but u r my Inspiration....

Us ne Kaha

Aray Pagal!

Abhi bhi Waqt hai

Lout Ja!

Mujhay Tuj say!

Na koi Rabt hai

Ab Ja!

Mai Shereen!

NA tu Farhad-e-waqt hai

Ab Ja!

Tere Tootay Huway Dil mein!

Abhi bhi Zabt hai

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hehe - 3rd January 2003, 09:03 AM

PYARAJI..KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI YAAR....ABHI BHI LAUT JA HEHE...lol yaar aisa kisi ne kaha hi nahi aur tum bahut der ke baad keh rahe ho aur jise kehna chahiye tha usney bhi kaha nahi hehe i dont know what am saying but........what u said i am ur inspiration..o god!! yaar itni upar na chadayo , hum to aapke shagird hai... yuhi chot choti battain in shayri ne pesh karte rehte hai aur khaas kuch nahi ....

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hey priya ji..... - 6th January 2003, 01:41 AM

well priya ji I hope u goin 2 like dis...

Aik Lamha
Kisi aur ke Honay ke
Baad

Us ne Mujh se Poocha

"Kaisay ho?"

Tou mai ne kaha

Ke

"Jis ka sab kuch lut gaya ho

Wo kaisa ho ga?"

Tou wo boli!

"Kisi ke bichar janay se

Zindagi khatam nahi hoti

Zindagi kat ti nahi

Rukti bhi nahi

Ye tou chalti jati hai"

Tou mai ne ik pal ke liyea soucha!

"Chalo acha hai

Aaj tum ne meri ginti bhi

Un he logoon mai kar di

Jin ko tumharay honay

Na honay se

Koi

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Thumbs up thanks - 6th January 2003, 10:27 AM

hi there pyara ji
aap khoob kehtey hai aur aage kya kahu kehne ko reh hi nahi jata
Chalo acha hai

Aaj tum ne meri ginti bhi

Un he logoon mai kar di

Jin ko tumharay honay

Na honay se

Koi

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hi priya ji

aap ne bohot hi ache tareeke se jawab diya hai. bohot acha likha hai aur shayad jo bhi yaha kuch likhta hai unki dil ki baate bhi yehi hoti hai. i like it really very much!


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hi Khamoshiji
(yaar whats ur name)
thanksa lot that u liked the idea of replying back in this form of shayri these all friends here and no wu too are my inspiration kuch zindagi ne sikha diya kuch dard ne kuch dosto ne

thanks alot for the enoucaragement

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