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tere situm ko main kaise bhooloon......
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tere situm ko main kaise bhooloon...... - 17th February 2003, 12:12 PM

" mere khwabon ko, kisi ka intezar aaj bhi hai
jo apna tha hi nahi, usse pyar aaj bhi hai
ek ek zakhm tera, jo ab na bhula paoonga
tere zakhmon ke marham ka, talabgar aaj bhi ha

jub kabhi tere baad, qadmon ne sambhalna chaha
teri yadon ki zangeeren, qadmon se lipti aaj bhi hain
too hi bata duniya nayi, apni main basaoon kaise
jub teri tamannaon ke, ghumkhwar yahan aaj bhi hain

teri nazron mein to bus, ek chota sa chaman ujda hai
palat kar dekh to, is dil mein khinzan aaj bhi hai
tujhe main apna qatil, kahoon bhi to kaise kahoon
mere bejaan se is jism me, todhi si jaan aaj bhi hai

tune to mere naam se, apne naam ko mita daala
per tere naam ka alfaz, sama me jawan aaj bhi hai
bus tere naam lene pe, hazaar baar marta tha
yaqeen na ho to leke dekh, tujhpe jaan nisaar aaj bhi hai

yaqeen nahi hai magar, aaj bhi yeh lagta hai
meri talash me shayad, woh pyar aaj bhi hai
woh pyar jiske liye, "DAMAL" ne chod di duniya
wafa ki rah me ghayal, yeh rooh aaj bhi hai

ek baar phir thode alfazon ko samet kar kuch kehna chaha
hai, aur shayad kuch keh paaya hoon....
aage bhi yeh koshish jaari rahegi.........


Damal.
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kuch too hi mere dard ka mazmoon samajh le
hansta hua chehra to zamane ke liye hai

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17th February 2003, 12:45 PM

damal ji aap ne to is qayenaat ke her aashiq ka ghum keh dala..
kya khoob alfazon ko qaid kiya hai....
koi mane ya na mane pur is ko padhkar to main rone laga...
kaise aate hain aap ke khayalatn me aise sher...
kuch hamen bhi sikha deejiye...
bahot achcha likha hai aapne...
aise hi likhte rahiye......


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17th February 2003, 03:26 PM

shukriya fanah aap ne meri ghazal ko padhne ki zahmat farmayee iske liye main aap ko thanks kehta hoon...
lekin aap ko pehle nahi padha .. shayad aap naye shayar hain..
agar aap naye hain to aap ka welcome karta hoon main is
safar mein...
aur aap se achchi achchi ghazlon ki umeed rahegi....


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