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Rishtey -
13th March 2003, 09:34 PM
DIL KE RISHTEY BHI KITNA AJEEB HOTE HAIN
DUR REH KAR BHI WOH KAREEB HOTE HAIN MERI BARBADIYON KA ZIKR NA KARO TUM YEH TO BUS APNE APNE NASEEB HOTE HAIN ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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13th March 2003, 10:00 PM
hi pyasa ji wah yaar u r a great shayar bahtu acha likha hai aapne....bahut hi acha...jitni tarif karu utna hi kam hai yaar..
DIL KE RISHTEY BHI KITNA AJEEB HOTE HAIN DUR REH KAR BHI WOH KAREEB HOTE HAIN MERI BARBADIYON KA ZIKR NA KARO TUM YEH TO BUS APNE APNE NASEEB HOTE HAIN ************************************************** ************************************************** **** Sach mein dil ke rishtey ajeeb hotey hai sanam dur hoke bhi kitney kareeb hotey hai vo saath ho to khushiyon se bhar jaata hai ye daaman varna unke begair sab kuch hote huye bhi..hum ik fakeer hote hai I LUVED UR WORDS YAAR ...PHIR SE TARIF KAR RAHI HU...BAHUT HI ACHA KAHA AAPNE LIKHTEY RAHIYE LUV PRIYA  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Shukriyaa -
13th March 2003, 10:56 PM
PRIYA JI,
Aapka reply dene ka andaaz to bus kamaal ka hai. Pata nahi lekin mein fir se yehi kahunga ke har bat ka jawaab hai aapke paas. Shayri ka jawaab shayri emin dena koi asaan kaam nahi hai kyunki aap likhne vaale ki soch ke hisaab se reply dete ho vaah kya baat hai pata nahi hum aapke jitna achha kab likh paayenge . Khair koi bat nahi aapka reply hi hamare liye bahut hai BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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vaah -
14th March 2003, 05:50 PM
aap ko kis cheez ki pyaas hai ? kya khub likha hai keep it up
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thanks -
15th March 2003, 10:01 PM
Piyush ji,
Welcome to SHAYRI.com & thanks for replying waise aapki signature LOVE FOR SALE 100% DISCOUNT mujhe bahut pasand aayi . Lagta hai aap kaafi aashiq mizaaj ho . BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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16th March 2003, 02:25 AM
hi pyaasa ji,
wah khoob likha hai... DIL KE RISHTEY BHI KITNA AJEEB HOTE HAIN DUR REH KAR BHI WOH KAREEB HOTE HAIN MERI BARBADIYON KA ZIKR NA KARO TUM YEH TO BUS APNE APNE NASEEB HOTE HAIN aise hi likhte rahiye, luv riddhi  |
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16th March 2003, 06:06 AM
Hello,
kiya lekha hai aapne very nice i love it..keep writing....love it.. dil keh rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hote hain aaj nahi to kal apne naseeb mein hote hain......heeeheee dor reh kar bhi woh kareeb hote hain... rabi |
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hello -
16th March 2003, 08:03 PM
hello,pyasa ji,
what u have written is very precise and penetrating .beautiful.!!!! |
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16th March 2003, 11:19 PM
RIDDHI JI ,
Shukriyaa jo aap ne meri post par reply diya . Thanks a lotttttttt and also thanks for considering me a friend BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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mumtaz_09 -
16th March 2003, 11:51 PM
thanks for ur compliments
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18th March 2003, 12:08 AM
Thanks RABI JI for replying
Thanks MUMTAZ JI for replying BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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