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Smile Lautne Ka Sabab - 9th April 2021, 11:40 PM

Aaj ek arse baad kuch likha hai....jise aap sabhi ke saath share kar rahi hu.

Tere lautne ka kuch to Sabab hoga
reh gaya adhura jo,ab wo mukammal hoga

sookh ke banjar ho chala tha jo
Ishq ka Dairya ab samundar hoga

Sadiya nikali hai tere intzaar mein
Deedar- e ishq ka ab kaatilana manjar hoga

likh de ab tu is dil pe apna naam
Wahi ab “pari” ka mukkaddar hoga

Aapki Apni,
Pari


Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :-)
   
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12th April 2021, 02:41 PM

Pari jee

Namaste


Waah.. Kya khoob andaaz e Bayaan.. Umdaah koshish.. Dil se daad


Khush rahen... Apna khayal rakhen

Bazm ko Yuunhi raushan karte rahiye

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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12th April 2021, 06:11 PM

Dhaval Ji,

Bahut Shukriya is daad ke liye. Ek lambe arse baad is forum pe lauti hu aur paaya ki sab kuch waisa hi hai. Bahut khushi mehsoos kar rahi hu. Kai dost banaye the is forum pe jo aaj bhi zindgi mein shaamil hai.
Aapka aur sabhi moderators ka bahut shukriya, sabhi ki naayab nazmo ko saalon se sambhal kar rakhne ke liye.

Aapki "Pari"


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12th April 2021, 06:40 PM

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Dhaval Ji,

Bahut Shukriya is daad ke liye. Ek lambe arse baad is forum pe lauti hu aur paaya ki sab kuch waisa hi hai. Bahut khushi mehsoos kar rahi hu. Kai dost banaye the is forum pe jo aaj bhi zindgi mein shaamil hai.
Aapka aur sabhi moderators ka bahut shukriya, sabhi ki naayab nazmo ko saalon se sambhal kar rakhne ke liye.

Aapki "Pari"

Shukriyaah Pari jee.. Aapko itne arse baad yahaan dekh Kar Khushi hui aur wo bhee ek tehreer ke saath.. Shayri parivaar ke pooraane sadasyon ko dekh Kar hamesha Khushi mehsoos hoti Hai.. Waqt chaahe jitna bhee chala jaaye.. Ye Shayri. Com parivaar ke liye Jo sabhee ke ehsaas Hai wo hamesha bane rehte hain. Yahi khaashiyat Hai ees parivaar ki.

Aate rahen.. Bazm ko raushan karte rahen..

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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12th April 2021, 08:48 PM

Pari ji,

aapka yah sher man ko bahut bhaya..

Sadiya nikali hai tere intzaar mein
Deedar- e ishq ka ab kaatilana manjar hoga


aapke signature Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :- per aapki pratikriya jaanne ki echchha hai..

shubhkamnao sahit,
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12th April 2021, 10:39 PM

Akant ji,

Bahut dhanyawad aapko ye sher pasand aaya. Aur jo signature lines hai unke baare aapko jaroor tafseel se bataungi.

Pari.


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17th April 2021, 02:04 AM

Very well written Pari.

I hope you are doing well. I too haven't been here since ages. Too Nostalgic indeed.

2 lines of thoughts came while reading your work.-
uske aane ka sabab jo bhi ho
yun laga mai abhi zinda hun "sush"

Take Very Good care
God Bless


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein

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17th April 2021, 08:30 PM

Sushil ji,
Kaise hai aap? Phir se mil kar acchha laga. Sach kaha wo guzra jamana yaad aa gaya.

uske aane ka sabab jo bhi ho
yun laga mai abhi zinda hun "sush"

Bilkul zinda aur durust rahiye warna yaha meri post pe daad kaun dega.

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Aaj ek arse baad kuch likha hai....jise aap sabhi ke saath share kar rahi hu.

Tere lautne ka kuch to Sabab hoga
reh gaya adhura jo,ab wo mukammal hoga

sookh ke banjar ho chala tha jo
Ishq ka Dairya ab samundar hoga

Sadiya nikali hai tere intzaar mein
Deedar- e ishq ka ab kaatilana manjar hoga

likh de ab tu is dil pe apna naam
Wahi ab “pari” ka mukkaddar hoga

Aapki Apni,
Pari
Bohot khoob pari ji
waaaah......
yoon hi likhte rahiye aur share karte rahiye

aapka apna
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