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Apna Thodha
Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !

Hawaa Me
Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
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Mann Ki Daal Se
Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !


naresh bhayee ji mujeh aapki nazme bahut achi lagti hai, lekin is bar nahi woh baat lagi ......

hos akta haim, is time mera dimaag kuch uljhaa hua hai isle nahi achi lag rahi ho

mere khyaal se jo aapne har stanza mai end kiya hai na... usme nazm ka mazaa aadha ho gaya ...
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hos akta haim, is time mera dimaag kuch uljhaa hua hai isle nahi achi lag rahi ho

mere khyaal se jo aapne har stanza mai end kiya hai na... usme nazm ka mazaa aadha ho gaya ...
aise ki tukde tukde rakhi ho nazm ....


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Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
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Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
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TukDeTukDe
Samet
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Kaise
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Naresh Ji,

Bahut khubsurati se ehsaaso ko lafzo me byaan kiya hai aapne......!!! Bahut pasand aai aapki ye nazam.....!!! Dil se daad hazir hai.....!!! aise hi likhte rahiye......!!!!

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Hawaa Me
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YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
Apne Pyaar Ko
ToD
Mann Ki Daal Se
Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !
bahut khoob naresh ji,
Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !
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Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
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Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

naresh bhai ! bahut umda likha hai aapne . dil se golden daad kabool keejie
Parveen Ji ... aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath...



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Apna Thodha
Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !

Hawaa Me
Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
Apne Pyaar Ko
ToD
Mann Ki Daal Se
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ji bhaut sunder........................

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Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
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bahut khoob likha hai bhai tumne.....dil se daad.....likhte rahen
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duaaon ke saath,,,,



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duaaon ke saath ....



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Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
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Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
Apne Pyaar Ko
ToD
Mann Ki Daal Se
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wah kya likha hai.......great
koi muqabla nahi........

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Bahut khubsurati se ehsaaso ko lafzo me byaan kiya hai aapne......!!! Bahut pasand aai aapki ye nazam.....!!! Dil se daad hazir hai.....!!! aise hi likhte rahiye......!!!!
Kavita Ji ...... aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shurkiya ... khush rahen ....

duaaon ke saath ....



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Fantastic Naresh...............very unique way of expression............

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Kisi
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ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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ji bhaut sunder........................

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Shukriya ... Radhika Ji ! aapki pasandegi ka ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...



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Hawaa Me
Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
Apne Pyaar Ko
ToD
Mann Ki Daal Se
Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !


Naresh bhai.. kya khoob likha hai aapne.. wo khwahish wo hasraten kagaaz pe utaar ke rakh di hain.. purasar kalaam.. guzarish yoonhi likhte rahen..

shaad..

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Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !

 Naresh Jii,

Wah Janab,
Kia khoobsorat Nazm likhi hai,

Quoted lines boht hi pasand aayiiN,

Younhi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,

*hSn* : parStaar

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Hawaa Me
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Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !
Shukriya ... Mayoos Ji .. aapki pasandegi ka ... khush rahen ...

aise hi aate rahen aur milte rahen aage bhi ...

duaaon ke saath ...



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Naresh bhai.. kya khoob likha hai aapne.. wo khwahish wo hasraten kagaaz pe utaar ke rakh di hain.. purasar kalaam.. guzarish yoonhi likhte rahen..

shaad..
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duaaon ke saath ...



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Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
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Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
Apne Pyaar Ko
ToD
Mann Ki Daal Se
Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !


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Chehre Ki Udaasi
Kaaghaz Pe Likh DooN ... !

Khol Rakhe Darwaaze Pe
Apna Thodha
Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !

 Naresh Jii,

Wah Janab,
Kia khoobsorat Nazm likhi hai,

Quoted lines boht hi pasand aayiiN,

Younhi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,
Hassan Ji .. Aadaab !

aapka koshish ko saraahane ka ... hausla afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya .. aise aate rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Chehre Ki Udaasi
Kaaghaz Pe Likh DooN ... !

Khol Rakhe Darwaaze Pe
Apna Thodha
Intezaar Rakh DooN ... !

Hawaa Me
Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Jaagi AankhoN Se
Bune Sapne Ko
Raat Jaise
UdherDti Dhaage
TukDeTukDe
Samet
Subhaa Tak
Hathelii Pe Rakh DooN ... !

Kaise
Apne Pyaar Ko
ToD
Mann Ki Daal Se
Aznabi Ke Saath Kar DooN ... !
naresh ji. pooree ki pooree rachana behad khoobsurat aur samvedana se bharee huwee hai. yeh panktiyaan to jaise dil mein bas gayeen ...

Hawaa Me
Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

dher saaree daad aur dua ke saath .... zarraa
   
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Liipte
YaadoN Ke Pal
Kuch Suukhe
Kuch Bheege Patte
Khaali Din Ki
Kisi
Almaari MeN Rakh DooN ... !

Sir
Kya khoob likha hai, touching feelings.

Best regards ,

Rashid

Rashid Bhai ... aapke saraahane aur hausla afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya .. khush rahen ....

duaaon ke saath ...



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Naresh bhai ... Badiya nazm rahi .. Bahut badiya khyaal piroye aapne .. Bas kahin ant mein won baat nahi lagi, baaki nazm asardaar thi ... Duub sa gaya tha ... Bahut ahche ...
   
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