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jive tu mera kade na ho sakiya, - 14th August 2007, 10:09 PM

Jive tu mera kade na ho sakiya,
ove hi mai vi kise hor di ho na saki
jive tu meri yaad wich kade ro na sakiya
ove mai vi tere bina kise liye ro na saki
tu ek raat nu aaye sapne varga ve
isse sapne kaaran hakikat ch rah na saki
tere oh mithe bol sun liye si jo ek vaar
hun hor kise nu sunan jogi rah na saki
Do pal jo gujar laye tere naal sajna ve
baki di jindgi nu mai aapna keh na saki
tere naal bolna mainu taa mehga hi pe gaya
ajj phir tere naal bole bina reh na saki
jad da tainu aapna mai kiha hai sajana ve
sach jani kise hor nu aapna keh na saki






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15th August 2007, 09:48 AM

Hello Madam HEER ji

Barre dina baad kuch likhiya hai,
par jo vi likhiya hai ji kamaal da hai,
bahut hi pyara, sachi tuhade jina pyara hai


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HELLO DOST HEER

Ki haal hai? tuahdi bahut yaad aa rahi si,
kyon ene din iss mehfil jo nahi aaye

par ene dina baad jo vi tusi likhiya hai,
Jive tu mera kade na ho sakiya,
ove hi mai vi kise hor di ho na saki

bahut hi pyara
bahut hi sohna
bahut hi kamaal da hai

jad da tainu aapna mai kiha hai sajana ve
sach jani kise hor nu aapna keh na saki

iss poem di ek ek line kise liye pyar naal bhari payi hai,
jive sara pyar kise ek nu hi kar liya hove















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So don't live ur life without love "






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15th August 2007, 10:32 AM

THANK U "A-DEEP"


ISS POEM NU LIKE KARAN LIYA





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15th August 2007, 10:37 AM

THANK U LOVEDEEP

HA JI, mai theek thak hai? tusi daso kida ho sab dost

thank u mainu yaad karan liye, ha ji aa gaye hai tuahdi mehfil wich

meri poem nu ena jiada sohna kehan liye sukariya,
sachi LOVEDEEP jini tu aap pyari hai, one hi pyare ans dindi hai,
jine tu sohne ans dendi hai, phir poem taa aape hi sohni ho jani hai







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hello HEER aaj ene dina baad sadi yaad aa hi gayi tuhanu.par tuhadi vapsi bahut hi jyada sohni hai.par sach kaha ta teri har poem mainu uljha ke rakh dindi hai.

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15th August 2007, 12:44 PM

HA JI BABBU JI, ki haal hai?
hun tusi phir kyon ulajh gaye ho?
hun tuahnu kis gal ne uljha dita hai

asal wich tuhada koi dosh nahi.
tuhanu ek song yaad karva deva.

tuhanu uljha samajh wich aa javegi.
ki tusi song suniya hai ke....
JOGIYA DE KANNA WICH KACH DIYA MUNDRA
MUNDRA WICH TERA MUH DISDA
VE MAI JIHERE PAASE DEKHA
MAINU TU DISDA


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Heer ji chaa gayey.... - 25th October 2007, 01:00 PM

Kamaal likhiyaa hai heer ji. bahut nighhiaan lines ne.........

tere oh mithe bol sun liye si jo ek vaar
hun hor kise nu sunan jogi rah na saki

Do pal jo gujar laye tere naal sajna ve
baki di jindgi nu mai aapna keh na saki
tere naal bolna mainu taa mehga hi pe gaya
ajj phir tere naal bole bina reh na saki

Bass kamaal kardey raho issey tarah aur duniyaa tonn waah waah laindey raho...

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26th October 2007, 10:23 AM

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Kamaal likhiyaa hai heer ji. bahut nighhiaan lines ne.........

tere oh mithe bol sun liye si jo ek vaar
hun hor kise nu sunan jogi rah na saki
Do pal jo gujar laye tere naal sajna ve
baki di jindgi nu mai aapna keh na saki
tere naal bolna mainu taa mehga hi pe gaya
ajj phir tere naal bole bina reh na saki

Bass kamaal kardey raho issey tarah aur duniyaa tonn waah waah laindey raho...

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Thank u Talik ji eni pyari reply den liye, eni tareef karan liye,tuhade spend kite time liye sukariya




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Jive tu mera kade na ho sakiya,
ove hi mai vi kise hor di ho na saki
jive tu meri yaad wich kade ro na sakiya
ove mai vi tere bina kise liye ro na saki
tu ek raat nu aaye sapne varga ve
isse sapne kaaran hakikat ch rah na saki
tere oh mithe bol sun liye si jo ek vaar
hun hor kise nu sunan jogi rah na saki
Do pal jo gujar laye tere naal sajna ve
baki di jindgi nu mai aapna keh na saki
tere naal bolna mainu taa mehga hi pe gaya
ajj phir tere naal bole bina reh na saki
jad da tainu aapna mai kiha hai sajana ve
sach jani kise hor nu aapna keh na saki





really nice work..........


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Thx sunita ji iss nu read karan liye and tuhade time liye jo tusi sade liye vi spend kita





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ਚੰਨ ਚਾੰਨਣੀ ਰਾਤ ’ਚ ਇੱਕ ਹੋਰ ਚੰਨ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ ਮੈਂ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,
ਸੁਣ ਸੋਹ੍ਣਿਆ ਤਾਰਿਆ ਵੇ , ਇੱਕ ਚੰਨ ਦੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਮਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ,
ਅਖਰ ਥੋੜੇ ਨੇ , ਕੀ ਕੀ ਸਿਫ਼ਤ ਕਰਾਂ ਅਪ੍ਣੇ ਚੰਨ ਦੀ ਮੈ ,
ਜੀ ਕਰਦਾ ਹੁਣ ਕਹਿਦਾਂ , ਓਹੰਨੂ ਗੱਲ ਅਪਣੇ ਮੰਨ ਦੀ ਮੈਂ,
ਕਿੱਤੇ ਕਰਜੇ ਨ ਗੁੱਸਾ .ਇਸ ਗੱਲ ਤੋ ਥੋੜਾ ਮੈ ਡਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ਵੇ,
ਇੱਕ ਚੰਨ ਦੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਮਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ,
ਸੁਣ ਸੋਹ੍ਣਿਆ ਤਾਰਿਆ ਵੇ.....?
ਉਹ ਬਾਤ ਗਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਪਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ,
ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਹਾਸੇ ਲਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ..
ਉਨ੍ਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਹੱਟੀ ਤੋਂ ਮਿਲਦੈ ਦਰਦ ਤੋਹਫਾ,
ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਮੁਸਕਰਾਹਟ ਲਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ..
ਉਹ ਵੈਰ ਵੇਚਦੇ ਹਸ ਹਸ ਕੇ,
ਮੈਂ ਯਾਰ ਲਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ..
ਉਨ੍ਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਬੇ-ਵਫਾਈ ਫਿਤਰਤ ਵਿਚ,
ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਵਫਾ ਨਿਭਾਉਂਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ..


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ਚੰਨ ਚਾੰਨਣੀ ਰਾਤ ’ਚ ਇੱਕ ਹੋਰ ਚੰਨ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ ਮੈਂ ਕਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ,
ਸੁਣ ਸੋਹ੍ਣਿਆ ਤਾਰਿਆ ਵੇ , ਇੱਕ ਚੰਨ ਦੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਮਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ,
ਅਖਰ ਥੋੜੇ ਨੇ , ਕੀ ਕੀ ਸਿਫ਼ਤ ਕਰਾਂ ਅਪ੍ਣੇ ਚੰਨ ਦੀ ਮੈ ,
ਜੀ ਕਰਦਾ ਹੁਣ ਕਹਿਦਾਂ , ਓਹੰਨੂ ਗੱਲ ਅਪਣੇ ਮੰਨ ਦੀ ਮੈਂ,
ਕਿੱਤੇ ਕਰਜੇ ਨ ਗੁੱਸਾ .ਇਸ ਗੱਲ ਤੋ ਥੋੜਾ ਮੈ ਡਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ਵੇ,
ਇੱਕ ਚੰਨ ਦੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਵੀ ਮਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ,
ਸੁਣ ਸੋਹ੍ਣਿਆ ਤਾਰਿਆ ਵੇ.....?

ਉਹ ਬਾਤ ਗਮਾਂ ਦੀ ਪਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ,
ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਹਾਸੇ ਲਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ..
ਉਨ੍ਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਹੱਟੀ ਤੋਂ ਮਿਲਦੈ ਦਰਦ ਤੋਹਫਾ,
ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਮੁਸਕਰਾਹਟ ਲਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ..
ਉਹ ਵੈਰ ਵੇਚਦੇ ਹਸ ਹਸ ਕੇ,
ਮੈਂ ਯਾਰ ਲਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ..
ਉਨ੍ਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਬੇ-ਵਫਾਈ ਫਿਤਰਤ ਵਿਚ,
ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਵਫਾ ਨਿਭਾਉਂਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ਹਾਂ ..

Hello shaminder ji, tusi taa bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, bhahut hi sohna and bahut hi dugia gallan han


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Koi Gal Yaad ni - 23rd November 2007, 03:53 AM

Your wrote a reality of life .....!

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EK SHAKHS NE US KO CHAHA THA,
WOH ZAAT BHI US KO YAD NAHIN,
JAB SHAB KI BIJLI CHAMKI THI,
AUR BADAL TOT K BARSA THA,
HUM DONO JIS MEIN BHEGAY THE,
WOH BARSAT BHI US KO YAD NAHI,
WOH SAHIL DARYA PHOOL HAWA,
WOH WADA SATH NIBHANAY KA,
AUR SHAB BHAR “CHAND” KO DEKHA THA,
WOH RAAT BHI US KO YAD NAHIN,
JAG...Z, KEHTI THI MAIN SUNTA THA,
M KEHTA THA WOH SUNTI THI,
UN LAKHON BATON MEIN KOI,
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Your wrote a reality of life .....!

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KOI BAAT BHI US KO YAD NAHI,
EK SHAKHS NE US KO CHAHA THA,
WOH ZAAT BHI US KO YAD NAHIN,
JAB SHAB KI BIJLI CHAMKI THI,
AUR BADAL TOT K BARSA THA,
HUM DONO JIS MEIN BHEGAY THE,
WOH BARSAT BHI US KO YAD NAHI,
WOH SAHIL DARYA PHOOL HAWA,
WOH WADA SATH NIBHANAY KA,
AUR SHAB BHAR “CHAND” KO DEKHA THA,
WOH RAAT BHI US KO YAD NAHIN,
JAG...Z, KEHTI THI MAIN SUNTA THA,
M KEHTA THA WOH SUNTI THI,
UN LAKHON BATON MEIN KOI,
EK BAAT BHI US KO YAAD NAHIN,
Thank u Amanz singh ji iss poem liye reply den liye, tusi vi bahut hi sohna likh leinde ho,tusi ta ek ek line nu bahut hi sohna likhiya hai, GOOD JOB


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punjabnj heer ji ssa,


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Hello Heer ji, tusi bahut dina baad vapis aaye ho, Dr. preet ji theek keh rahe han, asi tuhadi navi poem di wait kar rahe hai








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Thanks for your's replies

Preet ji tusi taa kuch jiada hi tareef kar rahe ho, tusi taa khud ena sohna likh leinde ho
Mai vi Jaldi hi aapni navi poem le ke aavagi, Mainu khushi hai ke shayri.com de sare dost mainu vi yaad karde han
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sat sri akal heer g........main aje jst eh site join he kitti a.....te mainu eh site join krke bhot changa lageya kyonki ethe bhot tuhade frnds ne jo chahe tuhanu jaande v nai pr tuhada honsla jaroor vadhaunde ne....
te rahi gall writing d g tusi bhot sohna likheya te jis tareeke naal pesh kita a oh v bhot vadhiya laggeya...
te shaminder g tusi v bhot zyada sohna likhde ho..i m really impressed by ur poetry....keep it up
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kabhi khamoshi bhi bhut kuchh keh jati hai
tadpne k liye sirf yaade reh jati hai
kya farak padta hai dil ho ya koyla
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Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,


sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,


Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,


To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.


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kya farak padta hai dil ho ya koyla
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Thanks Dineshdharvi ji ke tusi aapne ene sohne shayer sade sabh naal sanjhe kite


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sory hume punjabi nahi samaj aati hai


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sat sri akal heer g........main aje jst eh site join he kitti a.....te mainu eh site join krke bhot changa lageya kyonki ethe bhot tuhade frnds ne jo chahe tuhanu jaande v nai pr tuhada honsla jaroor vadhaunde ne....
te rahi gall writing d g tusi bhot sohna likheya te jis tareeke naal pesh kita a oh v bhot vadhiya laggeya
Hello Raj sharma ji,
sab to pehla taa tuhada iss site te sawagat hai
Thanks ke tusi meri iss poem nu like kita and aapna kimti time spend kita


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sorry hume punjabi nahi aati hai

uote=PUNJABAN HEER;260469]Thanks Dineshdharvi ji ke tusi aapne ene sohne shayer sade sabh naal sanjhe kite[/quote]


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Sorry mujhe pata nahi tha,
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Sorry mujhe pata nahi tha,
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pls app sorry na kahiye hume bhi nahi pata hota hai ke hum kya likh rahe hai jo juban sath deti hai vahi likh dete hai aur thoda dil ka sath lete hai

Khaaye Hain Lakho Dhokhe, Ek Dhokha Aur Seh Lenge, Tum Lejao Apni Doli Ko, Hum Apne Janaaze Ko Baarat Keh Lenge


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tere oh mithe bol sun liye si jo ek vaar
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Do pal jo gujar laye tere naal sajna ve
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Thanks Singhmar ji ke tusi aapa waqat iss poem nu dita and eh shayar sade sabh naal sanjha kita







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Pyaar karnewale anjaam nahi sochate HAI
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Zindagi bhar ke saath ki umeed laga lete hai,
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good aa ji........ik line ta sira e aa.......tere nal bolna mehnga hi pya,ajj fer bole bina reh na saki............te ik gall hor tusi awda poora naam dassonge? shyd main tuhanu jaan da...........
   
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heer jii, aaj nazar payee thode i's kalaam te...padh ke vadhiya laga....
bohat sona likhya hai....khaas kar ke eh neeche waliyaaN lines ta bahut hi pasand aayeeaN...enj laga jime kise ne mere hi dil di gal keh diti hove....
bohat khoob.....




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heer jii, aaj nazar payee thode i's kalaam te...padh ke vadhiya laga....
bohat sona likhya hai....khaas kar ke eh neeche waliyaaN lines ta bahut hi pasand aayeeaN...enj laga jime kise ne mere hi dil di gal keh diti hove....
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Thank u Vikram ji, tusi aapna kimati time de ke poems read kitiya,
Thx again for ur reply


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Heer Jee

Tusi bahut changa likhiya si...
Mainu uti panjabi samajh mein na andi
par pata nai kaise mainu tuhadi puri shayari samjh mein
aa gayi... Sabhi line sona likhiyaa sii...

Aisa lageya ke tainu sachi muchi ki hi Heer se
Jo sara ka sara haal sacha aur Vadiya likhiya..

Sade dil se daad hazir hai jee..

Keep writting..
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