Jab zindgi karke kinara guzar gayi eik ghazal

[Hardev Ashk]

dosto:

Ek ghazal lekar haazar ho rahaa hoon. aapke comments ka intzaar rahega.
Meri Kitab 'Safar Ki PugDunDiyaN' se. pahli bar ye 1998 mein ebazm web site pe di thi. Abhi jab maine vaise hi google kiya, dekha to kuCH hazraat jaise sardar11 from Pakistan & others, mera last maqta shayer drop karke iska credit le raheiN haiN. Any way I am glad they like it .

jab ziNdgi karke kinaara guzar gayee
fir zikr kyaa kareiN voh kahaaN kidhar gayee

yeh to nahiN gilaa suNg maare raqeeb neiN
dekha tujhe jo saath zaraa aaNkh bhar gayee

chhupaana logoN se to naa mushkil kabhi huaa
aa-i-na jab bolne lagaa meri zaat dar gayee

chaahat ki raah pe mukaam roshan kiye bahut
mohabbat wafa dosti na teri nazar gayee

naam wafaa ka lekar jo detaa rahaa dagaa
kyoN uske iNtzaar meiN tamanna thehar gayee

kiski talaash thee na booNd abr per ruki
sehra meiN jaa jali bahr-o-bahar gayee

gaati thee "Ashk" akasar vo laRki teri ghazal
kar soona maazi ki gali kis shaher gayee


Glossary:
suNg -stone, mukaam-milestone, zaat- conscious
bahr-o-bahar- ocean to ocean, soona- leave
maazi- past abr-cloud

[sunita thakur]

chhupaana logoN se to naa mushkil kabhi huaa
aa-i-na jab bolne lagaa meri zaat dar gayee


wahhhh....kya kahne....bahut khoobsurat lga har ahsaas par yeh ahsaas khaas accha lga....daad hazir hai.

keep posting
god bless u