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10th April 2003, 01:09 PM
hi dosto kaise ho aap log ! sochata hu kabhi kabhi ye dil bahut nadan hota hai na jane kyon usi ko yad karne pe amada rahta hai jo ise najarandaj karte hain !
khayale yar mere dil ko tadpaya hi karta hai jindgi nakam me hasrate jagaya hi karta hai yoon to bhujha chuke the chirage mohabbat ko chitao ki tarah tham ..tham ke jalaya hi karta hai |
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10th April 2003, 02:36 PM
Kabhi apney socha hai ki hum jo chaey ager wo humey mil bhi jayee to hum
insanoo mein aur god mein farq hi kya reh jayegaa. Shayad yahi farq hai uski duniya aur hum insanoo ki duniya mein. Yahi wahah hai ki kahin na kahin wo hamare lifestyle mein , hamari life mein kuch adhuraa pan dal deta hai. Ek blankness ……. Aaj shayad kuch jayada hi likh diyaaaa…….. |
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10th April 2003, 03:32 PM
Aadab arz hai Kshitiz sahab,
aapke is sher ne kuch yaadein taza ker di aaj...  .... achcha likha hai aapne aapne mera naam poocha tha... to aap 'bedil' keh sakte hai mujhe... 'bedil' hoo isliye dil ki baato ke baare me jyada kuch nahi keh sakta... likhte rahiye aur muskurate rahiye... |
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10th April 2003, 08:13 PM
meetu ji aapki bate to sochne me majboor kar deti hain god humari life me darkness kyon chor deta hai iski koi na koi vajah to honi hi chahiye jis adhure pan ki aap bat kar rahi hain vo god ki vvaajah se hai ya humari khud ki vajah se hai anyway is bat ka javab sochna asan nahi hai aap ne bahut achhi bat likhi hai iisi tarah likhti rahiye padh ke khushi hoti hai !
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10th April 2003, 08:24 PM
shukriya musafir sahab tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ... but aap apna naam kyon chupana chahte hain aiisi kya bat ki aap ne apna naam bedil rakh liya .. well again thx for wrinting me .
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12th April 2003, 03:47 PM
Kshitiz sahab mai apna naam chupana nahi chahta..
bedil hoo isliye chahta hoo ki aap mujhe bedil hi kahe... shukriya dost |
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12th April 2003, 03:58 PM
Apne bohat achha lika hai.. Dil ko chhoo lene wale kalaam zehen me goonjte hi rehte hai.. issi tareh apke khayalaat baar baar yaad aate rahenge..
I think khuda hume har modh par aazmaata hai. Usne humara nasseb likh to diya hai, par baar baar humara imtehaan lekar dekhta hai ki hum me kismat se ladne ki taaqat hai ya nahin? Agar khuda ne humaari taqdeer mein kuchh likha hai, to usse badalne ka faisla bhi Ussi ke saath hai. Is ummeed pe, ke kissi din Khuda hum par meherbaan hoga, humaari qismat badlega, issi umeed pe Duniya qayam hai. warna insaan to kab ka jeena chhod deta. Qismat se ladte raho, shayad jeet jaao. Aur agar haar bhi gaye to kum se kum ye tasalli rahegi ki hum mare nahin, shaheed hue  Apne liha bohat achha hai, Likhte rahiyge. |
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12th April 2003, 04:36 PM
musafir sahab aap aisa kyon kahte hain ki aap bedil hai, aap really bahut achha likhte hain aap to bedil ho hi nahi sakte ab ye alag bat hai ki aap hume apna nam batana na chahe to koi bat nahi hum aapko bedil to kah nahi sakte haan musafir jaror pukar lenge !
aapka dost ! |
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12th April 2003, 04:43 PM
shukriya banno ji tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aap bhi bahut achha likhti hain !
aapki ye bat to sahi hai ki ummid pe duniya kayam hai aur humari dua aapke sath hai ki agar aapke sath upar wale ne kuch galat likha to ek din apne hi hatho se vo use theek bhi karega ! well humari taree ke liye ek bar fir bahut bahut shukriya .............koshish karunga ki aage bhi isi tarah se likhta rahu ! |
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12th April 2003, 04:47 PM
Apki dua ke liya tahe dil se shukria!
Kabhi zindagi ki rah me koi mushkil rukawat aayi, to aapka kaha zaroor yaad aayega.. |
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12th April 2003, 04:53 PM
maaf kijiyega Kshitiz sahab...
maafi chahunga gustakhi ke liye... aapko meri baat ka bura lag gaya shayad... mai achcha likhta hoo iska matlab ye nahi ke mai bedil nahi ho sakta... aap musafir kehna chahte hai to ye hi sahi....per agar aap mujhe bedil hi kehte to bohat kushi hoti dost... khuda hafiz dost... |
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12th April 2003, 05:05 PM
banno ji dosto ko shukriya nahi kahte aur jindgi to rukavato ka dusra nam hi hai har kadam pe mil jayengi mushkile magar dil me hausla ho aur uparwale pe bharosa to jindgi ek na ek din jaror phool ban kar muskurayegi !
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12th April 2003, 05:10 PM
arre musafir sahab ye kya kah diya aapne dosto me muafi nahi mangi jati aap aisa na kaha kijiye aur agar aapko khushi hoti hai to hum aapko bedil hi kahenge wel dil me ek kasak jaror rah jayegi ki aapne apna nam nahi bataya chaliye koi bat nahi ek purana sher yad aa gaya to humne socha ki aapke sath shair kar liya jaye !
mushkile dil ke irade aajmati hain kabhi khushiya gum ban kar bhi muskurati hain thak kar baith mat jana aye musafir thokre insan ko chalna sikhati hain |
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12th April 2003, 05:14 PM
thokre insan ko chalna sikhati hain??????????
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12th April 2003, 05:24 PM
Sahi kaha aapne.. Dosto ka shukria adaa nahi karte.. hum sorry keh dete magar dosto se sorry bhi to nahin keh sakte!
 Apne phir bohat achha kaha!.. yeh naya sher short, sweet and honest hai.. Thokarein insaan ko chalna hi nahin, sambhal kar chalna sikhati hain ..Aapki soch hume bohat pasand aayi.. milte rahenge dost! |
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12th April 2003, 05:25 PM
meetu ji aisa to ho hi nahi sakta ho ki kisi insan ne apni jingi me thokre na khayi ho ... aur har koi thokar khane ke bad hi sabhalta hai hote honge kuch kushnasib jinke nasib me upar wale ne thokre nahi !
insan thokre khata hai girta hai uthta hai uske jehun se apni bhool chali jati hai vo phir thokar khata hai phir girta hai ye silksila chalta rahta hai jab tak use apni bhool ka ehsas nahi ho jata hai aur ek waqt aata hai jab vo apne aap ko bacha bacha kar chalta hai kadam bahut sambhal sambhal kar rakhta hai so isi mayne me kaha ja sakta hai ki .. thokre insan ko chalna sikhati hai |
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12th April 2003, 05:29 PM
Kshitiz sahab... bohat khushi hui ke aapne hamare saath is sher ko share kiya...
aur rahi thakne ki baat to agar mai thak gaya hota to aaj shayd yah nahi hota... sahi kaha aapne ki thokre insaan ko chalna aur sambhalna sikha deti hai... aapke is sher per mujhe kuch yaad aa gaya... aadmi wo nahi halaat badal de jisko aadmi wo hai jo halaat badal deta hai |
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12th April 2003, 05:33 PM
aap sahi keh rahey hai kshitiz ji..thokrey insaan ko chalna hi nahi aur bhi bahut kuch sika deti hai .
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12th April 2003, 05:43 PM
kya bat hai bedil sahab kya sher mara hai aapne hum to dab gaye iske niche
bahut achha likha bhai aapne likhte rahiye isitarah se aur muskurate rahiye kyonki jindgi jindadili ka nam hai murda dil kya khak jiya karte hain |
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12th April 2003, 05:47 PM
meetu ji aap to always hi har cheej ko bahut achi tarah se samjhne ki koshish karti hain i knw u have a gud human sence of understanding .
well keep it up . take care . |
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12th April 2003, 05:49 PM
arre dost hamara irada aapko dabane ka nahi tha
..ye sher maine nahi likha hai... per jisne bhi likha bohat khoob likha... yaar aap hame murda dil to mat kaho kam se kam.... bedil hi kafi hai hum khair achcha likha hai aapne likhte rahiye aur muskurate rahiye... |
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12th April 2003, 05:52 PM
bedil sahab ab to aap apna nam hume bata hi dijiye chahe aapka dil tp pvt me hi bata dijiye aapka nam janne ki badi bechaini ho rahi hai
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12th April 2003, 05:57 PM
kshitz ji...kabhi kabhi insaan apney hi duniya mein simttker reh jata hi...aur kai aise ques. uskey pas hotey hai jinka answer shayad hum insaan to kya wo upper wala god bhi nahin desakta aur phir hum insano ki raah mein woh questions thokroo key rup mein daal di jati hai.
kabhi god sey aamna -samna hua to zarur puchun gi. |
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12th April 2003, 06:05 PM
arre meetu ji dont say like this bhagvan na kare abhi aapka itni jaldi god se samna pade abhi to aapko humari kalam ka bahut dino tak sath dena hai aur ek aap nahi hain is bheed me jise apne savalo ka javab chahiye aap jaise aur bhi bahut log hain jinhe javab ka intjar hai sab isi ummid me hai ki kab unka intjar khatam ho magar hum aap se ek bat kahna chahenge yahan .....ki
khuda hume bhale na javab de magar aane wala waqt unko jaror javab dega jinhone hume in savalato ke kabil bana kar chor diya hai ! |
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