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15th June 2004, 09:03 AM
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aaj kuchh alag sa aapke saamne pesh kar raha hun ye nai koshish ummid karta hun aapko pasand aaye jab se tujhko meri aankho ne kar diya rukhsat..! tujhko har baat pe mai yaad hee kar leta hun..!! tere hone ka ajab ahsaaas mujhe rahta hai ..! main tanhai mai tujhse baat bhi kar leta hun !! tamam umr ke khaton ko khole betha hun ! ab aage sirf tanhai hai dil ke khaton mai !! jo rang tujhpe mahkta tha unse surkh hai aankh ! ye kiske naam kee mahndi hai tere haathon mai !! main aaj bhi thahra hun usi raste pe ..! janhaa se tumne apni rah khud chun lee thee !! mai tere saath bahut khush thaa ye baat shaayad..! meri kismat meri takdeer ne bhi sun lee thee..!! jo ho gaya mujhe uska koi malal nahi ! mujhe to gam mahaj itna hai ke kuchh hua hee nahi !! mai jiski aarjoo jiska khayaal rakhta tha ! us ek baat ne dil ko tere chhua hee nahi !! bahut achhe the din wo raat mere bachpun ke ! ke dil ke sheeshe janhaa saaf hua karte the ..!! harek dil mai hume apna aks milta tha ! hurek aankh mai kuchh khwaab hua karte the !! tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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15th June 2004, 06:20 PM
hello anish ...
as usual ...this one is also fantastic ....keep it up ... i like it very much specially bahut achhe the din wo raat mere bachpun ke ! ke dil ke sheeshe janhaa saaf hua karte the ..!! harek dil mai hume apna aks milta tha ! hurek aankh mai kuchh khwaab hua karte the !! take care shalini |
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16th June 2004, 06:46 PM
dear shalini
tumhe bahut dino baad aaj yanhaa dekha to bahut khushi hui tumne aaj bhi meri is koshish ko saraha thnx waise ye meri ek alag or juda see koshish thee isliye ho sakta hai isme mai abhi thoda kachacha hun par koshish to aakhir koshish hoti hai hai na ????? ok take care tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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26th June 2004, 02:30 AM
jab se tujhko meri aankho ne kar diya rukhsat..!
tujhko har baat pe mai yaad hee kar leta hun..!! tere hone ka ajab ahsaaas mujhe rahta hai ..! main tanhai mai tujhse baat bhi kar leta hun !! Bahut hi achi ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Anish ji.. Dard aur lafzon ka her pher aap khoob karna jaante ho. Aise hi likhte rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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26th June 2004, 09:11 AM
hi priya
pahle to shukriya kabool kijiye ke aap yanha aai or aapne in lafjo or jajbaton ke dariya me apne ahsaas bhi mila diye or jo apne kaha ke dard or lafjo ke pher kee baat to wo aap bhi bahut khubi se kar leti hain ok take care hamesha khush raho duaon ke saath ek anjaana sa dost anish tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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26th June 2004, 09:02 PM
Hello Anish
kaise ho? bahote hiaacha likha hai. kaise tarife karoo pata nahi lakine umeed akrti hoo tume samjte ho ki kya kehna hia. excellent. verynie. hamesha ki tarha. aise hi likhte raho hum padte rahinge. Mushkan |
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3rd November 2005, 11:12 PM
hi mushkan
sorry for late reply aapne mere likhe is ahsaas ko saraha thnx tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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3rd November 2005, 11:46 PM
Anish,
Bahut bahut bahut achha laga tumhe parhke... the entire creation is full of emotion. like each and every word of yours. Daad kubul karna, aur yeh baat dil ko chhu gayi... jo ho gaya mujhe uska koi malal nahi ! mujhe to gam mahaj itna hai ke kuchh hua hee nahi !! mai jiski aarjoo jiska khayaal rakhta tha ! us ek baat ne dil ko tere chhua hee nahi !! Take care!  |
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4th November 2005, 12:11 AM
dear parul
shukriya kabool kijiye aapko ye rachna achhi lagi iske liye aapka shukriya ada karta hun lafjon se dil ko utarta hun durd bhi bahar nikal ata hai kya karen any way thnx tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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4th November 2005, 04:54 AM
hi anish...bahaut umda likkha hai..khaas karke yeh 4 lines mujhe bahaut pasand aayi...
bahut achhe the din wo raat mere bachpun ke ! ke dil ke sheeshe janhaa saaf hua karte the ..!! harek dil mai hume apna aks milta tha ! hurek aankh mai kuchh khwaab hua karte the !! yuhin likhte raho.take care Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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4th November 2005, 12:17 PM
hi farhna
shukriya ke aapko meri in chand panktiyoa pasand aai aapki taareef ke liye shukriya kabool kijiye apne is dost se tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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