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Amrita-preetam -
22nd March 2006, 04:53 PM
MAINE JAB TERI SEJ PER PAIR REKHA THA
MEIN EK NAHI THI DO THI, EK SAMOOCHI BAYAHI, AUR EK SAMOOCHI KAWNARI, TERE BHOG KI KHATIR, MUJHE US KAWANRI KO KATAL KERNA THA, MEINE KATAL KIYA THA................. YEH KATAL JO........... KANUNAN JAYAJ HOTE HAI,.PER INKI JILLET, NAJAYAJ HOTI HAI. AUR- MAINE US JILLET KA ZEHER PIYA THA FIR SUBEH KE WAQET, KHUN SE BHEEGE APNE HATH DEKHE THE, HATH DHOYE THE, BILKUL USI TREHE JIS TREHE APNE AUR GANDLE ANGO KO DHOYA THA......... PER -JIYUN HI MEIN SHEASHE KE SAMENE GAYI, WEH SAMENE KHADI THI, WAHI JO MEINE APNI TEREF SE, RAAT KO KATAL KI THI. OH, KHUDAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KYA SEJ KA ANDHERA BAHUT GEHERA THA, MUJHE KISE KATAL KARNA THA. AUR KISE KATAL KER BATHI THI...........??????? written-by-AMRITA-PREETAM............ |
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Re: Amrita-preetam -
22nd March 2006, 05:18 PM
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Amrita Ji ki is kriti ko hamare saath share kerne liy mein aapka shukriya kerti hun. dard mei lipti hui -andere mei khoyi hui. Kanchan |
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sahir aur amrita -
22nd March 2006, 05:34 PM
sahir aur amrita do nam aise hain jine jeevan ke har pal main parh sakta hoon tum ne bahut hee dil ko choo lene walee rachana pesh kee hai sans ruk see gayee parh ke bas bahut khoob kavita pesh kee hai
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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22nd March 2006, 05:37 PM
ranju ji
share karne k liye sukriya bhaut hi gahre ehsaas hai shrdh 
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22nd March 2006, 07:33 PM
keep sharing such beautiful poems small mom(chotti ma)
 wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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22nd March 2006, 08:01 PM
thanks....kanchan she is great [was] nahi likh rahi.....kyuki woh apani nazmo se hamare beech sada rahengi........
with best wishes ranju |
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22nd March 2006, 08:02 PM
thanks.....small prince......
unki har nazm bahut hi khubsurat hai...... ranju |
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22nd March 2006, 08:04 PM
hi sweet shrdh.........
unki her nazm ek ghare aur mohbat ke ahsas main dubi hai..... thanks...... ranju |
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22nd March 2006, 08:25 PM
thanks anil ji.......
Amrita ji aur Sahir ji dono ka milan kavitaa aur geet ka milan tha.... Amrita ji ne ek jagah likha tha ki wah ithaas padti nahi ithass rahti hain..................sahi kaha tha.....unki har nazm behad khubsurat hai......... unko padne ke liye thanks...... ranju |
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23rd March 2006, 12:18 AM
bohat hi khoob...
raNju ji ise yahaN lane ka behad shukriya .. maiN pehle bhi padh chuka huN ise ... par aaj phir swar muh mauN hi dab gaye ... aate rahiye aise hi.... Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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23rd March 2006, 12:34 AM
Hi Ranjana,
I am a big fan of Amrita Preetam and glad to see that someone else is there to share the feelings...it's been long since someone reminded me of her creations... Thanks for posting.. Luv, ~SuNny ab kisko kya mila woh muqaddar ki baat hai~~ |
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23rd March 2006, 08:32 AM
shukriya sunil.........
main bhi unki bahut badi fan hun.......unki har nazm , har book ko maine kai baar pada hai aur har baar uska naya hi meaning paya hai...... thanks ranju |
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23rd March 2006, 08:36 AM
thanks KUNAL.......
AMRITA PREETAM ki har nazm bahuthi khubsurat hai....... shukriya........mere saath saath unko padne ke liye...... with best wishes... ranju |
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