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mar ke bhi mar na sake -
25th March 2003, 05:49 AM
hi everyone! how r u all doing ?
hope good. kafi din ho gaye kuch post karke, to socha ke kuch post karu, umeed hai ke aap sab ko pasand aaye ga. aaj kalam saath nahi de rahi, jaise ji kar bhi zindagi saath nahi de rahi hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake, tumhe chah kar bhi tumhe pa na sake zindagi mein khushi ki shayad kami hai, paimane se shayad sharab ki kami hai. hum to mar ke bhi tumhe bhoolenge nahi, mar ne ke baad jine ke khwahish karenge nahi. jaam se sharab pi kar bhi, pyaas khatm na hue kisi ki bhi, pyaar karne walo ki, intezaar ki raat khatm na hue kabhi.. hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake, tumse pyaar karke tumhe kabhi bata na sake. |
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25th March 2003, 06:03 AM
hi riddhi ji, how r u ? hope good, and i'm fine too. bahut hi achaA likhA haI.
==== hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake, tumhe chah kar bhi tumhe pa na sake jaam se sharab pi kar bhi, pyaas khatm na hue kisi ki bhi, pyaar karne walo ki, intezaar ki raat khatm na hue kabhi.. hum to mar ke bhi mar na sake, tumse pyaar karke tumhe kabhi bata na sake. ==== i liked these lines a lot. bahut hi khoob! likhte rahiye pooja |
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Riddhi ji -
25th March 2003, 08:21 AM
hi, kaisi hai aap? ji saach hai aapne bahut hi dino baad mehfil sazayee iss liye aane ka bahut shukriya....Riddhi ji bahut hi gehrayee mei present kiya hai. aise hi likhte rehega please
take care Ishiqka |
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25th March 2003, 10:47 AM
Bahut accha likha hai apne.Likhte rahiyega.
OK BYE. TAKE CARE. KEEP SMILING. |
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25th March 2003, 10:58 AM
Hi Riddhi ji,
Kaafi der ke baad kuchh post kiya hai aapne..Aapka ye kalaam achha laga.Aur khaas kar ke yeh sheyr bahut pasand aaya.. jaam se sharab pi kar bhi, pyaas khatm na hue kisi ki bhi, pyaar karne walo ki, intezaar ki raat khatm na hue kabhi Bahut hi khoobi se sachhai bayaan ki hai aapne in lines mein.. Likhte Rahiye Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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25th March 2003, 11:18 AM
Hi Riddhi ji,
Bahut hi khoobi se sachhai bayaan ki hai aapne, Its great swear pain "Yeh kis kye ziker se ankhon main aa gaye "AANSU" "yeh kis ka naam leya tha abhi abhi humne........" "Bahut Milteh Hain Jo Hansnye Walo Ko Rula Dyete Hain" "Nahen Milta TU Koye Ansu Ponchnye Wala Nahen Milta" |
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