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ek ghazal ...mere dost SHAAN ke naam... -
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doston....mere pyaare dost SHAAN ke naam ek ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai.....he is my sweetheart friend.....jitna pyaara insaan hai wo utna hi achcha aur sachcha dost bhi hai....dosti ka ye paigaam us paagal SHAAN ke naam...........
patjhad nahi wo to baharon ki tarah hai, ek shaks andhero me ujalo ki tarah hai, koi khawaab nahi wo to ek haqiqat hai, kuch bhoole bisre sawalo ki tarah hai, kabhi pagla sa to kabhi bahut sayana sa, dosti ke haseen khayalo ki tarah hai, uljhane kabhi usko uljha naa payi hai, suljha hua aisa ke misalo ki tarah hai, bahut masoom sa nek dil insaan hai wo, baki jahan shatranj ki chalo ki tarah hai,  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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hi Lamha... kaisi ho dear?? vaise likha to bahut accha hai.....as usual!!  but............................................... .......mera number kab aayega????  hahaha.......  keep it up dear!!  shaan, seekho lamha se kuch....  .chalo ab uske liye bhi tum return me.n ek baDiya si poem likho jaldi se...!!!  khush raho Lamha.. god bless you tumhari dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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You know wat................. I've met a lot of people on net, but no one like you
You have made me feel like a better person, able to take on the world and I'am grateful to watever we brought together. You have made me rich by giving me your friendship, thanks for bringing happiness to a full of woe and for all the wonderful things you do. I found a true friend, when i found you, I'm really grateful to have a friend like you Lamha...... now, watever i m going to writing........ is for you, i hope you will like This in not just for you........ m writing this...... to both of my sweethearts Naazu & Lamha i hope you both duffer will like my words *********************** I have a warm and friendly feelings for you (Naaz & LAMHA), as i think of you today, and i wish that we could meet, But you are many miles away, Seperated by a long distance between us, Yet your letters bring you near, through miles we are sharing our friendship that's become to me most dear, we are friends through correspondence only, still your face i need not see, for your soul shines through the pages every time you write to me Your special way of writing to all of us! In SDC forum, warming as the sunshine rays, brings joy and inspiration for us and brightens up our days. You have enriched my life my dear friend And i hope God wills we meet, we will surey meet one day, the day will come Shanendra will meet you, Thank you very much for wririting everything on SDC We all (SDC friends) are here for you ************** Love Shan Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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Quick response is very appriciated from my side... khush raho.. god bless you tumhari dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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n bhai ne b kitta accha likha hai ye bhai aisa hi mere liye b kuch likho dr............................ lamha di.....its really nice ..keep writng Dont hurt the love which loves." 
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jo maine reply kiya hai woh nai padh kya......... ! Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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.......... pehle kuch acha sa sweet sa karke to dikhaoooooo............ Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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kaisa sweet karke dikhaaoon..... jo sweet hote hain unhe sweet karna nahi aata na dr..........lol Dont hurt the love which loves."
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23rd May 2009, 05:27 PM
Lamha Dear............
What a sweet and nice thougts really so touchi now I am jellus about Shaan well bahut hi khubsoorat aur sachche ahsaas lage aur use tumne explain bhi bahut hi achchi tarha kiya hai.... Yunhi likhate raho.............. Aur apne ahsaason ka dayara badhate raho Duaon ke sath daad kabool karo... Shaan Bhai teri to nikal padi............ And bhai plz don't make a chater box on each thread..... I am really shoked what you are doing.... 
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tumhe mera likha hua itna bura laga ki shakl bana rahe ho dear... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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thank u soooooooooooooo much RITU....maine jab bhi kuch bhi likha hai aapko apne saath paya hai...u r a true friend...insha allah aapka number bhi bahut jald aayega...  ....bas yuhi apna saath hamesha banaye rakhna.......take care dear...."LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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shaaaaaaaaaaaaan.....ye tumne kya kiya??  ....ye sab kya likh diya??....muje to achcha nahi laga.........kyon ki...muje bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut zayada achcha laga.. ...its just awesome sweetheart.....tarif ke liye shabd nahi mere pass.....thank u soooooooooooooooooooooo much dear......i m glad u r my friend....yuhi saath rehna hamesha...."LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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tumhari is koshish ne to mera dil chhu liya......mera pyaara dost kuch likhe aur muje achcha naa lage ,aisa ho sakta hai bhala? ....thank u sooooooooo much SHAAN...."LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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thank u sooooooo much TURFA.....meri is koshish ko padhne ka shukriya.......... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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hiiiiiiiii SAMEER, meri is koshish ko padhkar aapko SHAAN se jalan hone lagi,is baat se ye saaf zahir hai ki meri ye koshish kaamiyaab rahi...hai na? ...thank u soooooooooooooooooo much SAMEER....tumne mere ehsaas padhe aur pasand kiye uske liye tumhara shukriya dear.....yuhi apna saath banaye rakhna....."LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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24th May 2009, 01:51 PM
Damn.... a Ghazal for a moron....hahaha
(This was my first reaction when i saw this thread )Bubble gum....hahaha thatz the best i've heard chabao chabao chabao... phir thoook do.... (nice comparison dude, never saw someone comparing so aptly to oneself) and therz much faltoo stuff upthere... cant even bother to read... |
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25th May 2009, 11:48 AM
simply superb !!
lamha, ehesaas bahot hee acchhe lage yunhi likhti raho.. Purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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Lamha tumne Shaan k baare meiN ekdum sahi likha hai, aur bht hi khoobsurti se tumne us duffr ko ghazal meiN sketch kia hai lekin Shaan ki bht si baateiN haiN jo itne kam alfaaz meiN nhi kaha ja sakta........he's gem of a frnd jo apne frnds k udaasi meiN udaas hota hai aur khushi meiN humse zada khush hota hai, he's like a shadow jo hamesha apne frnds k achche bure meiN unka saath deta hai aur kabhi mood kharab ho to thik karne ki koshish bhi karta hai
agar nhi kar paata to rooth jaane ki dhamki bhi deta hai ise gussa bht jaldi aata hai lekin jaldi maan bhi jaata hai........he is a sweetheart with a very vulnerable heart........sweetie m sorry i've hurt u these days & i no tum mujhse naraaz ho, hope u'll undrstnd my problm n forgive me |
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Lamha Ji.. Aapne Bohat Pyaara Likha... Bakhubi Varnan Hai..
Aur Akhri Lines.. Mashaallah 
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