Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard
Reload this Page Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar
Old
  (#1)
finalyiamback
Registered User
finalyiamback is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 18
Join Date: Mar 2007
Rep Power: 0
Thumbs up Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar - 28th October 2007, 07:04 PM
Mausam yeh dard ke ghuzar jaye to achcha hai
Har aarzoo seene mei hi mar jaye to achcha hai

Saqi ki dua hai, yeh jaam rahe khali,
Ashqon se paimana yeh bhar jaye to achcha hai

Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar,
Dhund yeh Khamoshi ki utar jaye to achcha hai

Gham ki jagah abhi kuch aur baki hai dil mei,
Sitam tu bhi kuch aur jaye to achcha hai

Ek bojh tamannao ka utahye jee raha hun "Sartaj"
Dil se yeh bojh utar jaye to achcha hai
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
Mohammad Kashif
DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
Mohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant futureMohammad Kashif has a brilliant future
 
Mohammad Kashif's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,187
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: MORADABAD (U.P.)
Rep Power: 37
Thumbs up 28th October 2007, 09:57 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by finalyiamback View Post
Mausam yeh dard ke ghuzar jaye to achcha hai
Har aarzoo seene mei hi mar jaye to achcha hai

Saqi ki dua hai, yeh jaam rahe khali,
Ashqon se paimana yeh bhar jaye to achcha hai

Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar,
Dhund yeh Khamoshi ki utar jaye to achcha hai

Gham ki jagah abhi kuch aur baki hai dil mei,
Sitam tu bhi kuch aur jaye to achcha hai

Ek bojh tamannao ka utahye jee raha hun "Sartaj"
Dil se yeh bojh utar jaye to achcha hai
SALAAM SARTAJ SAHAB Aaj ek baar phir apke kalaam se rubaru huey aur bahut umda raha yeh bhi kalaam ese hi apne khubsoorat khayalo se mehfil men chaar chaand lagatey rahiye

"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
  Send a message via Yahoo to Mohammad Kashif  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
finalyiamback
Registered User
finalyiamback is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 18
Join Date: Mar 2007
Rep Power: 0
4th November 2007, 03:36 PM
Tareef ka shukriya Kashif Sahab

Inshallah aage bhi aise hi kallam se nawazte rahenge, bas aap ki daad ki zarurat hai

khuda Hafiz
   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#4)
acharya_mj
Zakhm-e-Rooh
acharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud of
 
acharya_mj's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 2,220
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: ahmedabad
Rep Power: 34
hi - 4th November 2007, 05:06 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by finalyiamback View Post
Mausam yeh dard ke ghuzar jaye to achcha hai
Har aarzoo seene mei hi mar jaye to achcha hai

Saqi ki dua hai, yeh jaam rahe khali,
Ashqon se paimana yeh bhar jaye to achcha hai

Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar,
Dhund yeh Khamoshi ki utar jaye to achcha hai

Gham ki jagah abhi kuch aur baki hai dil mei,
Sitam tu bhi kuch aur jaye to achcha hai

Ek bojh tamannao ka utahye jee raha hun "Sartaj"
Dil se yeh bojh utar jaye to achcha hai
phir se ek baar satraj ji aap ke is kalaam ne dil ko chho liyaa, ek mukammal aur dil fareb kaavish par dil se mubarakbad kabool kare aur yunhi likhate rahe.

regards
manu
  Send a message via Yahoo to acharya_mj  
Reply With Quote
fab..
Old
  (#5)
nanhi pari
Registered User
nanhi pari is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 33
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: banglore
Rep Power: 0
fab.. - 4th November 2007, 05:08 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by finalyiamback View Post
Mausam yeh dard ke ghuzar jaye to achcha hai
Har aarzoo seene mei hi mar jaye to achcha hai

Saqi ki dua hai, yeh jaam rahe khali,
Ashqon se paimana yeh bhar jaye to achcha hai

Karte hai mujh se gila khamosh se yeh manzar,
Dhund yeh Khamoshi ki utar jaye to achcha hai

Gham ki jagah abhi kuch aur baki hai dil mei,
Sitam tu bhi kuch aur jaye to achcha hai

Ek bojh tamannao ka utahye jee raha hun "Sartaj"
Dil se yeh bojh utar jaye to achcha hai

fantastic poem..kp it up..tc

n@nh1p@r1
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
finalyiamback
Registered User
finalyiamback is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 18
Join Date: Mar 2007
Rep Power: 0
7th November 2007, 07:41 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by acharya_mj View Post
phir se ek baar satraj ji aap ke is kalaam ne dil ko chho liyaa, ek mukammal aur dil fareb kaavish par dil se mubarakbad kabool kare aur yunhi likhate rahe.

regards
manu

Salam qubul kijiye Acharya Ji,

Ek baar phir aap ki daad ne kalam utahne ka josh aur tez kar diya Inshallah bahut jald phir haazir hona hai aap ke saamne
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
finalyiamback
Registered User
finalyiamback is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 18
Join Date: Mar 2007
Rep Power: 0
12th November 2007, 09:06 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by nanhi pari View Post
fantastic poem..kp it up..tc

Nanhi PAri Ji ka tahe Dil se shukriya
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
finalyiamback
Registered User
finalyiamback is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 18
Join Date: Mar 2007
Rep Power: 0
13th June 2009, 03:56 PM
salam arz hai
qubool kijiye
age b Inshallah aise hi nwaznge
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
kwahish
An Incomplite Dream
kwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud of
 
kwahish's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
13th June 2009, 04:24 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by finalyiamback View Post
salam arz hai
qubool kijiye
age b Inshallah aise hi nwaznge
Walekum as salam
Hume intezar rahenga...
Aapki umda shayari ka..
  Send a message via Yahoo to kwahish  
Reply With Quote
Reply

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Linear Mode Linear Mode
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
ghazal - tujhe yaad karte karte kahiN shaam dhal na jaaye ! kshitiz Shayri-e-Dard 41 28th July 2012 11:00 PM
ghazal - mujh se milna tera yuN mujh pe asar karta hai ... kshitiz Shayri-e-Dard 51 26th July 2009 02:52 AM
Agar Tum Mujh Se Waffa Karte! Priyamitra Shayri-e-Ishq 4 28th April 2004 10:04 PM
kya ishq mujh hi se karte ho? khadija Shayri-e-Ishq 5 22nd January 2004 09:52 PM
koun kehta hai hum tumse gila karte hai prince_anand_ak Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 0 8th November 2001 05:41 PM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com

Contact Us - www.shayri.com - Archive - Top