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Wo samaj na paye,Nazam ko meri -
18th December 2011, 12:40 AM
Btaa diya hotaa agar,
Dil ka hale byan ussko........ Too iss kadar shabdoo'n ko bun-na, Hume aaya na hotaa......... Ye alag baat hai,Ke Wo samaj na paye,Nazam ko meri......... Par itni sang-dili ki, Ussne kyon mujse........ Palke jhuka ke hi cha-he, Jane se pehle ye sub khud hi mujko btaya too hota......... Itne khud garaz bi nahi Hum Ke tuj ko Samaj na paye........ Tuje Cha-ha na hota, To teri Chahto'n ko dil se lagaya na hota......... Beshaq meri Nazam tujhe, Kuch bhari(heavy) shabad lagte hai........ Tu wfa karta agar,to iss nazam ko humne, Kabi na gaya hota........ Tu wfa karta agar,to iss nazam ko humne, Kabi na gaya hota........ Rab Rakha... ik sajda tainu milane da. ik khwaish tainu poon di, (Rohini Sharma) |
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21st December 2011, 03:58 PM
absolutely fantastic gazal ji..... nazm diaaN bandishaaN toN kujh door si.. par rooh de bahut kareeb si.... Looks u've started writing in difficult areas too... keep it up.....
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9th January 2012, 09:05 PM
vry nyc.........................hamari gazal :-)
 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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