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jeevan meraa - 31st December 2012, 09:59 AM
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namaste!

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31st December 2012, 10:37 AM
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thoda thoda ........... !
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welcome to the family.... aghaaz buhat umdah nazm say kiya haye aapnay! ummeed haye aap aagay bhi is bazm ki aysay he rounaq barhatee rahayngeen!

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Neetu Bala JI.....!

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aise hai
jeevan meraa

toot_ti huun
har din

thoda thoda ........... !
WaaH ! Kyaa Khoob Ehsaasaat Nazm Hue HaiN ... BehtareeN Neetu Ji !!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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jeevan meraa

toot_ti huun
har din

thoda thoda ........... !
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Happy new year....

Bohat hi simple per touching hai aapki nazm.....

Keep writing.......



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toot_ti huun
har din

thoda thoda

Neetu ji aap ka shayri k is manch par swagat hai.
aap ne apne bhitar ka dard vyaN karne ki ek kamyaab koshish ki hai,bahut sundar likha hai aap ne umid hai aap ko aur bhi padne ka hum sub ko moka milega.
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Aadab Neetu Ji,

Welcome to the family... Bohot hi umda peshkash aapke agle taraane ka intezar rahega...

Duaon k saath Ijazat...

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har din

thoda thoda ........... !
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khaRi huun
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lahar takraati hai
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aise hai
jeevan meraa

toot_ti huun
har din

thoda thoda

Neetu ji aap ka shayri k is manch par swagat hai.
aap ne apne bhitar ka dard vyaN karne ki ek kamyaab koshish ki hai,bahut sundar likha hai aap ne umid hai aap ko aur bhi padne ka hum sub ko moka milega.
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