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Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai - 5th February 2015, 05:01 PM
MohabbatoN ki kahaniyaN, wo baankpan wo jawaniyaN
SaheliyoN ki toliyaaN, wo koyaloN ki boliyaaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Bin baat ke yuN rooThna, aur sabab mujh se poochhna
Wo shokhiyaN wo talkhiyaN, wo khoobsurat ghalatiyaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Sab jaankar bhi na samajhna, baarikiyoN meiN ulajhna
Haya se laboN ka kaanpna, khiDki se aksar jhaankna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Wo gaisuoN ko sanwaarna, mujhe baar-ha pukaarna
Bulaane pe phir sochna, kabhi haath pakad ke rokna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Titli ke peechhe dauDna, mujhe dekh naqaab oDhna
Wo dabi zubaaN meiN bolna, ghabra ke kuchh tatolna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Wo bandisheiN-o-riwayateiN, DushwaariyaN, rukaawateiN,
Wo shikwe aur shikayateiN, sab heelay aur hikayateiN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

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6th February 2015, 10:57 AM
waahhh Sagar saahab........... kya likh diyaa uffffff

madhoshiyaan raanaaiyaan, deewaangee aawaargee.... kyaa kyaa na nazar aa gayaa aapki is nazm me...... dil baag baag ho uthaa hai janaab... aur dil se hazaaron daad aur duaaen nikal rahii hain aapki is haseen peshkash par..... nacheez ki daad qubool kijiyegaa..... likhte rahiyegaa......

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6th February 2015, 11:09 AM
waaaaah .. kia kehny .. Sagar Aashna saahab..

bohat khoob..

daad hii daad ..

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waahhh Sagar saahab........... kya likh diyaa uffffff

madhoshiyaan raanaaiyaan, deewaangee aawaargee.... kyaa kyaa na nazar aa gayaa aapki is nazm me...... dil baag baag ho uthaa hai janaab... aur dil se hazaaron daad aur duaaen nikal rahii hain aapki is haseen peshkash par..... nacheez ki daad qubool kijiyegaa..... likhte rahiyegaa......

Shaad....
Shaad bhai, adaab !
Nawazish keliye tah-e-dil se shukriya jenab.
Aapki suhbat ka asar hai jo bhi Thoda bahot likh rahe haiN. Aur aap tehseen se nawazte haiN toh yaqeenan hausla baDhta hai.

saath banaye rakhiyegaa.

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waaaaah .. kia kehny .. Sagar Aashna saahab..

bohat khoob..

daad hii daad ..
Hassan Saahab, Adaab-o-tasleemat !
Aapne apne qeemti waqt se kuchh lamhaat mere liye sarf kiye uskeliye maiN mashkoor-o-mamnoon rahuNgaa.

Aap jaise sho'ra se jab aise ilfaaz milte haiN to sach maaniye bohot masarrat hoti hai.

Aainda keliye bhi saaTh ka talabgaar rahuNgaa.

DuaoN ke saaTh,
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6th February 2015, 04:36 PM
ahchi nazm hui hai saagar saahib, bas dua rahegi ki aage bhi aapke kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheN....


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ahchi nazm hui hai saagar saahib, bas dua rahegi ki aage bhi aapke kalam se aur umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheN....
Shukriya Taish saahab.
Aapki duayeiN saath rahein to koshish jaari rahegii kuchh aur achha likhne ki.
Saath dete rahiyega, hausla baDhate rahiyega.

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9th February 2015, 08:31 PM
Waah...kya kahne sagar ji...bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaason se saji.nazm.....
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Bahot bahot shukriya Madhu ji aapki iss daryadili keliye.

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Lajawaab sagar bhai....khush rahain...Raj

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Lajawaab sagar bhai....khush rahain...Raj
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SaheliyoN ki toliyaaN, wo koyaloN ki boliyaaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Bin baat ke yuN rooThna, aur sabab mujh se poochhna
Wo shokhiyaN wo talkhiyaN, wo khoobsurat ghalatiyaN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Sab jaankar bhi na samajhna, baarikiyoN meiN ulajhna
Haya se laboN ka kaanpna, khiDki se aksar jhaankna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Wo gaisuoN ko sanwaarna, mujhe baar-ha pukaarna
Bulaane pe phir sochna, kabhi haath pakad ke rokna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Titli ke peechhe dauDna, mujhe dekh naqaab oDhna
Wo dabi zubaaN meiN bolna, ghabra ke kuchh tatolna
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai

Wo bandisheiN-o-riwayateiN, DushwaariyaN, rukaawateiN,
Wo shikwe aur shikayateiN, sab heelay aur hikayateiN
Teri yaadoN ka kaarwaN mere saath chal raha hai
Bahut khoob janaab behad lutf aaya bhai aapki yeh nazm ek haseen khwaab ki tarah band aankhon se halki muskurhatein deti chali gayi...yunhi mehfil lootiYeGaa hamesha


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20th February 2015, 09:21 PM
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Apke karvan ke saath chalte chalte humne aap ke sare ehsaason ko dheere dheere
mehsoos kiya , aur dil se bus yehi NIkla ...

Yeh dil ye pagal dil mera kyun bujh gaya Awaargee.

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bohat khoob bht ache ahsasaat hain

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Jagdish bhai ,

Apke karvan ke saath chalte chalte humne aap ke sare ehsaason ko dheere dheere
mehsoos kiya , aur dil se bus yehi NIkla ...

Yeh dil ye pagal dil mera kyun bujh gaya Awaargee.

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Bohot bohot Shukriyaa
Yunhi hausla afzaayii karte rahiyega.
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