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A Passing Stranger
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Wo le saath Shams o Qamar Jaa rahe hain! -
27th August 2011, 08:05 PM
Wo idhar jaa rahe hain, udhar jaa rahe hain,
Koi bhi na jaane, kidhar jaa rahe hain!
Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!
Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!
Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!
Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!
Wo zamanay ke dil pe qahar dhaa rahe hain
Ajnabi ko banaa humsafar jaa rahe hain!
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
Ajnabi
Last edited by Ajnabi; 27th August 2011 at 08:15 PM..
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~"REBELLIOUS IN LOVE"~
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28th August 2011, 06:04 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ajnabi
Wo idhar jaa rahe hain, udhar jaa rahe hain,
Koi bhi na jaane, kidhar jaa rahe hain!
Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!
Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!
Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!
Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!
Wo zamanay ke dil pe qahar dhaa rahe hain
Ajnabi ko banaa humsafar jaa rahe hain!
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hello AJANBI ji
achcha laga ye padh kar...asardaar rahi ye peshkash
daad qabul farmayen janab
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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A Passing Stranger
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28th August 2011, 06:26 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
hello AJANBI ji
achcha laga ye padh kar...asardaar rahi ye peshkash
daad qabul farmayen janab
Regards
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Hi PRANEETA G,
Thank You for vsiting, reading and posting ur daad! Daad deposited in IDBI(IndianDaadBankOfIndia)!
ThankYou
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
Ajnabi
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'Bismil'
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7th September 2011, 07:32 PM
Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!
wahh..wahh..doosre misre ko do tarah padha ja sakta hai..bahot ache..
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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A Passing Stranger
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7th September 2011, 08:54 PM
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Originally Posted by Pradhyuman
Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!
wahh..wahh..doosre misre ko do tarah padha ja sakta hai..bahot ache..
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Sir G aapki daad sar aankhon pr(o v bina chashma lgaye)
Thank You very very much G!
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
Ajnabi
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to feel & to be felt...
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12th September 2011, 11:44 PM
That's an Ouchh!! one...Touched the feelings and touched the heart. Thanks for sharing and keep your magic thoughts up.
take good care..
Pallavi...
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Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you...
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13th September 2011, 12:25 PM
ajnabi jii...bahut khoobsurat ahsaas...har ahsaas se romaniyat chalak rhi hai...accha laga padkar...dil se daad hazir hai.
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Originally Posted by Ajnabi
Wo idhar jaa rahe hain, udhar jaa rahe hain,
Koi bhi na jaane, kidhar jaa rahe hain!
Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!
Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!
Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!
Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!
Wo zamanay ke dil pe qahar dhaa rahe hain
Ajnabi ko banaa humsafar jaa rahe hain!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2011, 11:12 AM
hasa nice ring and feel to it.... simple is powerful... keep writing...
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Aapki dost
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26th September 2011, 03:11 PM
Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!
Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!
Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!
Bohat khoob...!!!..............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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