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~*~i$hq~*~ -
17th December 2007, 02:41 PM
......i$hq.......
Ajab mere i$hq ka haaL hai pr ajj diL main aik maLaaL hai ye kese khushbo hai mere char soo shayad bister pe teraa romaaL hai apni qismat pe yaqin ha Lakin teri aik "HaaN" ka bhi sawaL hai tum tanha chor gae ho mujhko aur diL main ab bhi tera khayaL hai yaqin nahin tu thek hai.... Lakin! manLo mera i$hq LazawaL hai |
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17th December 2007, 08:52 PM
uski muskar hamari kamjori hai,
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hi "Tapan" -
18th December 2007, 09:59 PM
hi tapan...
 nice stanza. take care |
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app neha khan vahi hona jo mho me bahut mail karte ho AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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19th December 2007, 11:43 AM
hi "dineshdharvi"
"app neha khan vahi hona jo mho me bahut mail karte ho" ye line jo apne mere liyee likhi hai .... mere kuch samjh nahin ai  main kismain buhat mail karte hon? what is "mho" ? any ways....  apne mere poetry parhi so reply me that do u like it or not? but dont ask ques like this..... b/c is duniya main,is site par buhat sari NEHA KHAN hain apkis ki baat kar rahe hain? i dont know!  plz reply me in pm or in this thread. Waiting.....  bye |
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~*Asalam-u-alekum... -
19th December 2007, 11:49 AM
asalam kashif ji....
thanks that u came 2 my this another post 2 n comments here... i m happy 2 see u here. kiyonke apki tareef bhi sachi lagti hai aur yaqenan tanqeed bhi achi lage gi. thank u very much. i will try my best more... |
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I AM SORRY NEHA JI. HAAN APNE SAHI KAHA NEHA KHAN KE NAAM KI LADKIYA BAHUT HAI DUNIYA ME PER ME JO KEH RAHA THA USKA NAAM BHI NEHA KHAN HAI AUR VO BHI APKI TARAF SHAYRI HI LIKH KAR BHEJTI HAI TO MUJE LAGA KE SAYAD APP HO ISI LIYE MENE PUCHA APKO. AUR MHO EK GRUP HAI JISME HAI HUMARI TARAH SAYARI HI BHEJTE HAI . ME APKE BAARE ME GALAT SAMJA AGAR MAAF KAR SAKO TO PLS MAAF KAR DENA. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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19th December 2007, 08:03 PM
UTRA THA CHAND HUMARE ANGAN ME,
PAR SITARON KO GAWARA NA THA, HUM TOH SITRON SE BHE BAGAWAT KAR LATE, PAR KIYA KARE WO CHAND HE HUMARA NA THA. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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4 "dineshdharvi" -
21st December 2007, 12:30 AM
hi dineshdharvi...
1 tu apka naam buhat mushkil hai... spelling yaad karni pari ha muje...  any ways.... "sorry" main apse karna chahti hon ke ap ne mere pata nahin konsi baat ko kia samjh kar itni sorry karleen "I AM SORRY NEHA JI. HAAN APNE SAHI KAHA NEHA KHAN KE NAAM KI LADKIYA BAHUT HAI DUNIYA ME PER ME JO KEH RAHA THA USKA NAAM BHI NEHA KHAN HAI AUR VO BHI APKI TARAF SHAYRI HI LIKH KAR BHEJTI HAI TO MUJE LAGA KE SAYAD APP HO ISI LIYE MENE PUCHA APKO. AUR MHO EK GRUP HAI JISME HAI HUMARI TARAH SAYARI HI BHEJTE HAI . ME APKE BAARE ME GALAT SAMJA AGAR MAAF KAR SAKO TO PLS MAAF KAR DENA" itni mafi ki koi zarorat nahin bus main ne tu ye pocha tha ke konsi "neha khan" aur kon "mho" apne ans de dia thanks... sorry apko kuch bura laga tu "any ways.... apne mere poetry parhi so reply me that do u like it or not? but dont ask ques like this..... "yee baat main ne "JO UPAR LIKHI HAI" isly likhi thi ke app jub bhi muje post reply karte han tu ashaar hi ashaar likhte han isly main ne likha tha ke ap comments dia karen. aur main sirf 1 isi site par hoti hon aur koi site muje pata nahin poetry ki ? pata hoti tu uspar shayd hoti again sorry if u hurted!!! |
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21st December 2007, 12:43 AM
Neha jee :
aadaab-o-taSleemaat Shaayad maiN aaj aapko pehli baar paRh rahaa huuN.. aapne be-had Khuubsoorat aNdaaz ke saath kavviSh ko peSh kiYaa hai.. aSh'aar to dil-fareb raheN.. merii taraf sey DheroN saarii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl farmaaYeN.. YuuNhi bazm kii raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiYe..! apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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21st December 2007, 12:51 AM
Adab DhavaL ji...
app bhi khush raheen hamesha hamesha. ji aj ap ne pehli bar apne nadir khayalat ka izhar meri post par kia hai aur muje behad khushi hoi hai ke main iski mustehaq theri hon. koshish karongi ainda bhi apki tareef ke qabil huroof tarash sakoon. buhat nawazish. apna behad khayal rakhiyee ga. |
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21st December 2007, 11:45 AM
APKO KOI GALATI NAHI HAI NEHA JI MENE HI APKO AISA ULTA SAWAL KAR LIYA THA BALKE MUJE AISA SAWAL KARNE KA KOI HAK BHI NAHI HAI FIR MENE KAR DIYA ISI LIYE MUJE APKO SORRY KEHNA CHAHIYE.
AUR MERA NAAM SIRF DINESH HAI DHARVI MERI SURNAME HAI. AUR MUJE APKI BAAT KOI BURA BHI NAHI LAGA HAI MUJE BAHUT ACHA LAGA KE APP MERI GALATI KO SAMNE LAAYE. AUR AAGE SE KABHI APKO AISA KOI SAWAL NAHI KARUGA Quote:
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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WeLL...! -
2nd January 2008, 01:35 PM
hi
DINESH hope u r fine weLL u r so sensitive...i think so any ways u take care bye |
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2nd January 2008, 01:42 PM
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how are you? n happy new year AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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2nd January 2008, 01:45 PM
hi thanks 4 reply
"Happy New Year" u to |
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2nd January 2008, 01:48 PM
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app bahut acha likhte ho ishq ke baare me app aur bhi acha likho AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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2nd January 2008, 01:52 PM
Ishq ne insaan ko kya diya,
Kavi kise katil bana diya, Do phool ka bojh na utha sakti thee Mumtaaz, Aur Shahjahan ne usspe Tajmahel bana diya. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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hi Dinesh... |
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hi Dinesh... -
2nd January 2008, 04:45 PM
hi dinesh.... buhat khubsorat stanza likha hai ap ne "i$hq" par. heran mat hoon ap main neha hi hoon. actually meri "neha faran" ki id kuch prob kar rahi thi thats y i changed it.....i mean i will not use that....this is my new id. Love Neha hope u dont mind n u aLL of accept it too. $...!
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2nd January 2008, 07:50 PM
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Mushkil nahi hai ishq lagana,Usse bhi aasan hai uska pyaar pana, Phir bhi darte hai hum pyaar se,Kyonki sab se mushkil hai usko bhual pana. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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18th January 2008, 09:48 PM
wao kiya baat likhi hai apne ishq ke bare main. good thinking. "Mushkil nahi hai ishq lagana,Usse bhi aasan hai uska pyaar pana, Phir bhi darte hai hum pyaar se,Kyonki sab se mushkil hai usko bhual pana." bye dinesh. $...!
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kese ho app sayad bahut kam aate yaha per Dil ki galiyon mein kisi ko koi gam naho, Hamari yeh dosti kabhi kam na ho, Bas yahi hai dua humari ki app khush raho, Kya pata “kal hum na ho ” AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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23rd January 2008, 04:01 PM
ur welcome dinesh ji
main thek hoon ap kese hain? sahi andaza lagaya ap ne main buhat kam nline hoti hon.lakin jub bhi ati hoon post reply zaror karti hon. take care bye $...!
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23rd January 2008, 04:16 PM
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haan dekhta hu apke sab reply Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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hi -
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dinesh ap jo bhi ashaar likhte hain i think "some thing wrong" ap thek tu hain na? khush raha kijiyee aur subko apni taraf se koi takleef bhi mat hone dijiyee u will be happy. take care of ur life bye $...!
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28th January 2008, 10:05 PM
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dosti mein kuch to sunana padta hai,Gam chhupakar bhi muskurana padta hai,Kabhi hum bhi dost the unke,Aajkal to unko bhi yaad dilana padta hai. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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ji dinesh ji... good u r ok main ne "some thing wrong" isly likha tha ke apke ashaar parh kar lagta hai ke ye kisi "khas" person ke liyee hain ok matlab kahin koi dukh tu nahin apko? app bilkul sahi likh rahe hain bhae....har dafa 1 dard main dobi tehreer milti hai muje. GOD bless u take care $...!
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Woh Kuch Sunti -
30th January 2008, 04:19 PM
Woh Kuch Sunti To Mai Kuch Kehta Mujy Kuch or Kehna Tha Woh Pal Bhr Ko Ruk Jati Tu Mai Kuch or Kehna Tha Ghalt Fehmi Ny Baton Ko Brha Dia Yunhi Warna Kha Kuch Tha Woh Kuch Samjhi Mujy Kuch Or Kehna Tha |
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30th January 2008, 04:25 PM
Salam Neha Jee Can u Share poetry with me I am waiting ur reply soon
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i dont understand kese share karoon matlab agar yee poetry apko chahiyee tu app ise yahan se copy karleen matlab kisi paper main utar leen lakin mere naam ke sath dont use it by ur name...okz? dont mind haan.....b/c jo cheez meri hai bus usko main sirf apna dekhna chahti hoon. hope u dont mind.haan apko ye achi lagi hai tu u can give it to any 1 else but remember my name wese app kehna kiya chahti theen zara muje phir se samjhaiyeega....ok na take care n thanks 4 liked it bye dear$...!
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3rd February 2008, 07:41 PM
well nice written by u.
arz hai Dil ko agar hota manan asaan, na karta u kisi ko pareshan, tanhai na rehta bhari mehfil main, na hoti owh halat jo ho na bayan? Yeh tab he hoti hai, Jab ishq had se bar jaye Am I Right Na! Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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4th February 2008, 07:30 AM
hi....kaise hain aap?
aapko pehli bar pad raha hun apr pad-kar bahut khushi hui. acha likte hain aap, dil k ehsaason ko bahut hi umda andaaz mein pesh kiya hai aapne. yuhin likte rahein aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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4th February 2008, 02:21 PM
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kis se pocha hai apne? plz mention kardia kareen ab kiya karoon agar mujse nahin pocha tu reply kese karoon. $...!
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4th February 2008, 02:27 PM
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hi manish thanks 4 ur reply i think apko ye batane ki zarorat tu nahin hai na ke "Neha faran" aur "Love neha" 2no mere hi ids hain "id neha faran" main kuch prob hogae thi tu isly use closed karna para. ye detaiL isly di ke kiya pata ke ap mere reply par bura man jate aur kehte ke neha faran ki ghazal pasand ai thi...love neha se ans kiyon aya thanks ka....okz? koshish karongi ke acha likhon apke replies ka intezar rahega.take care. $...!
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5th February 2008, 11:31 AM
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Assalam Alaikum maine socha tha ke aap ki favourite line itni achi hai to zarur aap ki apni gazal bhi achi hogi lekin . . . . . .. . ye nahi socha tha ke lajab hogi bahut pasand aayi mujhe kaash ke mai bhi aap ki taraha sayeri karpata aur ek bbat maine aapko message bheja tha jiska reply nahi aaya so pls chek it soon and reply. Allha Hafiz |
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5th February 2008, 10:44 PM
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walekum aslam itni ziada tarif ka shukria par plz koi ghalti ki ho tu wo bhi bataiyeega ap poetry karne ki koshish zaror karen...i will help u. lakin plz try. apka pm muje mila hai samjh nahin aya kia reply karoon isly nahin kia. take care. ALLAH hafiz $...!
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