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9th October 2010, 09:33 PM
dard tumko jamaane se kitna mila pata kya
jaanna hai sirf itna tumne unko diya kya
raat andhere sochte ho kitne aansu mil rahe
kisi ke muskaan ke baare me kabhi socha kya
ishk apna dard apna lekar bahoot ghum liye
iske alaawa bhi aur kuchh kabhi kahi dekha kya
wahi kahaani baar baar suna ke thake nahin
har najar me ek kahaani ko najarandaaj kiya kya
kuchh aur mat maang aiye insaan jeene ke liye
jo mila hai ab tak use hi sambhaal paaya kya
bharosa kar khoodi par haar nahi hogi kabhi
bharose se bada jameen par aur rakha kya
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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9th October 2010, 09:52 PM
Quote:
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dard tumko jamaane se kitna mila pata kya
jaanna hai sirf itna tumne unko diya kya
raat andhere sochte ho kitne aansu mil rahe
kisi ke muskaan ke baare me kabhi socha kya
ishk apna dard apna lekar bahoot ghum liye
iske alaawa bhi aur kuchh kabhi kahi dekha kya
wahi kahaani baar baar suna ke thake nahin
har najar me ek kahaani ko najarandaaj kiya kya
kuchh aur mat maang aiye insaan jeene ke liye
jo mila hai ab tak use hi sambhaal paaya kya
bharosa kar khoodi par haar nahi hogi kabhi
bharose se bada jameen par aur rakha kya
Very nice, JuDwaa Ji...!
My favourite is the last sher...!
Keep coming with such creations...!
Apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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9th October 2010, 10:46 PM
Bahut Khoob ... Garima Ji ! sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas mujhe behad pasand aaye... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhti rahen aur aati rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ......
Mushkil Sahab ki tarha ... mujhe bhi aapka aakhiri sher bahut pasand aaya ... ! ....
bharosa kar khoodi par haar nahi hogi kabhi
bharose se bada jameen par aur rakha kya
Very Nice Creation .... !
apna theek se khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath .....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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10th October 2010, 01:46 AM
Hello Garima jee.
You write from your heart.
Keep writing. Always.
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10th October 2010, 12:48 PM
Quote:
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dard tumko jamaane se kitna mila pata kya
jaanna hai sirf itna tumne unko diya kya
raat andhere sochte ho kitne aansu mil rahe
kisi ke muskaan ke baare me kabhi socha kya
ishk apna dard apna lekar bahoot ghum liye
iske alaawa bhi aur kuchh kabhi kahi dekha kya
wahi kahaani baar baar suna ke thake nahin
har najar me ek kahaani ko najarandaaj kiya kya
kuchh aur mat maang aiye insaan jeene ke liye
jo mila hai ab tak use hi sambhaal paaya kya
bharosa kar khoodi par haar nahi hogi kabhi
bharose se bada jameen par aur rakha kya
garima jee
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achha likhti ho
dil se daad kubul karen
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14th December 2010, 08:25 PM
aap sabhi ko mera tahedil se shukriya in adh paki lino ko saraahne ke liye
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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