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6th February 2006, 05:14 PM
aisa to nahi ki tere bin jee na paayenge ham
aisa bhi nahi ki bin tere mar jaayenge ham
neend na aayegi saari raat aisi baat nahi
gam jo tune diya, kaise so paayenge ham
teri ik yaad me jag bhoolaane ki baat nahi
lekin ek pal bhi tujhe bhula na paayenge ham
tu sang apane meri mushkuraahat le gaya
par pichhe tere ek ashk na bahaayenge ham
tanha reh gaye tere ik jaane se
baag-e-bahaar fir lagaayenge ham
zindagi hai har pal aage badh jaane ke liye
ek jhatake se yun toot na bikhar jaayenge ham
aisa na sochna ki haar hogi Garima ki
gulashan-e-mehfil fir se banaayenge ham
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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6th February 2006, 05:19 PM
aisa to nahi ki...............
meri priy garima,
jivan ka ek alag hi rang le kar tum aaj yaha aayi ho. achha laga muje. dard hai kavita mai ... kuch bikhra bhi nazar aaya hai par oos bikharne par aanshu bah kar baat ko baha nahi gaye hai... tumne waha se bhi ooth kar chalna hai...
aisa to nahi ki aap se chahat nahi
haan yah baat or hai ab aap paas nahi..
jivan hai.. jab tak saanse hai.. aapse chahat hai
haan yah baat or hai ab aap jaan paaoge nahi
humesha jivan ke sabhi rango ko samaj paao ... oonhe swikaar paao or oonse oobhar paao ... yahi aashirwaad
maa
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Re: aisa to nahi ki... -
6th February 2006, 07:34 PM
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Originally posted by garima
aisa to nahi ki tere bin jee na paayenge ham
aisa bhi nahi ki bin tere mar jaayenge ham
neend na aayegi saari raat aisi baat nahi
gam jo tune diya, kaise so paayenge ham
teri ik yaad me jag bhoolaane ki baat nahi
lekin ek pal bhi tujhe bhula na paayenge ham
tu sang apane meri mushkuraahat le gaya
par pichhe tere ek ashk na bahaayenge ham
tanha reh gaye tere ik jaane se
baag-e-bahaar fir lagaayenge ham
zindagi hai har pal aage badh jaane ke liye
ek jhatake se yun toot na bikhar jaayenge ham
aisa na sochna ki haar hogi Garima ki
gulashan-e-mehfil fir se banaayenge ham
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bahut accha likha hai
or waise bhi kisi ke chale jaane se zindagi khatam nahi hote
the life must go on
likhti raho
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
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6th February 2006, 11:37 PM
Gudiya,
Yun to phele padh chuka hoon ise... magar dobara padhkar bahut accha laga...yun hi likhti raho...apna khyal rakhna acche se
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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7th February 2006, 01:19 AM
Garima,
Bahut khoob likha...
Tumhe padkar humesha kuch seekhne ko aur sochne ko milta hai...
Yunhi likhti raha karo... aur apna khayal rakho..
Take Care
Big B
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7th February 2006, 07:32 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
aisa to nahi ki...............
meri priy garima,
jivan ka ek alag hi rang le kar tum aaj yaha aayi ho. achha laga muje. dard hai kavita mai ... kuch bikhra bhi nazar aaya hai par oos bikharne par aanshu bah kar baat ko baha nahi gaye hai... tumne waha se bhi ooth kar chalna hai...
aisa to nahi ki aap se chahat nahi
haan yah baat or hai ab aap paas nahi..
jivan hai.. jab tak saanse hai.. aapse chahat hai
haan yah baat or hai ab aap jaan paaoge nahi
humesha jivan ke sabhi rango ko samaj paao ... oonhe swikaar paao or oonse oobhar paao ... yahi aashirwaad
maa
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Shukriya maa
with love
laadli
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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Re: Re: aisa to nahi ki... -
7th February 2006, 07:33 PM
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Originally posted by kuhulika
bahut accha likha hai
or waise bhi kisi ke chale jaane se zindagi khatam nahi hote
the life must go on
likhti raho
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yups the life must go on in better way
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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7th February 2006, 07:37 PM
Garv,
Tumahri haar kabhi ho bhi nahin sakti.....tumhne tow abhi naye aayaam bhi jorney bhi hain.
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7th February 2006, 07:37 PM
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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Gudiya,
Yun to phele padh chuka hoon ise... magar dobara padhkar bahut accha laga...yun hi likhti raho...apna khyal rakhna acche se
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mujhako yaad hai bhaiya.. aur aapne kaha tha ki ye Garima ko suit nahi karta hehehehe...lekin aapko achha bhi laga tha..
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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7th February 2006, 07:38 PM
Garima Ji...!
Bahout khoub...!
Eisse hi likha karo...Hamein bhi bahout kuch sikhne ko milta hai
aap ki likhaai ko paDhkar...!
Apna khayaal rakhna...thik hai ?
JuDwa
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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7th February 2006, 07:45 PM
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Originally posted by Rohin
Garima,
Bahut khoob likha...
Tumhe padkar humesha kuch seekhne ko aur sochne ko milta hai...
Yunhi likhti raha karo... aur apna khayal rakho..
Take Care
Big B
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thanks bhaiya
with love
lallu
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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7th February 2006, 07:50 PM
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Garv,
Tumahri haar kabhi ho bhi nahin sakti.....tumhne tow abhi naye aayaam bhi jorney bhi hain.
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with love
Garv
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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7th February 2006, 07:52 PM
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Originally posted by Mushkil
Garima Ji...!
Bahout khoub...!
Eisse hi likha karo...Hamein bhi bahout kuch sikhne ko milta hai
aap ki likhaai ko paDhkar...!
Apna khayaal rakhna...thik hai ?
JuDwa
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thanks ...aap bhi apna achhe se khayaal rakhiyega
Judwa
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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7th February 2006, 09:48 PM
haan to sahi me... Ek dam se tumne bilkul hi different likh diyaa... but likha to bahut accha hai
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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7th February 2006, 10:07 PM
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haan to sahi me... Ek dam se tumne bilkul hi different likh diyaa... but likha to bahut accha hai
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kabhi kabhi different hona chahiye.. theek kaha na bhaiya
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7th February 2006, 10:41 PM
Hello Garima ..
tu sang apane meri mushkuraahat le gaya
par pichhe tere ek ashk na bahaayenge ham
Wow! Kya baat kahi hai.. Padh kar behad khushi huyi..
MayanK
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8th February 2006, 02:15 AM
Garima ji,
Bahut hi khubusrat likha hai aapne. yeh kalam bahut pasand aaya mujhe. likhte rahiyega. tc
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8th February 2006, 01:24 PM
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Hello Garima ..
tu sang apane meri mushkuraahat le gaya
par pichhe tere ek ashk na bahaayenge ham
Wow! Kya baat kahi hai.. Padh kar behad khushi huyi..
MayanK
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aap khush to mai bhi khush hehehe
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sundar -
8th February 2006, 03:19 PM
bahut bahut bahut sara aur achha likho ham hain parhne ke liye aur samjhne ke liye tumahree meethee meethee baten
Anil
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8th February 2006, 06:32 PM
HUM SATH SATH HAI VERY GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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9th February 2006, 03:03 PM
Garima
bohat or bohat acha laga tumari soch ko padkar. isi tareh liktey rena.
Kaanch
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9th February 2006, 05:44 PM
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Garima ji,
Bahut hi khubusrat likha hai aapne. yeh kalam bahut pasand aaya mujhe. likhte rahiyega. tc
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Thanks Devangi ji
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Re: sundar -
9th February 2006, 05:46 PM
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bahut bahut bahut sara aur achha likho ham hain parhne ke liye aur samjhne ke liye tumahree meethee meethee baten
Anil
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thanks
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9th February 2006, 05:51 PM
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HUM SATH SATH HAI VERY GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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9th February 2006, 05:52 PM
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Garima
bohat or bohat acha laga tumari soch ko padkar. isi tareh liktey rena.
Kaanch
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thanks u so much.. aaj to aapne meri kayi post padh li uhi padhate rahiye aur apne rachana bhi daaliye aapki rachnaaye bhi laajwaad hoti hai
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Re: aisa to nahi ki... -
17th February 2006, 11:15 AM
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aisa to nahi ki tere bin jee na paayenge ham
aisa bhi nahi ki bin tere mar jaayenge ham
neend na aayegi saari raat aisi baat nahi
gam jo tune diya, kaise so paayenge ham
teri ik yaad me jag bhoolaane ki baat nahi
lekin ek pal bhi tujhe bhula na paayenge ham
tu sang apane meri mushkuraahat le gaya
par pichhe tere ek ashk na bahaayenge ham
tanha reh gaye tere ik jaane se
baag-e-bahaar fir lagaayenge ham
zindagi hai har pal aage badh jaane ke liye
ek jhatake se yun toot na bikhar jaayenge ham
aisa na sochna ki haar hogi Garima ki
gulashan-e-mehfil fir se banaayenge ham
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Garima
isse meine 2 bar pada, bohat acha lika hei tumne, koi sani nehi, isi tareh likti reho ki hum sab padtey rehein.
Kaanch
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17th February 2006, 12:17 PM
Wah garimaji kya bat sunai he
bhai manna padega aapko,
dard he aapki bato me,
hu hashu chu , etle em na samjo hu shukhi chu
hu radi nathi sakto e vat nu mane dukh che hu dukhi chu
Bas Likhte rahi ye
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17th February 2006, 03:22 PM
Dear Garima,
aaj jo alfaj humne aapke dwara suna kya aapne kabhi un alfajo ko gahrai se socha ki usme kitni sacchai hai sirf sabdo adan pradan ho raha., Pyaar ka falsafa aaj tak kisi ko aa paya hai sirf baten hoti hai to feeling ke regard ki aur nothing eles .,
aap bahut accha likhti hai par aapke pyar me ek cheej pai hai .,
aap puchegi ki kya to pahele aap ye bataye ki aap pyar pana chahti hai ya pyaar mang rahi hai.,
yurs
winner of truth
satyendra
(winner of truth)
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