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kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon...... -
21st October 2009, 03:51 PM
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Rang badalti duniya mein kyu tumpe aitbaar karti hoon,
Itne chehron mein jaane kyu tumko dhundha karti hoon,
Jo baat labon se na kahi tumne kyu woh bhi sun leti hoon,
Har ek ishaare ko tere jaane kaise main samajh jaati hoon,
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Behati hawa ke badan ke choone se bhi main sharma jaati hoon,
Koi paigaam tune hai bheja yeh soch ke main ghabra jati hoon,
Inn madmast raaton mein kyu soyi si jaagi si main rehti hoon,
Tumse jude khwabon ko bhi haqiqat samajh ke main jeeti hoon,
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Ho jaye na tu ruswa tera naam lene mein bhi main sochti hoon,
Chura na le koi tujhko mujhse tujhe dil mein chupaye rakhti hoon,
Sangdil hoti hai mohabaat yeh soch ke main har baar rah jaati hoon,
Hota hai dard pyar ki manzil yeh soch ke sab dard main sah jaati hoon,
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
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21st October 2009, 07:54 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by muskaan76
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Rang badalti duniya mein kyu tumpe aitbaar karti hoon,
Itne chehron mein jaane kyu tumko dhundha karti hoon,
Jo baat labon se na kahi tumne kyu woh bhi sun leti hoon,
Har ek ishaare ko tere jaane kaise main samajh jaati hoon,
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Behati hawa ke badan ke choone se bhi main sharma jaati hoon,
Koi paigaam tune hai bheja yeh soch ke main ghabra jati hoon,
Inn madmast raaton mein kyu soyi si jaagi si main rehti hoon,
Tumse jude khwabon ko bhi haqiqat samajh ke main jeeti hoon,
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Ho jaye na tu ruswa tera naam lene mein bhi main sochti hoon,
Chura na le koi tujhko mujhse tujhe dil mein chupaye rakhti hoon,
Sangdil hoti hai mohabaat yeh soch ke main har baar rah jaati hoon,
Hota hai dard pyar ki manzil yeh soch ke sab dard main sah jaati hoon,
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
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Muskaan ji...aapki shabd rachna mai bahut komlta hai....khayal aur jazbaat ka sangam acha raha....aise hi likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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23rd October 2009, 02:26 AM
Naresh ji ne ekdum sahi baat kahi hai.....kewal itna aur kahoonga ki in sabhi shabdo se aapke ehssas aur kavita ka maqsad khub ubhar ke saamne aaya hai
Hamari bhi daad kabool farmaye
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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23rd October 2009, 02:37 PM
aap sabka hamari kavita pasand kerne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
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24th October 2009, 07:10 PM
Gum sum si baithi aksar main tumko socha karti hoon,
Tum ajnabi kaun ho kyu tumse main pyar karti hoon,
Rang badalti duniya mein kyu tumpe aitbaar karti hoon,
Itne chehron mein jaane kyu tumko dhundha karti hoon,
Jo baat labon se na kahi tumne kyu woh bhi sun leti hoon,
Har ek ishaare ko tere jaane kaise main samajh jaati hoon
Ehsaas acche lage muskaan ji......
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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24th October 2009, 07:25 PM
Ho jaye na tu ruswa tera naam lene mein bhi main sochti hoon,
Chura na le koi tujhko mujhse tujhe dil mein chupaye rakhti hoon,
Sangdil hoti hai mohabaat yeh soch ke main har baar rah jaati hoon,
Hota hai dard pyar ki manzil yeh soch ke sab dard main sah jaati hoon,
Muskaan Ji..... Adaab.
Aapke sabhi Ehsaas behad hi pasand aaye lekin
Khas taur par upar quote kiya kuch zyada hi pasand aaya
Bahot khub Bahot hi khub...
Dilse Daad Kabol Kijiyega
Aapka Dost, BaBa...
Zindagi Tujhse me kya chahta hoon, bus kat jaye ye chaar din itna hi to me chahta hoon...
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