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26th December 2015, 07:49 AM
Doston...
Shayad kabhi kabhi aap khud kuch nahi likhte, aisa lagta hai Ki koi aapse likhwa raha hai. Meri ye nazm bhi meri hokar meri nahi hai. Aapke saath share kar rahi Hoon.... NIRBHAYA. Bhool Gaye ho shayad mujhko, naam tha mera 'Jyoti' Kisi ke ghar ki rounak thi main shayad doctor hoti Sapne mere poore hote na durghatna hoti gar neta ya bade baap ki main bhi beti hoti Jeene ka kya haq tha mujhko? Bus se safar mein karti thi Aksar rupaye bachaane ko mai.n paidal bhi to chalti thi Ghar Ghar ka jab khel khelti, aksar dulhan banti thi maa banne ki iccha bhi to shayad mann mein palti thi -------- Raat wo kaali aayi jismen mera balaatkaar hua aankh khuli to dekha baahar kitna haahaakaar hua kitne neta, abhineta bhi mujhse milne aaye they iss 'Jyoti' ke liye wo sab kuch mombattiyaan bhi laaye the Utha nahi jaata tha mujhse phir bhi main muskaayi thi jeene ki aasha bhi man mein phir se jag si aayi thi Dard hua tha bohut mujhe jab akhiri li angdaayi thi Doctor banungi socha tha..nakaami hisse aayi thi baap bhaai ne bhaari mann se 'Dolli' meri uthaayi thi saari duniya ne mere hi naam ki kasmein khaayi thi ------- baccha keh kar court ne jab qatil ko mere cho.d diya Aas se bharaa jo dil tha mera uss ko sabne tod diya nahi nahi ye qaatil hai kehkar kitna chillayi thi sanvidhaan ko apne shaayad baat samajh nahi aayi thi Baccha jise kaha tha tumne ...mann mann muskaya tha thook ke meri photo par khud par kitnaa itraaya tha Suna hai mere aatm hannan ka inaam bhi usney paaya hai dus huzaar aur silaayi masheen!! lekar ghar ko aaya hai aaj sawaal hai ek hi mera kab nidra se jaagoge kya har maa aur har beti ko nirbhayaa banaa ke manoge? Nirbhayaa Banaa ke Maanoge? Nirbhayaa Banaa ke Maanoge? Audio link... Sarika |
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26th December 2015, 03:13 PM
is durghatna ne samaaj ko sharmsaar kiya hai kanoon ki bebsi bhi ham sabne dekhi hai aapne is dard ko shabdo me utaara hai isse shayad ham sab ke andar ka insaan jaag jaaye aur aisi durghatnao ko ham sab rok sake.
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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29th December 2015, 04:11 PM
Tumhari baat par apne papa ki baat yaad aa gayi...vo aksar ghatnao par hee kavita likhte hain...aur ek baar maine unse sawaal kiya ki kaise likh lete hain aap to bole...main nahi likhta aisa lagta hai koi aur kalam meri likh koi aur raha hai... Aur jab aisi koi rachna banti hai..padhne wale ke dil ko jhakjhod ke rakh deti hai....jab aapki awaaz me suna tha pahli baar aankhein nam ho gayi thi..aur dil cheekh utha tha..kai sawaalon ne dimaag ko gher liya tha...ye kamaal sirf kavita ka nahi aapki awaaz ka bhi hai...aapne jis dard jis tadap ko ujagar kiya hai isme...uske liye hats off sarika.. Mujhe khushi hai ki main sdc ke zariye hee sahi tumhe jaan saki hun... Ise padh kar kuch din me bhale log bhool bhi jayein...par aisi rachnao ki desh ko zaroorat hai..aur desh ki betiyon ko bhi...hamare tumhare sath ki aur hausle ki... Aapki soch aur kavita ko mera salaam.. master peice......................................  अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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29th December 2015, 11:08 PM
Bohat behtareen Sarika.
Kisi ladki ke saath guzre haalat kao aapne mehsoos kiya wo badi khoobi se. Bohat achcha aur bohat asardar likha hai aapne. DuaoN ke saath Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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30th December 2015, 09:49 AM
Dear Sarika....bahut hi dardila topic chuna hai tumne, tumhari es kavita ki audio bhi sun chuki hu, par jitni baar bhi sunti hu, khud ko bahut bebas mehsoos karti hu...aik tees di uth.ti hai dil meiN, hamari sarkaar ka system hi sahi nahi hai...ya yu kaho ki unko apni kursi se hi matlab hai, aur kisi baat se unka koi lena dena hi nahi hai.
tumne apne lafzoN meiN likh kar apni awaz dekar en ehsaasoN ke saath poora ensaaf kiya hai...es koshish ke liye tum reps ki haqdaar ho. reps+++ added .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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31st December 2015, 08:04 AM
Sarika Behen,
Hats off to you to say the very least. Feel so proud of you, you cant even begin to imagine! is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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3rd January 2016, 07:50 PM
Sarika jee bahut hee ..marmik rachna hai aapki ....i m speechless....touched me deeply...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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3rd January 2016, 09:59 PM
TUmhari soch aur koshish ko salaam, all i can say is I am blessed to have a partner with such a heart, such integrity....
Stay blessed foreverQasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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4th January 2016, 04:30 PM
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hum sabki duvidha ye hai ki hum social media par kuch din shor machaa kar chup ho jaate hain........... aur dua hi karte rehte hain ki aisa haadsa kisi apne ke saath na ho......................kyu bhool jaate hain ki jis ke saat hua wo bhi kisi ka apna tha..................... Sarika |
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4th January 2016, 04:32 PM
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4th January 2016, 04:34 PM
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AAp jaise daanishmand insaan ke mukh se apne liye kuch bhi acha sunna bade garv ki baat hai mere liye. Sarika |
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4th January 2016, 04:42 PM
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Afsos ki uss ladki ko insaaf nahi mila aur ab woh saari mombattiyon ki fauz chup hai jo uss waqt shor machaa rahi thi................. sab kori siyaasat................ ek jyoti kya laakho.n jyotiyaan bhi jal jaayein ye log us par bhi sirf apni siyasati rotiyan sekenge........... Aur hum log sirf baith kar news mein dekhenge ....aakhir kyun hain hum itne lachaar? kya humaara samaaj napunsak ho chuka hai jo apni maa behno ki raksha nahi kar sakta.....................  I am sorry agar kuch zyada bol gayi hu to...................... Sarika |
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4th January 2016, 04:52 PM
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Aapke aa jaane se hi aapki iss choti behen ka housla kitna badh jaata hai aapko iska ehsaas nahi hai................... Accha laga jaankar ki aapko pasand aayi. AApke baapu ji ke baare mein pata chala, sunkar bohut dukh hua.........ishwar unki aatma ko shanti pradaan kare.n aur apko ye dukh sehne ki shakti dein.............  Iss dukh ki ghadi mein pura SDC pariwaar aapke saath hai. Sarika |
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6th January 2016, 06:27 AM
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sar se aakhiri saaya uTh jaaye Sarika behen to thoDi si taqleef hona laazmi hai, aapse khair-khwaahoN ki duaaoN ke sadke hauNslaa banaa rehta hai rab raakha is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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15th January 2016, 11:05 AM
Jo kuch likha hai wo saaf hai saccha hai.. ispe tareef nahi ki jaa sakti .. bas apni sehmati jataaii jaa sakti hai.. jisme maiN aapke sath huN bhabhi ji..
Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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27th January 2016, 11:58 PM
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Aajkal aap bohut kam nazar aate hain...aaya kijiye acha lagta hai. Sarika |
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28th January 2016, 12:00 AM
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28th January 2016, 12:02 AM
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28th January 2016, 12:04 AM
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