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Best of Sudarshan Faakir ji..! -
30th May 2006, 11:57 PM
aaj ke daur mein ai dost ye maNzar kyuuN hai
zaKhm har sar pe har ik haath mein patthar kyuuN hai jab haqiiqat hai ke har zarre mein tuu rahataa hai phir zamiiN par kahiin masjid kahiin mandir kyuuN hai apanaa anjaam to maaluum hai sab ko phir bhii apanii nazaron mein har insaan sikandar kyuuN hai zindagii jiine ke qaabil hii nahiin ab "Faakir" varnaa har aaNkh mein ashkon kaa samandar kyuuN hai |
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30th May 2006, 11:59 PM
mere dukh kii koii davaa na karo
mujh ko mujh se abhi judaa na karo naaKhudaa ko Khudaa kahaa hai to phir Duub jaao, Khudaa Khudaa na karo ye sikhaayaa hai dostii ne hame.n dost banakar kabhii wafaa na karo ishq hai ishq, ye mazaak nahii.n cha.nd lamho mein faisalaa na karo ashiqii ho ya bandagii 'faakir' be-dilli se to ibatidaa na karo |
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31st May 2006, 12:01 AM
ham to yuN apanii zindagii se mile
ajanabii jaise ajanabii se mile har wafaa ek jurm ho gayaa dost kuchh aisii beruKhii se mile phuul hii phuul ham ne maaNge the daaG hii daaG zindagii se mile jis tarah aap hum se milate hain aadamii yuuN na aadamii se mile |
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31st May 2006, 12:03 AM
ishq mein Gairat-e-jazabaat ne rone na diyaa
warna kyaa baat thi kis baat ne rone na diiyaa aap kehte the ki rone se na badalenge nasiib umr bhar aap kii is baat ne rone na diiyaa ronewaalo.n se kah do unakaa bhii ronaa role jinako majabuuri-e-haalaat ne rone na diiyaa tujhase milakar hame ronaa tha bahot ronaa tha tangii-e-waqt-e-mulaaqaat ne rone na diiyaa ek do roz kaa sadamaa ho to ro le.n 'Faakir' ham ko har roz ke sadamaat ne rone na diiyaa |
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31st May 2006, 12:07 AM
kisii ranjish ko hawaa do ki main ziNdaa huN abhii
mujh ko ehasaas dilaa do ki main ziNdaa huN abhii mere rukane se merii saaNse bhii ruk jaaye.ngii faasale aur baDaa do ki main ziNdaa huN abhii zahar piine kii to aadat thii zamaanevaalo ab koii aur davaa do ki main ziNdaa huN abhii chalatii raaho.n me yuN hii aaNkh lagii hai 'Faakir' bhiiD logon kii haTaa do ki main ziNdaa huN abhii |
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31st May 2006, 01:47 AM
Very nice poems and i liked all of them, gr8
Keep it up and keep posting here. just excellent. Prakash prakash_pds@inbox.com Vande Mataram Puks Vande Mataram . . . |
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31st May 2006, 08:00 PM
ahal-e-ulfat ke havaalo.n pe haNsii aatii hai
lailaa majanuN ke misaalon pe haNsii aatii hai jab bhi taqamiil-e-mohabbat ka Khayaal aataa hai mujhko apane Khayaalon pe haNsii aatii hai [taqamil=completion] log apane liye auro.n mein wafaa DhuuNDhate hai un wafaa DhuuNDhanewaalo.n pe haNsii aatii hai dekhanevaalo.n tabassum ko karam mat samajho uNhe.n to dekhanevaalo.n pe haNsii aatii hai [tabassum=smile] chaaNdanii raat mohabbat mein hasiin thii ‘Faakir’ ab to biimaar ujaalo.n pe haNsii aatii hai |
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31st May 2006, 08:11 PM
kuchh to duniyaa ki inaayat ne dil toD diyaa
aur kuchh talKhii-e-haalaat ne dil toD diyaa ham to samajhe the ki barsaat mein barasegi sharaab aayii barsaat to barsaat ne dil toD diyaa dil to rotaa rahe, or aaNkh se aaNsuu na bahe ishq kii aisii rawaayaat ne dil toD diyaa wo mere hain, mujhe mil jaayenge, aa jaayenge aise bekaar Khayaalaat ne dil toD diyaa aap ko pyaar hai mujh se ki nahii hai mujh se jaane kyon aise sawaalaat ne dil toD diyaa |
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31st May 2006, 08:17 PM
ye shiishe ye sapne ye rishte ye dhaage
kise kya Khabar hai kahaaN TuuT jaaye.N muhabbat ke dariyaa mein tinake wafaa ke na jaane ye kis moD par Duub jaaye.N ajab dil kii bastii ajab dil kii vaadii har ek moD mausam na_ii Khwaahishon kaa lagaaye hain hum ne bhii sapanon ke paudhe magar kyaa bharosaa yahaaN baarishon kaa muraadon kii manzil ke sapanon mein khoye muhabbat kii raahon pe hum chal paDe the zaraa duur chal ke jab aaNkhen khulii to kaDii dhuup mein hum akele khaDe the jinhen dil se chaahaa jinhen dil se puujaa nazar aa rahe hain wohii ajanabii se rawaayat hai shaayad ye sadiyon puraanii shikaayat nahiin hai ko_ii zindagii se |
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5th June 2006, 03:07 AM
parul jii ap ne fakir sahab ki sabi behtrin ghazal bheje hai aur hume omid hai aap aisi hi sabi shayeron ki ghazal bhejnge
ek ghazal Tariq Aziz Khan sahab ki hum bhej rahe hai omid karta hoon aap ko pasand aayengi Apni madhosh nigahon se sawera karna Isi veeran shabistan mein ujala karna Tergi rehti hai teri shab-o-roz yahan Tum kisi roz yahan aker basera karna Woh tou phoolon se bhi nazuk hai buhat der talak Jab bhi dekho tou nazer uski utara karna Apni zulfon mein chupalon mujhko buhat udaas hoon mein Roshni Chubhti hai ankhon mein adhera karna Yoon tou har din teri khushboo se jawan rehta hai Ankh lag jaye tou khuwabon mein bhi aya karna Woh kisi roz idher se bhi guzer sakti hai Tum na ik pal bhi nazer apni hataya karna Tumne baadal ki tarhan dhoop chupani hai "AZIZ" Tum har aik sham use chaand dikhaya karna |
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It's allright dear ! |
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5th June 2006, 11:18 PM
No thanks and sorry dear,
I like the new one too and keep posting over here. Vande Mataram. prakash_pds@inbox.com |
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6th June 2006, 02:20 AM
prakash jii is kalam k barein mein aap ka kya khayal hai , jawab ka intezar rahenga
arz hai Na Pucho Kaise Kaise Imtihaan Leti Hai Zindagi, Kabhi Khusi to Kabhi Gaam Deti Hai Zindagi, Lekin Sayad Kuch Bigara Hai Humne Iska, Tabhi To Sirf Jakhm Hume Deti Hai Zindagi Thaama Hua Hai Haath Mera Kisine, Phir Bhi, Akele Hone Ka Hi Ehsass Deti Hai Zindagi Humse Bara Badnaseeb Na Hua Koi Jise, Sirf Ashaq hi Ashaq Deti Hai Zindagi, Chaha Maut Hi Thaam Le Haath Humara, Lekin Sukoon se MAUT Ki Bahoon Main Bhi Nahi Jeene Deti Ye Zindagi Na Tadpe Koyi Ishq Main Koi Aashiq Kabhi Werna Zakham Sehne Ka Mauka Bhi Nahi Deti Hai Ye Zindagi Merham Lagana Tho Nahi Janti Kambakht, Kured Ker Usse Aur Gehra Bana Deti Hai Ye Zindagi |
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Lajwab e dost |
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Lajwab e dost -
6th June 2006, 02:59 AM
Bahoot hi khoob e yaar
aapne to bahoot hi jandar baat likhi hai See i find little problem with hindi i mean not wtire very frequent that why again writing in english but you have written really nice and i appriciate it. Waiting for your reply. prakas_pds@inbox.com Vande Mataram . . . |
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6th June 2006, 06:33 AM
sab kuch bahut umda hai is thread mein.. liked it a lot.
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12th June 2006, 11:30 PM
This one is really nice Dear,
Thanks for that b'coz you have also traslated urdu words so that i can understand. Prakash prakash_pds@inbox.com Vande Mataram . . . |
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Re: Best of Sudarshan Faakir ji..! -
17th June 2006, 03:58 PM
aaj ke daur mein ai dost ye maNzar kyuuN hai
zaKhm har sar pe har ik haath mein patthar kyuuN hai jab haqiiqat hai ke har zarre mein tuu rahataa hai phir zamiiN par kahiin masjid kahiin mandir kyuuN hai apanaa anjaam to maaluum hai sab ko phir bhii apanii nazaron mein har insaan sikandar kyuuN hai zindagii jiine ke qaabil hii nahiin ab "Faakir" varnaa har aaNkh mein ashkon kaa samandar kyuuN hai KYA BAAT HAI..>!!!! WAH...!!!!! SALAAM HAI SUDARSHAN FAKIR SAHEB KO...AUR AAPKO SHUKRIYA PARUL JI. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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17th June 2006, 06:45 PM
Dear Parul,
Sudarshan ji ke liye kya kahein... I just love his writings.... Duiol khush kar diya tumne yeh sab share karke... Daad kubool karna dil se  The one i like the most ye shiishe ye sapne ye rishte ye dhaage kise kya Khabar hai kahaaN TuuT jaaye.N muhabbat ke dariyaa mein tinake wafaa ke na jaane ye kis moD par Duub jaaye.N ajab dil kii bastii ajab dil kii vaadii har ek moD mausam na_ii Khwaahishon kaa lagaaye hain hum ne bhii sapanon ke paudhe magar kyaa bharosaa yahaaN baarishon kaa muraadon kii manzil ke sapanon mein khoye muhabbat kii raahon pe hum chal paDe the zaraa duur chal ke jab aaNkhen khulii to kaDii dhuup mein hum akele khaDe the jinhen dil se chaahaa jinhen dil se puujaa nazar aa rahe hain wohii ajanabii se rawaayat hai shaayad ye sadiyon puraanii shikaayat nahiin hai ko_ii zindagii se this si sooooooooo very true.... yeh to bahut apni si lagti hai.... just love it... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th June 2006, 12:44 AM
anjish hi sahi, dil ko dukhane ke liye aa
aa, fir se mujhe chod ke jane ke liye aa. kuch to rahe pindar-e-muhabbat ka bharam rakh tu bhi to kabhi mujhko manane ke liye aa. jaise tujhe aate hain na aane ke bahane aise hi kisi roz na jane ke liye aa. Prakash Solanki, prakash_pds@inbox.com Vande Mataram . . . |
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12th July 2006, 01:27 AM
Kaif ji, thanks for sharing beautiful ghazal's. It's very nice.
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I just love this ghazal, it's really nice... each & every word and the entire creation is complete in itself. and I am glad you also like this ghazal. take care of yourself. Have a nice day. |
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12th July 2006, 01:39 AM
Hey Pulkit,
these are my favourite too, I liked it too. yeh shers tumhe bhi pasand aaye jaan ke achha laga. you too keep posting your favourite ones. you are right these are very true and meaningful shers. take care & have a nice day. |
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One more beautiful ghazal...
phir aaj mujhe tum ko bas itanaa bataana hai hasnaa hii jeevan hai hasate hii jaana hai madhuban ho ya gulshan ho pataJhaD ho ya saavan ho har haal mein insaaN ka ik phuul saa jeevan ho kaaNton mein ulajh ke bhi Khushboo hi luTaana hai hasnaa hii jeevan hai hasate hii jaana hai har pal jo guzar jaaye daaman ko to bhar jaaye ye soch ke jee le to taqdiir saNvar jaaye is umr kii raahon se Khushiyon ko churaana hai hasnaa hii jeevan hai hasate hii jaana hai sab dard miTaa de hum, har Gham ko sazaa de hum kahate hain jise jeena duniyaa ko sikhaa de hum ye aaj to apnaa hai kal bhii apnaana hai hasnaa hii jeevan hai hasate hii jaana hai |
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12th July 2006, 11:10 PM
Hello Parul ji
Aapki yes lajwab ghazal yaha par pesh karne ke liye khub dhanyawad. I just want to say its an excellent work and just liked it Prakash Vande Mataram prakash_pds@inbox.com |
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25th July 2011, 12:30 PM
thx a tonnn for sharing...very nice collection......shukriyaa
khush rahen....baagi khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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24th September 2011, 04:24 PM
saamane hai jo use log buraa kahate hai.n
saamane hai jo use log buraa kahate hai.n jisako dekhaa hii nahii.n usako Khudaa kahate hai.n zindagii ko bhii silaa kahate hai.n kahanevaale jiinevaale to gunaaho.n kii sazaa kahate hai.n faasale umr ke kuchh aur ba.Daa detii hai jaane kyuu.N log use phir bhii davaa kahate hai.n chand maasuum se patto.n kaa lahuu hai "Fakir" jisako mahabuub ke haatho.n kii hinaa kahate hai.n |
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24th September 2011, 04:27 PM
us mo.D se shuruu kare.n phir ye zindagii
har shay jahaa.N hasii.n thii, ham tum the ajanabii lekar chale the ham ji.nhe.n jannat ke Khvaab the phuulo.n ke Khvaab the vo muhabbat ke Khvaab the lekin kahaa.N hai un me.n vo pahalii sii dilakashii rahate the ham hasii.n Khayaalo.n kii bhii.D me.n ulajhe hue hai.n aaj savaalo.n kii bhii.D me.n aa.ne lagii hai yaad vo fursat kii har gha.Dii shaayad ye vaqt hamase koii chaal chal gayaa rishtaa vafaa kaa aur hii rango..n me.n Dhal gayaa ashko.n kii chaa.Ndanii se thii bahatar vo dhuup hii |
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