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Aaj phir purani ek Kahani yaad aayi -
1st October 2005, 09:57 PM
Aaj phir purani ek Kahani yaad aayi
Dard ki Mehfil mein kuch dard Fiza le aayi Aaj phir purani ek Kahani mughey yaad aayi Daur hi kuch aisa chal pada kya karein Aaj phir mughey teri yaad bahut hay aayi Chandni aaj phir darichon mein kuch kehne ko aayi Aaj phir teri parchayi mughey nazer kyon aayi Janey aaj tere geeton ki yaad mughey hay aayi Aaj phir muskurakar janey ki tere adaa bahut yaad aayi Faaslon kay Dariya mein behti ek kishti nazer aayi Uss kishti mein behtey ek diye ki roshni nazer aayi Maghdar mein behti kismat ki baatein Kahan kisey ne samaghi yeh batein Antim darshan ko takti in nighaon ko tere darshan ki janey kyon ek aas nazer aayi Aaj phir tere janey ki ek kahani yaad aayi Aaj kyon tere yaad bahut hay aayi Doob na jaon is dariya mein Ki aaj mughey dariya mein faslon ki leher nazer hay aayi Ek deewar se jughtey Lehron ki koshish nazer aayi Unn Lehron mein chupi apni ek koshish nazer aayi Aaj phir purani ek Kahani mughey yaad aayi Aaj phir Sukanya ko tere yaad bahut hay aayi |
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Re: Aaj phir purani ek Kahani yaad aayi -
1st October 2005, 10:10 PM
Aaj phir purani ek Kahani mughey yaad aayi
Aaj phir Sukanya ko tere yaad bahut hay aayi Sukanya Di, Bahut khoob.... yaadon ka kya karein.... Ek baat purani.... Kuch yaad is kadar rakhna Ki tumhare chehre par muskurahat la paon voh yaad hi kya jismein beh jaaon aansoon banke... Take Care Rohin |
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Re: Aaj phir purani ek Kahani yaad aayi -
2nd October 2005, 10:57 AM
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i had been waiting since long back to read ur wonderful creation again n yes today i was able to read ur wonderful thoughts once again. its always brought a smile on my face seeing ur name on site with a new post n yes its true tht i just love reading ur feelings. di aaj aapko padha to ek ganna yaad aa gaya yaadein movie ka. Naghme hain, shikwe hain, qisse hain, baatein hain - 2 Baatein bhool jaati hain, yaadein yaad aati hain - 2 well as usual jab jab aapko padha i just get deep into it as sumtimes u get to read sumting which u really love to read or to express. as usual a class creation wriiten by u . was wondering which lines too choose tht i loved reading the most but i cudnt as its complete in itself n each n every word is awesomly expressed. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too di. keep penning down n do keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.yadein hmmmm cud gather few words together n cudnt resist myself sharing here with u. hope u dont mind di...... hijar ki shav mein tere liye tarapte hai hum tum kya jaano kitna yaad karte hai hum! pooch kar dekho haal mera,seene ki dharkano se har saans mein kaise nayi maut marte hai hum! take care n always smile di as sumone sumwhere loves to see ur smiling face. with love urs ruhani   mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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3rd October 2005, 12:05 PM
Kuch yaad is kadar rakhna
Ki tumhare chehre par muskurahat la paon voh yaad hi kya jismein beh jaaon aansoon banke... Rohin Bhai Bahut khoobsurat baat kahi hay.......ek hosla aur muskurahat le aayi chehre par.....di ki rachna ko pasand karney ka shukriya apna khyal rakhna |
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3rd October 2005, 12:16 PM
Dear Ruhani
Tum meri post ka intezaar karti ho..........aur meri yeh rachna tumharey chehre par muskan le aayi..........bahut acha laga ki kisey ke chehre par mere rachna dekh muskan aa jati hay.......arrey itney kushi mat do ruhani and u love reading my creations.........I am honoured........waise ur creations are quite innocent and I like reading them.........mere rachna tumhey gehre khyalon mein le gayi.....kya keh sakti huun...kuch simple shabd hi hotey hain par arth shayad gehra hota hay shayad yahi zindagi hay.........hijar ki shav mein tere liye tarapte hai hum tum kya jaano kitna yaad karte hai hum! pooch kar dekho haal mera,seene ki dharkano se har saans mein kaise nayi maut marte hai hum! Bahut khoob kaha hay.......... Apna khyal rakhna with luv di |
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3rd October 2005, 10:17 PM
Daur hi kuch aisa chal pada kya karein
Aaj phir mughey teri yaad bahut hay aayi Janey aaj tere geeton ki yaad mughey hay aayi Aaj phir muskurakar janey ki tere adaa bahut yaad aayi bahut khuub! likha hai sukanya ji... Daad hazir hai...yoonhi yaad karti rahein aur hamein bhi lubhati rahein... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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4th October 2005, 06:30 PM
Dard ki Mehfil mein kuch dard Fiza le aayi
Aaj phir purani ek Kahani mughey yaad aayi Daur hi kuch aisa chal pada kya karein Aaj phir mughey teri yaad bahut hay aayi Waaaaaaaaaahhh... kya baat kahi hai didi... Chandni aaj phir darichon mein kuch kehne ko aayi Aaj phir teri parchayi mughey nazer kyon aayi Janey aaj tere geeton ki yaad mughey hay aayi Aaj phir muskurakar janey ki tere adaa bahut yaad aayi Beautifulll...! Faaslon kay Dariya mein behti ek kishti nazer aayi Uss kishti mein behtey ek diye ki roshni nazer aayi Maghdar mein behti kismat ki baatein Kahan kisey ne samaghi yeh batein Amzing expression didi... bahut khoob kaha hai... Antim darshan ko takti in nighaon ko tere darshan ki janey kyon ek aas nazer aayi Aaj phir tere janey ki ek kahani yaad aayi Aaj kyon tere yaad bahut hay aayi Well said...! Doob na jaon is dariya mein Ki aaj mughey dariya mein faslon ki leher nazer hay aayi Ek deewar se jughtey Lehron ki koshish nazer aayi Unn Lehron mein chupi apni ek koshish nazer aayi Waaaaaaaaaahhh.. just loved these lines di! Aaj phir purani ek Kahani mughey yaad aayi Aaj phir Sukanya ko tere yaad bahut hay aayi nice one..! Didi! Kaisi hain? Ummeed hai bahut acche se hongi... Humesha ki tarah bahut h khoobsurat likha hai aapne... har ehsaas khoobsurati se bayaan kiya hai...Meri daad to humesha aapke satah hai.... yunhi likhti rahiye...Apna khayal rakhiyega.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th October 2005, 07:34 PM
Namaskar Paras Ji
Aapki daad se ek khoobsurat si muskan aa jati hay........mere rachna aapko achi lagi dhanyawad........yuun hi yaad kartey rahuun.. ..aur rachna likhti rahuun......hmmm.....thanks for inspiring to keep writing......waise itney fast life ho gayi hay.....fursat ke kuch pal hi hotey hain jab likh pao......Ummeed hay aagey bhi sath yuun hi bana rahega.Sada kush Rahiye |
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5th October 2005, 07:40 PM
Hello Pulkit My Sweet brother
Ehsaas ko khoobsurti se byaan kiya hay......u liked it my brother thanks.....kuch imaginations... kuch feelings... kuch sachai......kuch dard ......shayad bas inhein rangon se saja payi is kavita ko agle baar kuch aur rang apni rachna mein bharney ki koshish karungi....kushi ke rang Apna khyal rakhna Di |
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Re: Aaj phir purani ek Kahani yaad aayi -
6th October 2005, 05:05 PM
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Hi Sukanya Didi, bahoot achha likha hai.. ye yaade hai jo kabhi dard to kabhi khushi laat hai, chaahe baat kitani bhi puraani ho waqt waqt par aati hai.. |
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8th October 2005, 03:49 PM
Hello Garima
Thanks ki tumney waqt nikal kar apni di ki rachna padhi.....haan yadein gum aur kushi donon chehre par le aati hain.......Tumney rachna padhi aur saraha thanks for inspiring........ Apna khyal rakhna Di |
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9th October 2005, 12:02 AM
sukanya didi....awsome
it is jus amazin to read ur wonderful thoughts keep writin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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9th October 2005, 01:57 PM
Hello Karthik
its amazing to read the wonderful thoughts of my poetry Thanks ..........waise I read ur first poetry yesterday......and it was good work...keep up the good work.....Thanks for reading and liking my poetry.God bless you Keep Smiling |
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17th October 2014, 03:55 PM
Sukanya ji..........aapke saadgi se bharpoor yeh ehsaas hame bahut acche lge...yeh aik khaas rha.
Aaj phir purani ek Kahani mughey yaad aayi Aaj phir Sukanya ko tere yaad bahut hay aayi phir teri kahani yaad aaye phir tera fasana yaad aaya, aaj phir meri aankhoN ko ek khaawab suhana yaad aaya .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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18th October 2014, 05:31 AM
Sunita ji
Pehle to main aapka shukriya karungi ki aapne meri rachna ko dhundha aur saraha.Aisa lagta hay bahut waqt beet gaya..its a wonderful initiative taken by you to call back all the beautiful poets of shayri.com Hats off to you.You are doing a commendable job.Kitna acha lagega agar sab wapis aa jayein.Lets hope for the best. Take care |
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18th October 2014, 09:57 AM
Sukanya dee......
aapki ye kavitaa padhkar lagaa nai taazgee aa gayee ho mujh me... aapke ehsaas andar tak jhakkjhor gaye mujhe..... bahot hi khoob aur khoobsurat kalaam.... bahot mubaarak ho aapko..... Reps +++ likhtii rahen Shaad.... |
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19th October 2014, 06:32 AM
Shaad
Thanks for reading and appreciating.2005 mein likhi thi yeh rachna kabhi kabhi lagta hay kitna waqt beet gaya.Sunita Ji ne dhuund nikali ..thanks to her.Its good now all old and new members are together writing on shayri.com.Thanks for reps...U too keep writing.Have a nice day Di |
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