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Tere liye... -
9th October 2008, 08:36 PM
Shehar mein dhale kai majboot chattaano ki tarah...
hum isi sheher mein hain girte makaano.n ki tarah... hum to jise bhi mile,chhip ke mile.. par log chhipte hi rahe humse kamaano.n ki tarah... vo jamane hain,badalte hain.. badalne do,badalne do unhe... tum to badla na karo humse jamano.n ki tarah... kitne armaa.n tamannaaye.n ummeedein kitni-kitni... dafan sab ho gayi seene mein khajaano.n ki tarah....... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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9th October 2008, 11:13 PM
ritu jee !
aapka aagaz aur andaaz dono pasand aaye hume ! shayri ki ye buzm aapka tah e dil se isteQbaal karti hai ! ummeed hai ye kadam ek lambe safar ki daastaaN bayaN karege ! daad ke sath ! |
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wah ritu ggggg |
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wah ritu ggggg -
10th October 2008, 02:56 AM
ritu g
kya likti hai . maar hi diya hame . aisa likna kahan se sikha aapne kya hum jan sakte hai . ya phir mohobat ka dard itna gahra ho sakta hai hamne ye aaj dekha hai . acha laga , bahut acha laga aapko padhkar . pathar ke sahar me dil le ke khada hun. kisko dun ye soch ke heran bada hun. |
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Surja ji........ |
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Surja ji........ -
10th October 2008, 05:00 PM
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Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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10th October 2008, 05:15 PM
Shehar mein dhale kai majboot chattaano ki tarah...
hum isi sheher mein hain girte makaano.n ki tarah... hum to jise bhi mile,chhip ke mile.. par log chhipte hi rahe humse kamaano.n ki tarah... vo jamane hain,badalte hain..badalne do unhe... tum to badla na karo humse jamano.n ki tarah... kitne armaa.n tamannaaye.n ummeedein kitni-kitni... dafan sab ho gayi seene mein khajaano.n ki tarah....... ritu ji acchi koshish hai aapki.......par technically kaha jaye to abhi bahut mehnat ki jaroorat hai, par ahsaas bahut acche haiN, jab ahsaas acche hon aapke paas to lafz bhi mil hi jate haiN....so keep it up. kush rahiye god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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6th November 2008, 11:17 AM
Sunita ji,
ab apka sath mil gaya to aur accha likhna seekh hi jaungi.............. Apni baat yaha.n rakhne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. Yun hi rishta banaye rakhiyega. . . . . Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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