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22nd May 2010, 10:50 AM
5 Saal pehle ki baat hai,
meri Dii ki shadi ka mauhaal...Di aur mai.N buri tarah ro rahe they...tabhi kisi ne kaha "Beti parai hoti hai,itna dil nahi.n lagana chahiye unse..."
Is baat ne mujhe andar tak chhoo liya tha aur shadi nibat-ne ke 3 din baad yeh Poem likhi.....
Bahut kamiyaaN haiN isme.n par fir bhi jyo.n ki tyo.n aapke saamne rakh rahi hooN.
Gaur Kijiyega:
Pita ki laadli maa ki jaan hoti hai beti,
Saare jaha.n se pyari hoti hai beti,
Unagli uthe koi,to laDh jati hai beti…
To fir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti..?
Khushi sabko deti hai beti,
Mushkil me.n sath nibhati hai beti,
aNsu har kisi ke sukhati hai beti,
To fir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti?
Pita ke baad maa ke kareeb hoti hai beti,
Apne maa-baap par qurbaan hoti hai beti,
Karti hai sabse jyada maa-baap ki chinta 'ritu',
To fir akhir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti??
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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22nd May 2010, 12:03 PM
Ritu Ji... Namaste ! aapki kavita ke ehsaas bahut pyare lage mujhe...padhte waqt mere saamne apni beti ka ask ban gaya....jo ki abhi B.com IInd year me hai....jaise jaise woh badhi ho rahi hai....usse aur jiyada mera moh badhta jaa raha....
jo ek niyati hai....uske tehat toh lagta hai......betiya paraya dhan hai....magar dil se woh kabhi humare liye parayii nahi hoti....jaha tak mere dekhne me aaya hai...betiyon ka jhukaav .... beton ki nisbat ... maa-baap ke prati jiyada hota hai.... !
aapki iss khoobsurat kalpna ko dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul kijiye....!
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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22nd May 2010, 12:09 PM
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Ritu Ji... Namaste ! aapki kavita ke ehsaas bahut pyare lage mujhe...padhte waqt mere saamne apni beti ka ask ban gaya....jo ki abhi B.com IInd year me hai....jaise jaise woh badhi ho rahi hai....usse aur jiyada mera moh badhta jaa raha....
jo ek niyati hai....uske tehat toh lagta hai......betiya paraya dhan hai....magar dil se woh kabhi humare liye parayii nahi hoti....jaha tak mere dekhne me aaya hai...betiyon ka jhukaav .... beton ki nisbat ... maa-baap ke prati jiyada hota hai.... !
aapki iss khoobsurat kalpna ko dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul kijiye....!
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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Namaskkar Naresh jee,
Shukriya is aadhi adhuri rachna ko paDhne ka..
Aapki Daad sir-aankho.n par..
par sirf daad se kuch nahi hoga..
Mujhe Aapka sath chahiye,please check my recent thread on "chit-chat & general Discussion" forum.
Shukriya.
Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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22nd May 2010, 12:38 PM
Ritu,
Sach me dil ko chu gai aapki ye poem..... mujhe apni dii ki yaad aa gai,,,,,,, aaj mujhe dii ki vidaai ka din yaad aa gya.....sach kaha hai aapne betiya bahut jada kareeb hoti hai apne parivaar ke fir bhi wo paraaai kyu hoti hai...............????
Dil se daad kabool kijiye ritu ji..............
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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22nd May 2010, 12:47 PM
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Ritu,
Sach me dil ko chu gai aapki ye poem..... mujhe apni dii ki yaad aa gai,,,,,,, aaj mujhe dii ki vidaai ka din yaad aa gya.....sach kaha hai aapne betiya bahut jada kareeb hoti hai apne parivaar ke fir bhi wo paraaai kyu hoti hai...............????
Dil se daad kabool kijiye ritu ji..............
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Shukriya kavita jee........................
Gob Bless You
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22nd May 2010, 01:12 PM
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Well Ritu its a debatable topic ......
Will discuss whenever we have enuf time......
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22nd May 2010, 01:19 PM
Ritu jee:
namaste!
beTiyaaN Shaadi kar ke apnaa aik alag saa nayaa Parivaar basaatee haii. aur bahot sii zimmedaaiyaaN usey miltee haii! we chaaheiN kahiiN bhee jaayeN apne maa-baap ke dil se haMeShaa juRii hi rehtee haii! aapke yeh ehsaas dil ko Chhu gayeN!
KhuSh raheN...duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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24th May 2010, 09:13 AM
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Well Ritu its a debatable topic ......
Will discuss whenever we have enuf time......
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It would be my pleasure sir...............
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24th May 2010, 09:28 AM
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Ritu jee:
namaste!
beTiyaaN Shaadi kar ke apnaa aik alag saa nayaa Parivaar basaatee haii. aur bahot sii zimmedaaiyaaN usey miltee haii! we chaaheiN kahiiN bhee jaayeN apne maa-baap ke dil se haMeShaa juRii hi rehtee haii! aapke yeh ehsaas dil ko Chhu gayeN!
KhuSh raheN...duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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N amaste dhaval Bhai !
Mrei Choti si koshish par gaur karne ke liye bahut bahut shukiya.....
isi tarah aate rahiye aur sath nibhate rahiye...
Dil se shukriya.
God Bless you
Aapki Dost
Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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24th May 2010, 04:29 PM
beti parayi jarur ho jati hai apne ghar se, per mammi papa ke dil se kabhi nahi.
bahut hi acha likha hai tune.
khush rehna hamesha
tera bhai
dinesh
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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24th May 2010, 05:26 PM
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beti parayi jarur ho jati hai apne ghar se, per mammi papa ke dil se kabhi nahi.
bahut hi acha likha hai tune.
khush rehna hamesha
tera bhai
dinesh
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Arrey waah dinu bhai...
mummy papa ke dil se nahi hoti aur bhai ke dil se ho jati hai,kyu? theek kaha na?
Chalo Aap aaye accha laga.
aise hi apni behna ka sath dete raho.
God Bless You
Aapki Behna
Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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24th May 2010, 06:05 PM
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Arrey waah dinu bhai...
mummy papa ke dil se nahi hoti aur bhai ke dil se ho jati hai,kyu? theek kaha na?
Chalo Aap aaye accha laga.
aise hi apni behna ka sath dete raho.
God Bless You
Aapki Behna
Ritu
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are tune hi bhai ka jikar nahi kiya gazal me to mene bhi nahi kiya. vese ek baat kahu bhai ka dil me bhi itni hi jagah hoti hai jitni mammi papa ke dil me hoti hai. per bhai kabhi apni bahen se pyar jata nahi pata hai. uska ehshash tab hota hai jab bahen ki shadi ke baad biday hoti hai.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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25th May 2010, 11:53 AM
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are tune hi bhai ka jikar nahi kiya gazal me to mene bhi nahi kiya. vese ek baat kahu bhai ka dil me bhi itni hi jagah hoti hai jitni mammi papa ke dil me hoti hai. per bhai kabhi apni bahen se pyar jata nahi pata hai. uska ehshash tab hota hai jab bahen ki shadi ke baad biday hoti hai.
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,...............yeh toh sahi baat hai....!!!
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
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27th May 2010, 12:11 AM
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5 Saal pehle ki baat hai,
meri Dii ki shadi ka mauhaal...Di aur mai.N buri tarah ro rahe they...tabhi kisi ne kaha "Beti parai hoti hai,itna dil nahi.n lagana chahiye unse..."
Is baat ne mujhe andar tak chhoo liya tha aur shadi nibat-ne ke 3 din baad yeh Poem likhi.....
Bahut kamiyaaN haiN isme.n par fir bhi jyo.n ki tyo.n aapke saamne rakh rahi hooN.
Gaur Kijiyega:
Pita ki laadli maa ki jaan hoti hai beti,
Saare jaha.n se pyari hoti hai beti,
Unagli uthe koi,to laDh jati hai beti…
To fir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti..?
Khushi sabko deti hai beti,
Mushkil me.n sath nibhati hai beti,
aNsu har kisi ke sukhati hai beti,
To fir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti?
Pita ke baad maa ke kareeb hoti hai beti,
Apne maa-baap par qurbaan hoti hai beti,
Karti hai sabse jyada maa-baap ki chinta 'ritu',
To fir akhir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti??
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yeh kavita bhi achhi lagi aapki, dil se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....
aapka dost,
vikram
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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27th May 2010, 09:08 AM
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yeh kavita bhi achhi lagi aapki, dil se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....
aapka dost,
vikram
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Housla-afja'ii ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Vikram jee.....
God Bless You,
Aapki Dost
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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28th May 2010, 08:17 AM
ritu ji aap kyeh ehsaas dil ko choo lene walay heiN
daad hazir hai kabool kareiN
aap ka
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28th May 2010, 11:42 AM
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5 Saal pehle ki baat hai,
meri Dii ki shadi ka mauhaal...Di aur mai.N buri tarah ro rahe they...tabhi kisi ne kaha "Beti parai hoti hai,itna dil nahi.n lagana chahiye unse..."
Is baat ne mujhe andar tak chhoo liya tha aur shadi nibat-ne ke 3 din baad yeh Poem likhi.....
Bahut kamiyaaN haiN isme.n par fir bhi jyo.n ki tyo.n aapke saamne rakh rahi hooN.
Gaur Kijiyega:
Pita ki laadli maa ki jaan hoti hai beti,
Saare jaha.n se pyari hoti hai beti,
Unagli uthe koi,to laDh jati hai beti…
To fir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti..?
Khushi sabko deti hai beti,
Mushkil me.n sath nibhati hai beti,
aNsu har kisi ke sukhati hai beti,
To fir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti?
Pita ke baad maa ke kareeb hoti hai beti,
Apne maa-baap par qurbaan hoti hai beti,
Karti hai sabse jyada maa-baap ki chinta 'ritu',
To fir akhir kyu.n parai hoti hai beti??
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ritu ji ko prem anjana ka namashkaar ......................
ritu ji aapki yeh kavita marmikta se paripoorna, aur dunia ki har beti ke jahen mein uthne wala prashna hai.....
mata pita ka armaan hai beti, ghar ki izzat au shaan hai beti.
duniya ki daulat ik or ho jai, to bhi "anjana" ki jaan hai beti.
anjana prem sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai, mai sabko hasata chala gaya. pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi, mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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28th May 2010, 05:33 PM
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ritu ji aap kyeh ehsaas dil ko choo lene walay heiN
daad hazir hai kabool kareiN
aap ka
rajinderseep
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Aapki daad sar aaNkho.N kar Rajinder Sahab..........
Bahut Bahut shukriya......
God Bless You
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Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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2nd June 2010, 09:55 AM
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ritu ji ko prem anjana ka namashkaar ......................
ritu ji aapki yeh kavita marmikta se paripoorna, aur dunia ki har beti ke jahen mein uthne wala prashna hai.....
mata pita ka armaan hai beti, ghar ki izzat au shaan hai beti.
duniya ki daulat ik or ho jai, to bhi "anjana" ki jaan hai beti.
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Shukriya prem jee apna kimti waqt aur ra'i meri is chti si koShiSh ko dene ke liye.
Bahut Bahut shukriya.
Yun hi aate rahiye,
God Bless You
Apki Dost,
Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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