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"Ye kaisaa tuuta" -
10th February 2011, 12:21 AM
Adab ki mehsfil ko naachiiz ka Salaam,
YuuN to zindagi meiN utar cha.Dhaw aate hi rehte haiN, magar maiN shaayad apne aap se hi ruuth gaya tha! Aaj arsey baad saalgirah ki mubarakbaadoN ko dekhkar lagaa ke maaddaparasti ke alawaa bhi mohabbat qaayam rehti hai. To Zidd, Dhaval bhai aur Zainy, Surinder ji ko tah-e-dil se shukriya kehna chahuNga. Lijiiye aap charoN ki khidmat meiN ek saugat. Rai se aagaah zaruur karaiyega. Iske arkan haiN -1222/2122/122 aur ye Lata ji ke maqbuul giit "Ye dil aur unki nigaahoN ke saaye" pe gungunaya ja sakta hai. Aisi merii soch hai, par agar kuch kami reh gayii ho to agaah zaruur karaiyega. Arz kiya hai... -1---2---2---2/-2-1--2----2/--1---2—2 Ye kaisaa tuutaa adhuuraa jahaaN hai -1---2--2---2/2---1---2---2/-1--2----2 Ye kaisii ruuthii ghutan kii fizaaN hai -1--2--2--2/2-1---2--2/-1--2---2 Mohabbat ikhlaas gum ho gaye haiN -1--2--2--2/-2-1-2--2/-1--2---2 Faqat nafrat kii fasal jaavidaaN hai -1---2--2--2/2--1--2--2/1---2---2 Zamaanaa guzar gayaa dil ko tuutay -1--2---2---2/----2--1--2--2/-1---2---2 Khalish aur gham haiN ke ab bhi jawaaN haiN -1-2--2--2/-2--1---2----2/-1--2---2 Kabhi lagtaa hai ke saaNseN rukiiN hoN 1---2--2---2/-2-1-2--2/--1---2---2 Magar maujay diid har pal rawaaN hai 1--2--2-2/-2--1--2-2/-1-2--2 Ke apnii niiyat dekhii hii nahii aur -1--2---2---2/---2--1--2--2/-1—2----2 Khudaa ko dhuuNdaa na jaane kahaaN hai Aap ki ray ka muntazir, Khuda Hafez Naadaan HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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10th February 2011, 08:53 AM
Zamaanaa guzar gayaa dil ko tuutay
Khalish aur gham haiN ke ab bhi jawaaN haiN Bahut Khoob ... Shyam Ji ! bahut khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiyeN hai aapne ... dil ko chhuu gaye ... dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ...  yunhi aate rahen aur likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th February 2011, 10:14 AM
good one........................thanks for sharing
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10th February 2011, 01:58 PM
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Mere aashaar aap ko pasand aaye, meri liye ba.Di khushi ki baat hai. YuuN hi apna saath banaye reakhiyega aur hausla ba.Dhate rahiyega. Aap ke waqt ke liye shukraguzaar huuN. Aadaab Naadaan HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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13th February 2011, 06:56 PM
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Bohat khoob Shyam Singh ji.. Zamaanaa guzar gayaa dil ko tuutay Khalish aur gham haiN ke ab bhi jawaaN haiN yeh sher bohat pasand aaya mujhe yuhi likhte rahiye.......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th February 2011, 10:32 AM
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khush-aamadeed hum aapko bulane walo mai beshaq na rahe ho, khule tour pe, par aapko miss bahut kiyaa hai, aapke aane ki raah bhi dekhi hai iskaa silaa milaa humeN, khushi huee.... der se reply ke liye maafi, gaoN gaya huaa tha......... Mohabbat ikhlaas gum ho gaye haiN Faqat nafrat kii fasal jaavidaaN hai bahut acha sher hai , bhayee ... bahut badhiyaa, wahi puranaa andaaj Ye kaisaa tuutaa adhuuraa jahaaN hai Ye kaisii ruuthii ghutan kii fizaaN hai ye bhi acha laga, bas zara sa.. saaf nahi ho paya mujhe khayal. roothi ghutan se kya muraad hai aapki ...!! aapkaa anaa bahut acha laga, aise hi aate raheN |
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14th February 2011, 01:36 PM
welcome back shyam sahab
aapki ghazal ne bahut asar choda hai.... jaise kalam apne aap chali ho... dil ki baat kare dilwala.... regards |
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20th February 2011, 09:56 PM
Salaam dostoN,
Mittal, Zainy, Jaanumaanu aur Zidd saheban ka shukarguzar huuN huaslaa afzai ke liye. Aap sab ke waqt aur nishandehi ke liye bahot bahot inayat. Apna khayal rakhiyega. Shabba khair o Allah Hafez, Naadaan HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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21st February 2011, 07:48 PM
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kaise hain aap? umeed hai khairiyat se honge..aapko yahaan dekh kar bahot acha laga...aapki ghazal bhi achi rahi..aapki soch dil ko bahot bhaati hai.. hamesha se.. yunhi aate rahiye aur humeiN apne khayaalatoeN se rubaroo karaate rahiye...god bless aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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